Reviewer: JD1910 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2024 2:03 PM Title: Trouble sleeping?

Great story so far, looking forward to what antics Mom and Aunt get up to at poor Jerry's expense. Perhaps once Jerry begins his dwindling, but before the dynamic between them is changed to much, there could be a situation where Aunt and Mom party again, and one or both would have a case of mistaken identity with Jerry, but not confusing him for someone else, but rather something else.

Regardless if the suggestion shows up later, looking forward to the next chapters. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Appreciate the kind words. I'm definitely planning pretty much the exact scenario you've suggested, I'm just mulling over the details. I'll probably go back and forth until I find something that seems to make sense :)

Reviewer: magnusking Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2024 6:55 PM Title: Josie, Jen and Jerry. The three J's.

Happy to see a fresh chapter and can’t wait for the next one and also have you considered the possibility of them developing a symbiotic mutation where their bodies adjust to fit the subconscious desires of the other the stronger their spiritual and physical bonds become. Example: Josie has a subconscious Shota fetish and deep love for cats; the results would be Jerry slowly gaining a more androgynous appearance and his subconscious behavior becoming more akin to a feline. The process would go both ways but Josie would be more dominant in how she effects Jerry while he could only effect her in ways the her Subconscious mind would agree with.

Author's Response:

All interesting ideas! I do plan on exploring quite a few themes, including a sort of symbiosis between Jerry and Joise. What that's going to entail, I'm not totally sure yet, but we'll see what happens as the story develops!

Reviewer: Ryan217 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2024 11:20 AM Title: Josie, Jen and Jerry. The three J's.

Excellent story, thanks very much for updating so regularly. 

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to hear it's finding an audience.

Reviewer: hYtizE Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2024 4:10 PM Title: Play time and cuddles with Mom

Very cool story so far, I love the slow burn approach. I'm really glad you decided to rewrite this chapter, I think you've still got lots of fertile soil to use before launching the story out of a cannon. I had an idea for a scene so I'm just going to write it out.. sorry I suck at brief outlines, and  I'm sure you have plenty of scenes already to cover so just feel free to take whatever fits your story. Here goes..

I think it would be really cool to have Josie and Jen venture shopping somewhere, taking Jerry along with them. He's pretty bored as he walks around hearing the two amazons pick up items and discuss if they think it would look good on them for nearly an hour. Eventually, the ladies want to try some items on and head to the changing rooms. Obviously there are lots of options here but I think it would be really interesting to have him wait outside. As he sits there he see's the ladies legs as they shed their clothes and try on several items. A moment of self reflection arises again, he can't help but be drawn towards the idea of peeking under the door. He fends off the idea just before he notices another very pretty lady appear in the changing room hallway and nods at him sweetly before searching for a room she can use to try on her items. He is thankful she did not catch him peeking under the door, but then he realizes he knows her! She is Anthony's mom, one of his friends! He and his other friends had always teased Anthony for having a total MILF for a mom. Jerry watches her enter a changing room and close the door. He may have mixed feelings about peeking at his own mom and his aunt but.. he would be crazy to pass up an opportunity to spy on Anthony's mom. He gives in and looks under the door, his heart is racing as he sees her removing her tight blue jeans. The world seems to move in slow motion as she peeled them off her soft skin and gingerly set them to the side. Jerry's dick was so hard his whole stomach seemed to be tumbling. He watched as she removed her shirt over her head and tossed it aside, revealing a very sexy set of sheer lace lingerie. Then.. something caught Jerry's eye as he studied the front of her sheer see-thru panties... a tiny head with blonde hair peering out to the world with thick pubic hair strands at his back. Oh my god it's Anthony. He recognized his friend immediately. Jerry froze as if he was looking directly at a ghost.

He could see Anthony's face and hands gripping the material of his mother's panties tightly.. of course he probably doesn't want to slip down any further.. currently he was holding his head just above the front seam of his mother's panty gusset. Anthony's mom stood up straight and looked herself over in the mirror as she reached up and began tying her hair up in a sloppy ponytail. Not paying any mind to her tiny son peering out of her panties like a pet in a cage. Does she even know he is there? Maybe not Jerry wondered. Still he knew his entire friend group would kill to be where Anthony currently was. 

Then Anthony spotted Jerry peering in and his eyes bulged, his face went frantic, he started pulling himself up and waving his arms. Jerry watched as his friend was clearly trying to tell him something. He watched intently as Anthony peered upwards to make sure he hadn't given himself way to his mother looming above, currently interested only in choosing which ensemble to try on first as she flipped through the clothing hangers. Anthony couldn't help himself though as he moved his hands wildly trying to write letters on the fabric front of his mother's underwear. H.. E.. L.. Just then his mother had apparently grown tired of his wiggling around and turned her attention downwards to her panties and their tiny prisoner. A shadow formed over Anthony as she leaned over and pointed her finger at him sternly.. then for good measure, she tugged at the edges of the fabric of her panty front and Jerry watched as his friend lost his grip and his panicked face disappeared below the seam of her panties.. further down.. into the gusset below his smokeshow mom's pussy. Jerry gulped so hard his throat hurt. She was VERY aware that Anthony was there. He watched as the Amazon stood back up and turned her attention back to her clothing options. Jerry could see a tiny bump wiggling around in her panties.. that part of her panties was obviously more damp than the rest of the material.. My god Jerry wasn't quite sure what to think at that moment... 

Just then Jerry heard one of the door latches begin to move, and he forced his body into moving back towards his place on the bench as fast as humanly possible before his mother emerged wearing some of the clothes she had picked out. She asked Jerry for his opinion.. Jerry's heart was racing still but he was able to mutter a few words of approval, unconvinced she decided to wait and ask Jen. 

