Reviewer: Squished Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2024 8:13 PM Title: Josie and Jerry

Just deleted someone's comment by mistake!! Apologies, friend lol, I was tyring to edit my own comment!

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2024 2:39 PM Title: Josie and Jerry

Loving this keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Doing my best, haha

Reviewer: magnusking Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2024 12:45 AM Title: Josie and Jerry

Really loving how the story is going so far and here’s an image of how I imagine Aunt Jen for the moment.The introduction of shrinking technology and how it’s used as a punishment leads me to the possibility of those like Jen who are given Tiny Row Inmates who are marked with a bar code tattoo upon their back with their captors being considered Judge,  jury, and Execution in that they can decide whether their inmates will live to be considered for a stay of execution or led to pay for their sins by becoming additional nutrients for their wardens bodies to absolve themselves of their past crimes.As for how Jerry’s going to feel about his Aunt’s tiny toy would probably be him at first not wanting to think about it to much because he’s aware of the concept of Tiny Row but was unaware of the Shrinking Punishment until now and is just waiting for his Aunt Jen to explain things to him about her role in the legal system with a small division of her company is in charge of handling individuals who have done things that jeopardizes peaceful coexistences between Tinies and Amazons.To summarize my viewpoint on how things are going would be that you’re doing okay with your current pacing but could possibly throw in some under utilized tropes such as a few chapters where Jerry shrinks so small that Josie thinks the only safe place for him is inside the milk ducts on her nipples and or possibly having him spend a day on either Jen or Josie’s Clit with jerry slowly becoming more stimulated by being submerged in their pheromones while whoever has him becomes more sensitive due Tinies released their own pheromones when highly stimulated. Those are my suggestion and I hope to hear a reply back from you soon and please keep this story FF/m unless you decide to include Futa because I personally like my story to contain Female Giantess in the dominant role over a male tiny but it’s your story and I’m simply a reader.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback! The prisoner punishment system you've described is pretty much what I have in mind, with a few differences of course. The pheromones theme is defiantly something I want to play with, and I was thinking of having Jerry alternate between different sizes randomly, until Josie learns to control him. But we'll see! At the moment I'm just thinking up scenarios that I like, hahah.

Reviewer: JD1910 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2024 2:03 PM Title: Trouble sleeping?

Great story so far, looking forward to what antics Mom and Aunt get up to at poor Jerry's expense. Perhaps once Jerry begins his dwindling, but before the dynamic between them is changed to much, there could be a situation where Aunt and Mom party again, and one or both would have a case of mistaken identity with Jerry, but not confusing him for someone else, but rather something else.

Regardless if the suggestion shows up later, looking forward to the next chapters. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Appreciate the kind words. I'm definitely planning pretty much the exact scenario you've suggested, I'm just mulling over the details. I'll probably go back and forth until I find something that seems to make sense :)

Reviewer: magnusking Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2024 6:55 PM Title: Josie, Jen and Jerry. The three J's.

Happy to see a fresh chapter and can’t wait for the next one and also have you considered the possibility of them developing a symbiotic mutation where their bodies adjust to fit the subconscious desires of the other the stronger their spiritual and physical bonds become. Example: Josie has a subconscious Shota fetish and deep love for cats; the results would be Jerry slowly gaining a more androgynous appearance and his subconscious behavior becoming more akin to a feline. The process would go both ways but Josie would be more dominant in how she effects Jerry while he could only effect her in ways the her Subconscious mind would agree with.

Author's Response:

All interesting ideas! I do plan on exploring quite a few themes, including a sort of symbiosis between Jerry and Joise. What that's going to entail, I'm not totally sure yet, but we'll see what happens as the story develops!

Reviewer: Ryan217 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2024 11:20 AM Title: Josie, Jen and Jerry. The three J's.

Excellent story, thanks very much for updating so regularly. 

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to hear it's finding an audience.

Reviewer: hYtizE Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2024 4:10 PM Title: Play time and cuddles with Mom

Very cool story so far, I love the slow burn approach. I'm really glad you decided to rewrite this chapter, I think you've still got lots of fertile soil to use before launching the story out of a cannon. I had an idea for a scene so I'm just going to write it out.. sorry I suck at brief outlines, and  I'm sure you have plenty of scenes already to cover so just feel free to take whatever fits your story. Here goes..

