[Report This]Date: December 03 2024 4:25 AM Title: Midnight Rendezvous
Although Jenna is a side character, and although there are few size interactions with her, she's my absolute favorite. There's something about her energy and personality that I adore. The video phone call with Jenna was not only charming, it highlighted the type of person Jenna is. She's just great.
I loved how Jenna asked Ulysses to make the giant hard. I love how she asked for the sordid details of Ulysses' time with the giant couple. The entire facetime thing was just creative and fucking awesome. Their conversation was believable and fun to read. The sex at the very end was so hot. I felt so bad for Jenna! Damn you Ulysses for not charging your phone, haha!
Interesting development with Ulysses being a cuck. I'm super curious about Sam now. I mean, I can see the dude having a huge infatuation with Ulysses, but I think it's more because of Ulysses' size and his gender is inconsequential. Whatever it is, there's a lot to explore between these two.
This was a fun chapter. Getting to read more Jenna will always make me happy. And as we move forward, I'm trying to guess where it will go with Sam and Beth.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2024 4:13 PM Title: An Invitation
Chapter 4 might be the single best FM/m chapter ever written on this portal. The characters seem so real. The dialogue is excellent but what stands out are the descriptions of the characters' feelings in time.
Here are some examples of internal dialogue the likes of which I haven't read (OK, Maybe Minuss has done this also):
- A flood of fear and regret washed over him as he stared up at the giant’s nethers, making him question if he was supposed to be here right now.
- There was something strange about the way she was smiling at him now. It wasn’t friendly, or supportive, the way that she had been just a few moments ago. Though it wasn't as if he could detect any malice from her either.
- By the time that the Lilliputian realized that he had an erection of his own that was pressed firmly into the flesh of another man’s ball sack, he was far too enamored by the seductive allure of his Goddess to even care anymore.
- The feelings of confliction melt away in an instant, as he no longer cares about being pressed into another man’s sack. Instead, the only thing that was occupying his mind was the affection he was being showered with from the love of his life.
- Bethany stuck out her tongue and began to drag it up and down Samuel’s nut, coating Ulysses in her warm, sweet smelling saliva. Ballsack or no, he was in fucking heaven.
- With a simple squeeze of her hand, she had both of these men under her complete control; Samuel silently praying for release and Ulysses very much the same
- She pulled Ulysses away from the still stiff penis and brought him close to her pillowy lips so that only he could hear her. “Play along and you’ll be guaranteed as much time alone with me as you want.” Ulysses had no idea what the hell she was suggesting, but it really didn’t matter anyways.
- Bethany swung her wavy blonde hair out of her face as she peered back over her shoulder, finding her husband standing behind her confidently with his hands on his hips while Ulysses stood atop the shaft.
- The muscular walls squeezed in around him, not painfully so, but creating enough pressure that he actually felt oddly weightless.
- However, he was sorely disappointed to find that once Bethany opened her mouth to remove him, there were only a few tiny, almost unnoticeable drops of cum staining her tongue.
The standard of FM/m has risen. To date, the best I've read are from Minuss, KilledByGirl, Bildo, and BigSandwich. There's a new Sheriff in town, Omanahan88. I tried to contribute with my story "Inch Man Gets Caught in the Act." Unfortunately, I can't write as well as these folks.
A few questions about Chapter 4: Why was Bethany deliberately misinterpreting Ulysses' comments? She even made up a few on her own. What did Ulysses think about these deliberate misinterpretations?
This story has to continue. It's that good.
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks for the review! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far. I can't say that I'm familiar with the work of those other artists, so I'll have to check them out. I'm very happy with the reception that this story has received, because I was sort of expecting a lot of "Ugh, I hate M/m content" type of complaints. But so far the reception has been very pleasant, so thank you!
As far as Bethany's misinterpretations, it comes down to her desire to make sure that Samuel enjoys himself on his birthday. She knows that Ulysses is wary and a bit nervous, but so long as he intends to proceed, she wants Samuel to believe that his participation isn't just consensual, but enthusiastically so. Should Ulysses have said "stop" at any point during the action, or otherwise indicated that he was no longer willing to participate, Bethany would have intervened and put a stop to things. But until she received that signal from the Lilliput, she wanted to provide Samuel's fantasy to the best of her ability.
