[Report This]Date: November 21 2024 10:28 AM Title: First Date Jitters
These characters are so goddamn likable!
Jenna helping Ulysses out by instructing him on the basics of pleasuring a (giant) woman was a great chapter. His first thought to check out porn for research and Jenna catching him in the act was hilarious, but her letting him crawl on her shorts and practice dodging her descending ass were both extremely sexy and oddly wholesome. Their dynamic as platonic friends who are very open with one another is really enjoyable, and I loved the reassurance she offered him that she’d cure his virginity if things didn’t go well with Beth and Sam. The friendliness and sense of safety (physical safety and emotional safety) she exuded was so compelling I almost want Ulysses to strike out with the giant couple so he can take her up on the offer. Almost. Ok, after reading chapter 3, not at all, but the sentiment is what counts lol.
You did a great job of conveying how much power Bethany holds over Ulysses (and how hot both him and the audience finds that). She’s mastered the domineering personality, but I never got the sense Ulysses was ever in danger or that Beth wouldn’t quit the act if she found it made the Lilliputian uncomfortable. The size comparisons to her feet, chest, and butt were splendid, but her acting as translator got me the most. With only her able to hear Ulysses, that puts so much power in her hands, and we even see her use that by twisting Ulysses words to better please her husband. I won’t lie that gives me slight worry she may abuse that power in the heat of passion, but she’s shown herself to be caring and thoughtful enough by this point that I trust her as much as Ulysses does.
And if she’s trusting, I don’t even know what to call Samuel. “Teddy Bear” is apt. I liked the way you showed his immense strength, carrying the wine bottle and glasses and holding his wife over Ulysses on the table. Of course, those aren’t exactly impressive feats from a normal person’s perspective, but you’ve done such a good job conveying how small Ulysses is and how positively massive Beth is that you’ve sold me on these regular sized people being gods.
Sure, it was a tease by porn standards, but chapters 2 and 3 both proved incredibly hot in those moments appreciating the size of the Gulliverans (why yes, I will take more “woman scooting her massive, jiggling ass on the shelf or counter the tiny is standing on,” thank you very much). And while Chapter 2 left me somewhat hoping Ulysses can take up Jenna’s offer, I’m now much more interested to see him succeed with the couple and earn that night alone with Bethany. Great work! Can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks Terry!! I'm glad you're liking them too! I immediately fell in love with the premise when it was pitched to me and from the get go I have loved writing each and every chapter. And I'm glad that people are digging Jenna so much. She was not an original member of the cast, but I figured that someone going through such an insane, life-changing event would need someone to confide in.
I wanted Beth to really walk the line between a sultry goddess and a kind, nurturing wife and hostess. Obviously we've seen a bit more of the latter, but I think Ulysses innate submissive nature makes it really easy for her showcase how powerfully beautiful she is. Just putting her foot out for Ulysses to massage, when it inevitably devolves into some mild foot worship, it just seems to perfectly natural for a woman of her status.
And yeah, I really wanted the tiniest actions from the characters to really carry weight for Ulysses. I'm an absolute SUCKER for the imagery of a giant woman being hoisted into the air, and held overtop of a tiny. Its one of a few very specific scenarios that I really have no issue reusing in a story because I just love it that much. Especially because it teases a good buttcrush so perfectly.
Samuel was fun to write too. I haven't written a ton of giant men before so I think Samuel was a really good way for me to sort of ease into the aspects of writing M/m of M/f type content. I like the idea that he's constantly checking in on his little plaything, right up until he's ready to explode, then he just lets them fucking have it. But I won't get into spoiler territory here ;)
All in all, thanks so much for reading and for the review. Stay tuned, new chapter goes up Monday!!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2024 2:10 PM Title: First Date Jitters
God, I love this. The characters are shining so bright and are the highlight of this story thus far.
JENNA. I'm a little sad she got little airtime, but it's understandable, obviously. She's just such an awesome bro to Ulysses. Even though their relationship is platonic, I love that hint she gave in the last chapter—should Ulysses rendezvous go sour, she'd be always around for him.
SAMUEL. I love that detail you left between Beth and Ulysses about Sam being a big bear. So kind, that if he got a hunt that Ulysses wasn't into it, he'd back out, in the interest of Ulysses' feeling. I don't think I've ever read this kinda care from a biggo on this site. (I mean, I don't really read gentle stories) but I thought Sam's character here was exceptional. I can feel Ulysses's trepidation, but having someone like Sam oughta help out with his first-time experience with giants. Also, low-key hot how you described Ulysses looking at Sam's bulge while they talked. Poor dude sounds so scared!
