[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 10:26 PM Title: A human Cushion?
Glad to see a return to this story, and this pacing. I really loved this chapter. His curiosity got the better of him that’s for sure. It’s a safe rule of thumb, if you see a giantess assprint in a couch, Dont sit in in unless youre looking to get squashed! (Maybe he was…) I also like how after he got sat on he tried to play back at Jen with the wedgie, obviously it didn’t work the way he wanted too but I liked how he was comfortable enough to try. I think that will send the wrong message to his aunt about how playful he is and I think he will end up with more embarrassing moments than he would bargain for, and Im very excited to see that. And I can not wait for the next chapter, I love a bath scene with a giantess like this. I think Jen is gonna have a lot of fun taking care of her nephew the next few days!
[Report This]Date: November 17 2024 5:12 PM Title: A human Cushion?
Great to see ya back. Great chp, was expecting some unintentional face sitting, but think it worked well without. Perhaps an opportunity for it in the next chp. Jerry slipping under a tipsy Jen in the bath, and running out of air, has no choice but to use the only air pocket available in his position beneath her, despite how tainted the air in that place may be. Regardless if the idea is used, looking forward to what's to come.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Funnily enough I'm thinking something along those lines for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 10 2024 2:34 AM Title: Josie and Jerry
Hope all is going well. Looking forward to what you decide to do with chp 10, happy to see the slow burn continue.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah I'm taking my time for now, just tossing ideas around for a bit!
[Report This]Date: November 03 2024 4:05 AM Title: Josie and Jerry
Love this story so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: November 02 2024 5:05 PM Title: Josie and Jerry
Redoing chapter 10! I think I'm gonna slow things down a bit, I feel I'm rushing too much. As always, thanks for reading, and please leave suggestions and criticism guys:)
[Report This]Date: November 01 2024 2:27 PM Title: Jerry, Jen, and the start of his Investigations
Very nice, living with two giant sexy Milfs is awesome! I wish to see all Milfs in the city grow huge and sexy
Author's Response:
Giant milfs are the best
Date: October 31 2024 3:31 PM Title: A new day dawns
great chapter. id love to chat
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Feel free to leave suggestions and ideas
Date: October 31 2024 5:09 AM Title: Jerry, Jen, and the start of his Investigations
Happy to see fart begins to show up. Though I prefer domination on purpose, this is still wonderful work
Author's Response:
Thank you! Honestly it's a first for me to try and write this sort of stuff, so it's kind of a learning process!
Date: October 30 2024 9:26 PM Title: Jerry, Jen, and the start of his Investigations
this story is going the way i wish shrunken son on writingdotcom would go with lauren and her tiny son.
i prefer the m in F/m to be much smaller, like half inch or less, but hell, this is great, and it ain't my story.
Author's Response:
Funnily enough, Jerry will be that small at some point! I'm playing around with quite a few ideas at the moment, just figuring out how to implement them. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 30 2024 9:05 PM Title: Jerry, Jen, and the start of his Investigations
Oh where oh where could this lead. Great chp again, was surprised to see Mom depart, but can only imagine the hijinks Aunt will get up to, plus the abundance of "affection" that Mom will want to show when she returns. Looking forward to the next installment of little Jerry's life.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah I needed an excuse for Jerry to end up temporarily alone. It'll hopefully make sense in the next chapter!
Date: October 30 2024 6:31 AM Title: Josie and Jerry
Love a good giantess mom/small son story.
I would like to explore the much bigger physical reactions of the mother overwhelming the son. Like breathing, cumming, farting and sneezing for example (i love everything involving lung capacity and a huge sneeze from the mother... maybe on an unaware shrinking part... would be amazing).
Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I'll for sure be trying to work these themes into the story, not sure when. May have been off more than I can chew, but we'll see, lol.
[Report This]Date: October 28 2024 9:32 PM Title: A new day dawns
[The Difference Between Natural Tiny Men and Artificial Tiny Men]
{Surface Level}:
[The surface level differences can be identified as that Artificial Tinies would have the appearance of a scaled-down version of a full-grown male while their natural counterpart is known to have an adolescent appearance that can be recognized through their Far-Sightedness and effeminate characteristics that have caused many to confuse them for young girls before their Genes begin to develop after intense exposure to an Amazon’s Pheromones]
{Genetic Identification}:
[It has been found that an Artificial Tiny lacks the needed Pheromones for an Amazon to form a Symbiotic Bond unlike a natural Tiny whose pheromones alert the Amazon’s body that it’s a part of itself by having a Tiny’s genetic signature changed to match its Host while if a Artificial Tiny who lacks these pheromones would be considered a threat to the body with the tiny either being expelled or assimilated entirely into the Amazon’s flesh at the cost of the artificial tiny life.]
