Reviewer: Yeo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2024 1:04 PM Title: Josie and Jerry

Great start… 

I’m looking forward to this continuing, do you have an update schedule, is the plot all planned out or not yet?

The dynamic between the two is going to be really interesting to explore, (really hope Josie doesn’t go from loving Jerry like a son to not seeing him as a person but as a sex toy/slave that needs to serve her whims regardless of his feelings just because he shrunk).

It was a great idea to give Josie a mischievous personality as it really allows for her to tease and prank/use him in a playful manner when Jerry shrinks, ‘while accidentally going too far’ and not change the dynamics that much. If you add a drinking habit drunken shenanigans and bad choices would also be an option.

What do you think of adding mistaken identity to the tags as well? I.e Josie could know what Jerry is (shrunken human) but not whom he is, and uses him as such.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your thoughts! I don't have a strict schedule, but I do aim for weekly, or at least bi monthly updates, life permitting. I can promise you right now, Josie won't ever see her son as a slave! Their relationship will remain solid, not counting some other "changes" wink wink.

She does enjoy her booze, and there for sure will be some tipsy shenanigans coming up! As for mistaken identity.. I can honestly say, its not an idea that's ever occurred to me! It's interesting though, and I'll certainly be giving it some thought.