And Ulysses understands this to be the case. He's inexperienced, but having come this far and with the promise of paradise riding on the line, he understands what Bath means by "Put on a good show." So he twisting his words might make him feel a bit anxious, ultimately he's decided that he can trust these two to keep him safe throughout this ordeal.
Also, small note. Never sell yourself short by comparing yourself to the authors whose writing you enjoy. Just keep seeking to improve your skills and enjoy the hobby. Thanks so much for reading and stay tuned for more!!
[Report This]Date: November 27 2024 7:39 AM Title: Money Shot
Absolutely incredible chapter. Such a great job writing and describing everything.
And the tease at the end does make me hope there may be a future chapter where he goes to work with Sam for a day. Some in shoe foot play, underwear entrapment, fully inside cock vore, even anal play with him would be a really fun potential chapter if you ever decide to do that.
Regardless of what you do I'm definitely looking forward to what's next though. Amazing work
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the payoff to all the teasing! We'll see where Samuel and Ulysses relationship winds up, but right now his sights are set on claiming his prize.
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 26 2024 4:32 PM Title: Money Shot
Ahhhh ... So, uhm, there it is. The wait was worth it. Ulysses' made it through the first daunting part of his adventure, and I can see a setup for more. He's got his upcoming alone time with Beth, and all that Cryptic talk from Sam has got me wondering ... He still sounds kind and respectful of Ulysses, but that guy /really/ wants to be friends with Ulysses. I also wonder if that was a subtle job offer I heard there.
Anyway, the smut was great. The buildup was phenomenal. The urethra part sounded painful. And the insertion between giant couple is why I love this sub-genre so much.
I also love how both characters changed when filled with lust. Lots of power going to their head, especially with all the god talk. I actually liked this side of Sam, instead of being too nervous of Sam's thoughts. Bethany manipulating Ulysses' speech was also amusing.
I thought this would be the end of the story, but I'm stoked that more is coming! This clown can't wait to read more on Ulysses' adventures!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that I didn't disappoint with the big event. I wanted to toe the line of the two giants using Ulysses like a toy, without sliding into intentional cruelty. Beth might be pushing things a bit to make things perfect for Samuel, but I think she's trying to be courteous enough to give Ulysses enough of herself to make sure that he isn't feeling cheated. And same with Samuel. Its sort of like, "well as far as I know, you've sounded perfectly eager to be on this ride, so if you're into it... I'm gonna have some fun."
And my storytelling chops are rooted in that more sinister domination type stuff, so the pillow talk between Samuel and Ulysses was the commissioner indulging me a little bit and letting me include some harrowing hypotheticals. Not that Samuel would turn into some giant villain, but if he's operating under the idea that Ulysses enjoys being trapped under his nuts all day, then who knows what could happen. But we'll see what comes of it in time.
We'll see some more M/m action down the line, but Samuel's gonna take some time off screen while Ulysses gets to indulge himself with some gigantic goddess worship. Thanks so much for following the story!!
-Omanahan (aka Big Gay Clown)
Date: November 26 2024 12:58 AM Title: An Invitation
So that was very well written, I am not usually into m/m but damn if this was t hot, also that idea I a straight male would have a hard time saying no to that offer, but I would have to make sure thee wife knows, I will not be on the bad side of a giantess thank you very much, I think she would be fine with it, also some kind agreement would have to be had to keep from becoming a she. Pet.
Author's Response:
Glad that you enjoyed despite things not fitting into your typical tastes. I was also never a big fan of M/m content, but after working on some recent commissions (this one included) I've been enjoying it a lot more. I hope you stick around for more. We've got some one on one time with Bethany coming up. Thanks so much for reading!
BTW, I guess reviews are marked based on the timezone of the reviewer, so you ended up posting your comment from the future :D
[Report This]Date: November 21 2024 10:28 AM Title: First Date Jitters
These characters are so goddamn likable!
Jenna helping Ulysses out by instructing him on the basics of pleasuring a (giant) woman was a great chapter. His first thought to check out porn for research and Jenna catching him in the act was hilarious, but her letting him crawl on her shorts and practice dodging her descending ass were both extremely sexy and oddly wholesome. Their dynamic as platonic friends who are very open with one another is really enjoyable, and I loved the reassurance she offered him that she’d cure his virginity if things didn’t go well with Beth and Sam. The friendliness and sense of safety (physical safety and emotional safety) she exuded was so compelling I almost want Ulysses to strike out with the giant couple so he can take her up on the offer. Almost. Ok, after reading chapter 3, not at all, but the sentiment is what counts lol.