I think it would be really cool to have Josie and Jen venture shopping somewhere, taking Jerry along with them. He's pretty bored as he walks around hearing the two amazons pick up items and discuss if they think it would look good on them for nearly an hour. Eventually, the ladies want to try some items on and head to the changing rooms. Obviously there are lots of options here but I think it would be really interesting to have him wait outside. As he sits there he see's the ladies legs as they shed their clothes and try on several items. A moment of self reflection arises again, he can't help but be drawn towards the idea of peeking under the door. He fends off the idea just before he notices another very pretty lady appear in the changing room hallway and nods at him sweetly before searching for a room she can use to try on her items. He is thankful she did not catch him peeking under the door, but then he realizes he knows her! She is Anthony's mom, one of his friends! He and his other friends had always teased Anthony for having a total MILF for a mom. Jerry watches her enter a changing room and close the door. He may have mixed feelings about peeking at his own mom and his aunt but.. he would be crazy to pass up an opportunity to spy on Anthony's mom. He gives in and looks under the door, his heart is racing as he sees her removing her tight blue jeans. The world seems to move in slow motion as she peeled them off her soft skin and gingerly set them to the side. Jerry's dick was so hard his whole stomach seemed to be tumbling. He watched as she removed her shirt over her head and tossed it aside, revealing a very sexy set of sheer lace lingerie. Then.. something caught Jerry's eye as he studied the front of her sheer see-thru panties... a tiny head with blonde hair peering out to the world with thick pubic hair strands at his back. Oh my god it's Anthony. He recognized his friend immediately. Jerry froze as if he was looking directly at a ghost.

He could see Anthony's face and hands gripping the material of his mother's panties tightly.. of course he probably doesn't want to slip down any further.. currently he was holding his head just above the front seam of his mother's panty gusset. Anthony's mom stood up straight and looked herself over in the mirror as she reached up and began tying her hair up in a sloppy ponytail. Not paying any mind to her tiny son peering out of her panties like a pet in a cage. Does she even know he is there? Maybe not Jerry wondered. Still he knew his entire friend group would kill to be where Anthony currently was. 

Then Anthony spotted Jerry peering in and his eyes bulged, his face went frantic, he started pulling himself up and waving his arms. Jerry watched as his friend was clearly trying to tell him something. He watched intently as Anthony peered upwards to make sure he hadn't given himself way to his mother looming above, currently interested only in choosing which ensemble to try on first as she flipped through the clothing hangers. Anthony couldn't help himself though as he moved his hands wildly trying to write letters on the fabric front of his mother's underwear. H.. E.. L.. Just then his mother had apparently grown tired of his wiggling around and turned her attention downwards to her panties and their tiny prisoner. A shadow formed over Anthony as she leaned over and pointed her finger at him sternly.. then for good measure, she tugged at the edges of the fabric of her panty front and Jerry watched as his friend lost his grip and his panicked face disappeared below the seam of her panties.. further down.. into the gusset below his smokeshow mom's pussy. Jerry gulped so hard his throat hurt. She was VERY aware that Anthony was there. He watched as the Amazon stood back up and turned her attention back to her clothing options. Jerry could see a tiny bump wiggling around in her panties.. that part of her panties was obviously more damp than the rest of the material.. My god Jerry wasn't quite sure what to think at that moment... 

Just then Jerry heard one of the door latches begin to move, and he forced his body into moving back towards his place on the bench as fast as humanly possible before his mother emerged wearing some of the clothes she had picked out. She asked Jerry for his opinion.. Jerry's heart was racing still but he was able to mutter a few words of approval, unconvinced she decided to wait and ask Jen. 

After several more minutes the group was ready to leave, Jerry noticed that Anthony's mom had decided to leave soon after and ended up standing behind them at the checkout counter. His mom recognized her and gave a her a hug, quickly introducing her sister Jen. Then Anthony's mom looked down at Jerry and covered her mouth from embarrassment. She had not even recognized him! The world slowed again as the Amazon slowly squatted down to his level, Jerry could only watch her blue jean covered waist as she bent down. The material groaned and stretched below her, Jerry couldn't believe that his friend was just behind there.. tucked away down below the waistline of her tight blue jeans, inside his own mother's panties. He could probably hear them talking.. Jerry snapped his attention back towards her face as she greeted him sweetly again and rubbing his shoulder. She looked Jerry right in the eyes and tells him she is sorry he caught the shrinking virus, but at least it looks like he got a light dose of it.. some boys have shrunk way smaller. She smiled softly and then stands back up towering over him again. Jerry couldn't  help himself, he just stared directly at her blue jean covered crotch. No movement, he thought to himself.. maybe her jeans were too tight, or maybe Anthony gave up.. How is Anthony, Josie asked with a concerned look on her face. Anthony's mom shifted her weight and hung her arms holding her clothing selections in front of her stomach. He's fine, she answered, of course he got it too. His was a little more severe, he ended up a little shorter than Jerry here. It's hard for them to adjust but he'll get used to it, we've still got a lot to be thankful for. From his perspective, Jerry could just see her fingers moving behind the clothing she was holding.. slowly lovingly tracing along the front contours of her crotch as she spoke.