BETH. Everything about her sounds too perfect, lol. She's a great host and the short foot scene and ass talk was nice. Interesting choice having Beth with the only one with the earpiece. But this worked out, because she talked up Ulysses and paraphrased his bashful dialog. I'm really diggin how she's putting Ulysses's feelings ahead of her own. Both her and Sam really fucking want this, but only if their tiny is 100% onboard.
ULYSSES. Tough choices. He couldn't really ask a better couple to go through with this sexual experiment. Though I wonder how ethical it is for him sleeping with his college professor. But horny brain won out! I'm glad he's open to have a mixed-size threesome like this. He shouldn't have anything to worry about. I think.
I was curious reading through this chapter ... You mention Lillies and Gullies. Are there Brobbies in this story? I've written many Swiftverse stories, so I was curious if Beth and Sam were actually tiny compared to another race of people.
The wine scene was fun. I didn't understand all the brand names. I'm guessing Beth was drinking a Merlot or something? (I refuse to google any of this, lol.) All the wine talk took me back to when I watched Sideways. But anyway, the dinner scene was a good way of getting the characters together and breaking the ice before they fuck. Ulysses's inexperience with wine was cute.
Great chapter! I'm super eager to read more. I love the characters and I love how this story is taking its time before getting to the smut. I have a feeling the payoff is gonna be just that more sweeter!
Author's Response:
Thanks again for such a thoughtful review! I’m glad that it’s not playing out too slowly. I can say that Jenna will have some more time in the limelight down the road, so no worries there.
And the commissioner was very particular about Bethany being the only one to hear Ulysses so that any trepidation on his part wouldn’t sour Samuel’s mood. She wanted him to be able to enjoy his present without any hint of guilt.
And while the university might disagree, my opinion is that they’re consenting adults so they might as well have some fun :)
I’m not really familiar with the “Swiftverse” and this is my first time using Gulliverian and Lilliputian terms, so I’ve just been using them in place of “bugs” and “tinies.” No Brobdingnans in this one.
Next chapter is a spicy one, so buckle up and get ready. Should be up in another week. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2024 1:16 AM Title: An Invitation
Yeah this is absolutely fantastic so far.
I swear your writing just gets better and better, and I'm a huge fan of the Gulli/Lilli FM/m angle as it leads to some great dynamics. Ulysses is a fun character to follow, I'm a bit of a name nerd so I'm interested to see how much that'll tie in to his character (or maybe you just picked it because it's an interesting, unusual name?), additionally, Jenna is the perfect best friend to balance him out, and let's not get started on the mouth-watering Mrs Bloomfield. I really enjoyed the scene where her and Samuel tell Ulysses their little getting to know each other story. HOT. Dialogue like that is exactly why erotica can be so powerful! Seriously great dynamic between the two of them, two giants who just love to fuck and he's stuck in the middle, love it.
Keep it up man, you're doing a great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I’m delighted that you’re enjoying it so much. I’m a big fan of your “Picked Clean” story that you posted recently. And going through your collection, seems like a lot of your stories are right up my alley. I’ve got some reading of my own to do!
Ulysses was named by the commissioner, so nothing in particular regarding the story itself.
Thanks for the kind words!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2024 5:24 PM Title: First Date Jitters
Amazing! Very fun story so far. Favorite scene so far personally was the one where he was pantomiming doggy style and Jenna laughed and pantomimed being fucked in his direction.
Random but I have a question. Are Lillis durable? Or do they just conveniently survive rough sex between Gullis for plot purposes?
Author's Response:
Thank you! I loved that scene as well. I liked the imagery of a giantess twerking in front of a tiny, not realizing just how big her ass is when it's right up in his face. As far as durability goe, I don't know if there's standard rules for Lilliputians or Gulliverians. They're terms that the commissioner wanted me to use for this one. In this particular world, Lilliputs are relatively more durable than their massive counterparts, but not indestructible. Hope that helps!
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2024 9:34 AM Title: First Date Jitters
Was a great chapter to really get some action started, but fully lead into the main event beginning. Worshipping her feet at first was fun how you did the scene. And I am definitely looking forward to seeing the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I had so much fun with these characters and I absolutely love casual foot worship. Things get very spicy next chapter, stay tuned!
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2024 5:02 PM Title: A Student of the Game
HOLY SHIT! Are you writing this story for me? This scenario is too perfect, and the cast so far are likeable cool people. And on top of everything, it’s set in the Lilly universe, but one that doesn’t seem so dangerous to them. It seems like the Gulliverian are respectful to their tiny cousins and not out to kill them, and that’s great to read. I’m already falling in love with your world-building.