You did a great job of conveying how much power Bethany holds over Ulysses (and how hot both him and the audience finds that). She’s mastered the domineering personality, but I never got the sense Ulysses was ever in danger or that Beth wouldn’t quit the act if she found it made the Lilliputian uncomfortable. The size comparisons to her feet, chest, and butt were splendid, but her acting as translator got me the most. With only her able to hear Ulysses, that puts so much power in her hands, and we even see her use that by twisting Ulysses words to better please her husband. I won’t lie that gives me slight worry she may abuse that power in the heat of passion, but she’s shown herself to be caring and thoughtful enough by this point that I trust her as much as Ulysses does.
And if she’s trusting, I don’t even know what to call Samuel. “Teddy Bear” is apt. I liked the way you showed his immense strength, carrying the wine bottle and glasses and holding his wife over Ulysses on the table. Of course, those aren’t exactly impressive feats from a normal person’s perspective, but you’ve done such a good job conveying how small Ulysses is and how positively massive Beth is that you’ve sold me on these regular sized people being gods.
Sure, it was a tease by porn standards, but chapters 2 and 3 both proved incredibly hot in those moments appreciating the size of the Gulliverans (why yes, I will take more “woman scooting her massive, jiggling ass on the shelf or counter the tiny is standing on,” thank you very much). And while Chapter 2 left me somewhat hoping Ulysses can take up Jenna’s offer, I’m now much more interested to see him succeed with the couple and earn that night alone with Bethany. Great work! Can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks Terry!! I'm glad you're liking them too! I immediately fell in love with the premise when it was pitched to me and from the get go I have loved writing each and every chapter. And I'm glad that people are digging Jenna so much. She was not an original member of the cast, but I figured that someone going through such an insane, life-changing event would need someone to confide in.
I wanted Beth to really walk the line between a sultry goddess and a kind, nurturing wife and hostess. Obviously we've seen a bit more of the latter, but I think Ulysses innate submissive nature makes it really easy for her showcase how powerfully beautiful she is. Just putting her foot out for Ulysses to massage, when it inevitably devolves into some mild foot worship, it just seems to perfectly natural for a woman of her status.
And yeah, I really wanted the tiniest actions from the characters to really carry weight for Ulysses. I'm an absolute SUCKER for the imagery of a giant woman being hoisted into the air, and held overtop of a tiny. Its one of a few very specific scenarios that I really have no issue reusing in a story because I just love it that much. Especially because it teases a good buttcrush so perfectly.
Samuel was fun to write too. I haven't written a ton of giant men before so I think Samuel was a really good way for me to sort of ease into the aspects of writing M/m of M/f type content. I like the idea that he's constantly checking in on his little plaything, right up until he's ready to explode, then he just lets them fucking have it. But I won't get into spoiler territory here ;)
All in all, thanks so much for reading and for the review. Stay tuned, new chapter goes up Monday!!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2024 2:10 PM Title: First Date Jitters
God, I love this. The characters are shining so bright and are the highlight of this story thus far.
JENNA. I'm a little sad she got little airtime, but it's understandable, obviously. She's just such an awesome bro to Ulysses. Even though their relationship is platonic, I love that hint she gave in the last chapter—should Ulysses rendezvous go sour, she'd be always around for him.
SAMUEL. I love that detail you left between Beth and Ulysses about Sam being a big bear. So kind, that if he got a hunt that Ulysses wasn't into it, he'd back out, in the interest of Ulysses' feeling. I don't think I've ever read this kinda care from a biggo on this site. (I mean, I don't really read gentle stories) but I thought Sam's character here was exceptional. I can feel Ulysses's trepidation, but having someone like Sam oughta help out with his first-time experience with giants. Also, low-key hot how you described Ulysses looking at Sam's bulge while they talked. Poor dude sounds so scared!
BETH. Everything about her sounds too perfect, lol. She's a great host and the short foot scene and ass talk was nice. Interesting choice having Beth with the only one with the earpiece. But this worked out, because she talked up Ulysses and paraphrased his bashful dialog. I'm really diggin how she's putting Ulysses's feelings ahead of her own. Both her and Sam really fucking want this, but only if their tiny is 100% onboard.