Author's Response:
Mind reader! I'm definitely using this, hahah.
[Report This]Date: October 28 2024 6:44 PM Title: Josie and Jerry
Growing Women are much better than shrinking men, men should stay normal size while women grow bigger and taller for every place and we see them expanding and growing every day especially for Moms and Milfs!
Author's Response:
It's definitely giving me ideas for the next story!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2024 6:25 PM Title: A new day dawns
Giant Milfs and Moms are so lovely and perfect!
I wish to see all moms and milfs in the world grow big and tall and sexy
Author's Response:
Yes they are! I'm still debating whether to stick with shrinking the men, or growing the women as well. I'll have to see what I can come up with :)
[Report This]Date: October 27 2024 8:36 PM Title: Josie and Jerry
It was mine...I see how it is. lol
Great build up, can see many ways Jerry's discovery could lead to some fun situations, specifically in regards to my previous review. As always, great work, looking forward to the next chp.
or something along those line, don't remember exactly what I said.
Author's Response:
Perfect, lol thank you. I'm currently debating how to go forwards, possibly with Jerry and Jenny being alone for a chat, something like that. I do want to do a lot of unaware, mistaken for an object type themes though!
Date: October 27 2024 8:13 PM Title: Josie and Jerry
Just deleted someone's comment by mistake!! Apologies, friend lol, I was tyring to edit my own comment!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2024 5:45 PM Title: A hint at the future
Why not reply to me!?
Author's Response:
Apologies, I thought i did! Mom and Aunt may gain dome thickness in the near future, I'm still throwing ideas around!
Date: October 27 2024 2:39 PM Title: Josie and Jerry
Loving this keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Doing my best, haha
[Report This]Date: October 27 2024 7:09 AM Title: A hint at the future
Yes, yes, yes! And we're very much looking forward to that future.
Great story, Squished!
Author's Response:
Appreciate it! I'm glad people seem to be enjoying my amateurish ramblings lol.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2024 12:45 AM Title: Josie and Jerry
Really loving how the story is going so far and here’s an image of how I imagine Aunt Jen for the moment.
The introduction of shrinking technology and how it’s used as a punishment leads me to the possibility of those like Jen who are given Tiny Row Inmates who are marked with a bar code tattoo upon their back with their captors being considered Judge, jury, and Execution in that they can decide whether their inmates will live to be considered for a stay of execution or led to pay for their sins by becoming additional nutrients for their wardens bodies to absolve themselves of their past crimes.
As for how Jerry’s going to feel about his Aunt’s tiny toy would probably be him at first not wanting to think about it to much because he’s aware of the concept of Tiny Row but was unaware of the Shrinking Punishment until now and is just waiting for his Aunt Jen to explain things to him about her role in the legal system with a small division of her company is in charge of handling individuals who have done things that jeopardizes peaceful coexistences between Tinies and Amazons.
To summarize my viewpoint on how things are going would be that you’re doing okay with your current pacing but could possibly throw in some under utilized tropes such as a few chapters where Jerry shrinks so small that Josie thinks the only safe place for him is inside the milk ducts on her nipples and or possibly having him spend a day on either Jen or Josie’s Clit with jerry slowly becoming more stimulated by being submerged in their pheromones while whoever has him becomes more sensitive due Tinies released their own pheromones when highly stimulated. Those are my suggestion and I hope to hear a reply back from you soon and please keep this story FF/m unless you decide to include Futa because I personally like my story to contain Female Giantess in the dominant role over a male tiny but it’s your story and I’m simply a reader.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback! The prisoner punishment system you've described is pretty much what I have in mind, with a few differences of course. The pheromones theme is defiantly something I want to play with, and I was thinking of having Jerry alternate between different sizes randomly, until Josie learns to control him. But we'll see! At the moment I'm just thinking up scenarios that I like, hahah.