Reviewer: Baelphor Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2024 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love the setup and the characters but I do wish the sections about the actual crushing were a little bit longer.  

Which is to say the only complaint I've really got is that I want read more of your stuff regarding the tenants' bodies and their effects on the mites. The change in humidity before they get sat on for instance,  or if they can identify anything else that got crushed under him while he was out and about that left a recognizable stain or an actual body that he just didn't notice or bother to sweep off the seat of his pants or dig out of a wedgie when his shorts rode up.  

Again,  loved it.  Just want more deets on these lovely events.