ULYSSES. Tough choices. He couldn't really ask a better couple to go through with this sexual experiment. Though I wonder how ethical it is for him sleeping with his college professor. But horny brain won out! I'm glad he's open to have a mixed-size threesome like this. He shouldn't have anything to worry about. I think.
I was curious reading through this chapter ... You mention Lillies and Gullies. Are there Brobbies in this story? I've written many Swiftverse stories, so I was curious if Beth and Sam were actually tiny compared to another race of people.
The wine scene was fun. I didn't understand all the brand names. I'm guessing Beth was drinking a Merlot or something? (I refuse to google any of this, lol.) All the wine talk took me back to when I watched Sideways. But anyway, the dinner scene was a good way of getting the characters together and breaking the ice before they fuck. Ulysses's inexperience with wine was cute.
Great chapter! I'm super eager to read more. I love the characters and I love how this story is taking its time before getting to the smut. I have a feeling the payoff is gonna be just that more sweeter!
Author's Response:
Thanks again for such a thoughtful review! I’m glad that it’s not playing out too slowly. I can say that Jenna will have some more time in the limelight down the road, so no worries there.
And the commissioner was very particular about Bethany being the only one to hear Ulysses so that any trepidation on his part wouldn’t sour Samuel’s mood. She wanted him to be able to enjoy his present without any hint of guilt.
And while the university might disagree, my opinion is that they’re consenting adults so they might as well have some fun :)
I’m not really familiar with the “Swiftverse” and this is my first time using Gulliverian and Lilliputian terms, so I’ve just been using them in place of “bugs” and “tinies.” No Brobdingnans in this one.
Next chapter is a spicy one, so buckle up and get ready. Should be up in another week. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2024 1:16 AM Title: An Invitation
Yeah this is absolutely fantastic so far.
I swear your writing just gets better and better, and I'm a huge fan of the Gulli/Lilli FM/m angle as it leads to some great dynamics. Ulysses is a fun character to follow, I'm a bit of a name nerd so I'm interested to see how much that'll tie in to his character (or maybe you just picked it because it's an interesting, unusual name?), additionally, Jenna is the perfect best friend to balance him out, and let's not get started on the mouth-watering Mrs Bloomfield. I really enjoyed the scene where her and Samuel tell Ulysses their little getting to know each other story. HOT. Dialogue like that is exactly why erotica can be so powerful! Seriously great dynamic between the two of them, two giants who just love to fuck and he's stuck in the middle, love it.
Keep it up man, you're doing a great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I’m delighted that you’re enjoying it so much. I’m a big fan of your “Picked Clean” story that you posted recently. And going through your collection, seems like a lot of your stories are right up my alley. I’ve got some reading of my own to do!
Ulysses was named by the commissioner, so nothing in particular regarding the story itself.
Thanks for the kind words!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2024 5:24 PM Title: First Date Jitters
Amazing! Very fun story so far. Favorite scene so far personally was the one where he was pantomiming doggy style and Jenna laughed and pantomimed being fucked in his direction.
Random but I have a question. Are Lillis durable? Or do they just conveniently survive rough sex between Gullis for plot purposes?
Author's Response:
Thank you! I loved that scene as well. I liked the imagery of a giantess twerking in front of a tiny, not realizing just how big her ass is when it's right up in his face. As far as durability goe, I don't know if there's standard rules for Lilliputians or Gulliverians. They're terms that the commissioner wanted me to use for this one. In this particular world, Lilliputs are relatively more durable than their massive counterparts, but not indestructible. Hope that helps!
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2024 9:34 AM Title: First Date Jitters
Was a great chapter to really get some action started, but fully lead into the main event beginning. Worshipping her feet at first was fun how you did the scene. And I am definitely looking forward to seeing the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I had so much fun with these characters and I absolutely love casual foot worship. Things get very spicy next chapter, stay tuned!
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2024 5:02 PM Title: A Student of the Game
HOLY SHIT! Are you writing this story for me? This scenario is too perfect, and the cast so far are likeable cool people. And on top of everything, it’s set in the Lilly universe, but one that doesn’t seem so dangerous to them. It seems like the Gulliverian are respectful to their tiny cousins and not out to kill them, and that’s great to read. I’m already falling in love with your world-building.