Well is he in the car? I'm sure Jerry would love to see him, Josie added. Anthony's mom didn't miss a beat. Oh no, sorry he's not here, he has a cold so we have him snuggled up at home. Recovering. She then looked down at Jerry, with a slight pout in her face. So sorry Jerry, I'll tell him you said hello. Damn she is good, Jerry thought, she basically lied him out of existence and he could probably hear it. They soon had both paid and left the store.. Jerry watched as Anthony's mom pulled her jeans up tight and waived to the group before sitting down in her black SUV. Jerry didn't say a word on the way home.. telling anyone of what he saw would give him away as a pervert.. He kept it to himself. Besides.. why should he be concerned.. Anthony was riding around inside the panties of the hottest mom in their friend group. He only wished he could tell his other friends how lucky he was.. even if it was his own mom.

Maybe it would be interesting for this to act as some form of foreshadowing? Maybe Jerry starts to wonder if he is going to shrink again and end up like his friend? Would his mom and aunt treat him differently? Anyway, take whatever you like and feel free to make it your own. Great work on the story so far, I'll be watching for more updates!

Author's Response:

You've wrote it yourself it looks like lol. Great idea though, thabk you for your thoughts:)

Reviewer: Yeo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2024 12:32 PM Title: Play time and cuddles with Mom

Would definitely say it was best to redo the chapter, even if it slows things down a bit.

Not sure if you saw last my review but what do you think about Jerry randomly resizing by a few inches at random every now and then after the inital shrinking, due to a quirk of the ‘Virus’? I take it Jerry will have at the very least some enhancements to prevent death, mutation etc? 

I definitely think that you should stick with the accident/unaware/ mistakenly gone too far, tags for their inital sexual interactions to maintain that mother/son bond. On that note, ideas.

Accidentally added to the laundry and put through the washing machine.

tangled in clothes and either folded up and put away or worn. 

Josie and Jen could play a blindfolded tasting game and Jen adds Jerry to the food that s to be tasted.

Jen could be just as much, if not more of a prankster than Josie and due to her history of exposure to ‘Tinies’ is far more sexually open about using Jerry sexually and enjoys engineering ‘accidents’ between mother and son.

One such prank could have Jen tie Jerry up and put him in Josies sex toy draw, thinking it’d be funny to see Josie go for some self love only to see her own son In said draw. Not realising that Josie had a man shaped dildo in the draw or that there’d be very little lightning when the next ‘stress relief session’ happened for Josie. Jerry could be gagged/unable to speak.

if Jerry can/does shrink to a really small size at one point, what if Jen added him to a piece of Josies jewellery without telling her and Josie ended up ‘proudly’ displaying her son as an ornament on a night out, while being completely unaware of that fact.

Jen could have a less fortunate tiny of her own that she uses for her sexual pleasure, (could be a convicted criminal) said Tiny escapes and either disguises Jerry as himself or Jen just mistakes Jerry for her Tiny toy. And lends him to Josie so that now she’s aware of the existence of shrunken men, she can experience just how much pleasure they can bring.

With a trusted group of friends or people aware of Jerrys ‘condition’ they could play a game of truth or dare, and the addition of booze succeeds in the mother and son duo pushing the boundaries between them. I.e climb into Josies mouth and be treated like a suckable sweet/lolly. Give your son ‘Jerry’ a fully body boob job, etc.

some more tiny related games would be interesting.

Author's Response:

All great suggestions!! I'll definitely be implementing these in along the way. And yeah, I'm not a fan of pain and death, so Jerry will be essentially invulnerable once he's changed lol. I did see your last review, thank you, and it really confirmed what I was thinking, I definitely wasn't happy with what I'd put out. I'll for sure be taking my time going forwards.

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2024 7:25 PM Title: Things aren't that Bad with Mom around

I wonder when he shrinks

Author's Response:

Soon, I swear lol.

Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2024 5:32 PM Title: Massage for Mom

Very good, giant Moms are so amazing!

Author's Response:

Appreciate it! And yes, yes they are. :)