Bethany had me intrigued from the very beginning. Her physical descriptions painted a vivid visual of the professor, and I liked what I saw. When she revealed her plan to Ulysses, and essentially introduced the plot of the story—yeah, I fell in love with her, haha. I don’t shy away from FM/m, M/f, or even M/m stories. In fact, there are just too few stories, and fewer authors are willing to tackle M/m interactions. So, upon reading that Beth wanted to “give” Ulysses to her husband as a kink gift, and that Ulysses wasn’t repulsed by it, really had me rooting for the guy. This scenario is hot. I cannot stress this enough. Hot. Having Ulysses worship her husband schlong, BUT, Beth explaining her husband is a big teddy bear, creating the assumption he’ll be gentle, instantly hooked me to this story.
And what’s so refreshing about all of this is how the bigger people ask for Ulysses’ consent before doing things with them. I love violent stories as much as the other guy, but reading these gentle interactions with Ulysses is just—refreshing. I don’t know how to put another way.
Jenna! Wow. What a noble character. The sacrifices she made to accommodate Ulysses shines to the person she is. She doesn’t demean Ulysses. The light teasing when talking about the professor was cute. And in the second chapter—perfect! I love how she managed Ulysses watching porn. I feel like any other size story would’ve had Jenna tease the ever-living shit out of Ulysses, but she didn’t do that here. Instead, she went out and had a conversation and gave life lessons to Ulysses. She’s awesome.
The interaction they had with the chair and Ulysses climbing her pussy was fucking hot. I really thought this was going to get really dirty, with her pulling off her shorts, but Jenna’s character surprised me when she showed more restraint than I did. She made the right call, and her offer to help Ulysses lose his virginity was fucking cute.
The conversation they had about her big dicked friend, to her calling him and making wild gestures about fucking him … again, this was so creative and awesome to read. Ulysses wasn’t jealous, but happy for Jenna. He wasn’t possessive or talked down to Jenna’s impending date. These two are so good for each other. I love their relationship and reading about them. I’ll also say here that I love how Ulysses is grossed out about all this dick talk. If anything, he’s intrigued and has an open mind. I love his attitude going forward.
So, yeah. Okay, story, I guess. LOL. There are only a handful of stories that I eagerly anticipate updates, and this one jumped to the number one spot. I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for writing and sharing this!
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I saw your comment on the discord about smut stories being a single man living in a world populated by nothing but women and I laughed. Immediately I thought back on older stories I wrote and how I never wrote M/m content. But as I develop my writing, I'm trying to be more broadly inclusive of more types of content and I definitely think it ultimately makes for a better story. I'm pretty proud of this one and I've had a ton of fun writing it so far. The commissioner has been super supportive and lets me just sort of take my tangents and run with them.
Thanks so much for the kind review and I hope it lives up to expectations!
[Report This]Date: November 05 2024 3:56 AM Title: A Student of the Game
Loved the second chapter. I love the tease of him going up someone's ass. And hope it happens whether it's with the couple or his roommate
Can't wait for the actual interaction with the couple though
Author's Response:
Ulysses meets up with his pretty professor in the next chapter and things stay pretty hot and heavy for a little while. And is it teasing or forecasting? Who can tell :)
Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: November 04 2024 6:41 PM Title: An Invitation
This story has officially caught my eye. Very good start, can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it, I hope it exceeds expectations! Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 4:30 PM Title: A Student of the Game
Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see what is going to happen once Ulysses agrees to go with Bethany. Also, based on this chapter, I hope we get to see some more action between Jenna and Ulysses. This looks like its going to be a great story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, I'm glad you're getting excited. I can say that the chapter I'm writing right now features Jenna a bit more so stay tuned for that.
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2024 8:30 PM Title: An Invitation
Gentle giant couple stories aren't all that common, so I'm really excited for this one. While not containing any actual smut, the first chapter was already captivating. The characters introduced all seem very likeable, and I'm curious what role Jenna and Carson will play down the line (assuming they're involved further, Ulysses and Beth's roles in the story are comparatively obvious). I love the emphasis on how godlike Beth and Jenna are compared to the quarter-inch tall Ulysses, and the constant fading in and out of daydreams was really fun. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
So glad to hear it! I very much loved writing about these characters so I'm really hoping that becomes clear once we get into the meat of the story. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2024 7:20 AM Title: An Invitation
Great setup and very much looking forward to this. I love giant couples
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it, because there will giant couples aplenty here. Thanks so much for reading!