Bethany had me intrigued from the very beginning. Her physical descriptions painted a vivid visual of the professor, and I liked what I saw. When she revealed her plan to Ulysses, and essentially introduced the plot of the story—yeah, I fell in love with her, haha. I don’t shy away from FM/m, M/f, or even M/m stories. In fact, there are just too few stories, and fewer authors are willing to tackle M/m interactions. So, upon reading that Beth wanted to “give” Ulysses to her husband as a kink gift, and that Ulysses wasn’t repulsed by it, really had me rooting for the guy. This scenario is hot. I cannot stress this enough. Hot. Having Ulysses worship her husband schlong, BUT, Beth explaining her husband is a big teddy bear, creating the assumption he’ll be gentle, instantly hooked me to this story.
And what’s so refreshing about all of this is how the bigger people ask for Ulysses’ consent before doing things with them. I love violent stories as much as the other guy, but reading these gentle interactions with Ulysses is just—refreshing. I don’t know how to put another way.
Jenna! Wow. What a noble character. The sacrifices she made to accommodate Ulysses shines to the person she is. She doesn’t demean Ulysses. The light teasing when talking about the professor was cute. And in the second chapter—perfect! I love how she managed Ulysses watching porn. I feel like any other size story would’ve had Jenna tease the ever-living shit out of Ulysses, but she didn’t do that here. Instead, she went out and had a conversation and gave life lessons to Ulysses. She’s awesome.
The interaction they had with the chair and Ulysses climbing her pussy was fucking hot. I really thought this was going to get really dirty, with her pulling off her shorts, but Jenna’s character surprised me when she showed more restraint than I did. She made the right call, and her offer to help Ulysses lose his virginity was fucking cute.
The conversation they had about her big dicked friend, to her calling him and making wild gestures about fucking him … again, this was so creative and awesome to read. Ulysses wasn’t jealous, but happy for Jenna. He wasn’t possessive or talked down to Jenna’s impending date. These two are so good for each other. I love their relationship and reading about them. I’ll also say here that I love how Ulysses is grossed out about all this dick talk. If anything, he’s intrigued and has an open mind. I love his attitude going forward.
So, yeah. Okay, story, I guess. LOL. There are only a handful of stories that I eagerly anticipate updates, and this one jumped to the number one spot. I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for writing and sharing this!
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I saw your comment on the discord about smut stories being a single man living in a world populated by nothing but women and I laughed. Immediately I thought back on older stories I wrote and how I never wrote M/m content. But as I develop my writing, I'm trying to be more broadly inclusive of more types of content and I definitely think it ultimately makes for a better story. I'm pretty proud of this one and I've had a ton of fun writing it so far. The commissioner has been super supportive and lets me just sort of take my tangents and run with them.
Thanks so much for the kind review and I hope it lives up to expectations!
[Report This]Date: November 05 2024 3:56 AM Title: A Student of the Game
Loved the second chapter. I love the tease of him going up someone's ass. And hope it happens whether it's with the couple or his roommate
Can't wait for the actual interaction with the couple though
Author's Response:
Ulysses meets up with his pretty professor in the next chapter and things stay pretty hot and heavy for a little while. And is it teasing or forecasting? Who can tell :)
Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: November 04 2024 6:41 PM Title: An Invitation
This story has officially caught my eye. Very good start, can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it, I hope it exceeds expectations! Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 4:30 PM Title: A Student of the Game
Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see what is going to happen once Ulysses agrees to go with Bethany. Also, based on this chapter, I hope we get to see some more action between Jenna and Ulysses. This looks like its going to be a great story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, I'm glad you're getting excited. I can say that the chapter I'm writing right now features Jenna a bit more so stay tuned for that.
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2024 8:30 PM Title: An Invitation
Gentle giant couple stories aren't all that common, so I'm really excited for this one. While not containing any actual smut, the first chapter was already captivating. The characters introduced all seem very likeable, and I'm curious what role Jenna and Carson will play down the line (assuming they're involved further, Ulysses and Beth's roles in the story are comparatively obvious). I love the emphasis on how godlike Beth and Jenna are compared to the quarter-inch tall Ulysses, and the constant fading in and out of daydreams was really fun. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
So glad to hear it! I very much loved writing about these characters so I'm really hoping that becomes clear once we get into the meat of the story. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2024 7:20 AM Title: An Invitation
Great setup and very much looking forward to this. I love giant couples
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it, because there will giant couples aplenty here. Thanks so much for reading!