After several more minutes the group was ready to leave, Jerry noticed that Anthony's mom had decided to leave soon after and ended up standing behind them at the checkout counter. His mom recognized her and gave a her a hug, quickly introducing her sister Jen. Then Anthony's mom looked down at Jerry and covered her mouth from embarrassment. She had not even recognized him! The world slowed again as the Amazon slowly squatted down to his level, Jerry could only watch her blue jean covered waist as she bent down. The material groaned and stretched below her, Jerry couldn't believe that his friend was just behind there.. tucked away down below the waistline of her tight blue jeans, inside his own mother's panties. He could probably hear them talking.. Jerry snapped his attention back towards her face as she greeted him sweetly again and rubbing his shoulder. She looked Jerry right in the eyes and tells him she is sorry he caught the shrinking virus, but at least it looks like he got a light dose of it.. some boys have shrunk way smaller. She smiled softly and then stands back up towering over him again. Jerry couldn't  help himself, he just stared directly at her blue jean covered crotch. No movement, he thought to himself.. maybe her jeans were too tight, or maybe Anthony gave up.. How is Anthony, Josie asked with a concerned look on her face. Anthony's mom shifted her weight and hung her arms holding her clothing selections in front of her stomach. He's fine, she answered, of course he got it too. His was a little more severe, he ended up a little shorter than Jerry here. It's hard for them to adjust but he'll get used to it, we've still got a lot to be thankful for. From his perspective, Jerry could just see her fingers moving behind the clothing she was holding.. slowly lovingly tracing along the front contours of her crotch as she spoke.

Well is he in the car? I'm sure Jerry would love to see him, Josie added. Anthony's mom didn't miss a beat. Oh no, sorry he's not here, he has a cold so we have him snuggled up at home. Recovering. She then looked down at Jerry, with a slight pout in her face. So sorry Jerry, I'll tell him you said hello. Damn she is good, Jerry thought, she basically lied him out of existence and he could probably hear it. They soon had both paid and left the store.. Jerry watched as Anthony's mom pulled her jeans up tight and waived to the group before sitting down in her black SUV. Jerry didn't say a word on the way home.. telling anyone of what he saw would give him away as a pervert.. He kept it to himself. Besides.. why should he be concerned.. Anthony was riding around inside the panties of the hottest mom in their friend group. He only wished he could tell his other friends how lucky he was.. even if it was his own mom.

Maybe it would be interesting for this to act as some form of foreshadowing? Maybe Jerry starts to wonder if he is going to shrink again and end up like his friend? Would his mom and aunt treat him differently? Anyway, take whatever you like and feel free to make it your own. Great work on the story so far, I'll be watching for more updates!

Author's Response:

You've wrote it yourself it looks like lol. Great idea though, thabk you for your thoughts:)

Reviewer: Yeo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2024 12:32 PM Title: Play time and cuddles with Mom

Would definitely say it was best to redo the chapter, even if it slows things down a bit.

Not sure if you saw last my review but what do you think about Jerry randomly resizing by a few inches at random every now and then after the inital shrinking, due to a quirk of the ‘Virus’? I take it Jerry will have at the very least some enhancements to prevent death, mutation etc? 

I definitely think that you should stick with the accident/unaware/ mistakenly gone too far, tags for their inital sexual interactions to maintain that mother/son bond. On that note, ideas.

Accidentally added to the laundry and put through the washing machine.

tangled in clothes and either folded up and put away or worn. 

Josie and Jen could play a blindfolded tasting game and Jen adds Jerry to the food that s to be tasted.

Jen could be just as much, if not more of a prankster than Josie and due to her history of exposure to ‘Tinies’ is far more sexually open about using Jerry sexually and enjoys engineering ‘accidents’ between mother and son.

One such prank could have Jen tie Jerry up and put him in Josies sex toy draw, thinking it’d be funny to see Josie go for some self love only to see her own son In said draw. Not realising that Josie had a man shaped dildo in the draw or that there’d be very little lightning when the next ‘stress relief session’ happened for Josie. Jerry could be gagged/unable to speak.

if Jerry can/does shrink to a really small size at one point, what if Jen added him to a piece of Josies jewellery without telling her and Josie ended up ‘proudly’ displaying her son as an ornament on a night out, while being completely unaware of that fact.

Jen could have a less fortunate tiny of her own that she uses for her sexual pleasure, (could be a convicted criminal) said Tiny escapes and either disguises Jerry as himself or Jen just mistakes Jerry for her Tiny toy. And lends him to Josie so that now she’s aware of the existence of shrunken men, she can experience just how much pleasure they can bring.

With a trusted group of friends or people aware of Jerrys ‘condition’ they could play a game of truth or dare, and the addition of booze succeeds in the mother and son duo pushing the boundaries between them. I.e climb into Josies mouth and be treated like a suckable sweet/lolly. Give your son ‘Jerry’ a fully body boob job, etc.

some more tiny related games would be interesting.

Author's Response:

All great suggestions!! I'll definitely be implementing these in along the way. And yeah, I'm not a fan of pain and death, so Jerry will be essentially invulnerable once he's changed lol. I did see your last review, thank you, and it really confirmed what I was thinking, I definitely wasn't happy with what I'd put out. I'll for sure be taking my time going forwards.

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2024 7:25 PM Title: Things aren't that Bad with Mom around

I wonder when he shrinks

Author's Response:

Soon, I swear lol.

Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2024 5:32 PM Title: Massage for Mom

Very good, giant Moms are so amazing!

Author's Response:

Appreciate it! And yes, yes they are. :)

Reviewer: Yeo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2024 1:04 PM Title: Josie and Jerry

Great start… 

I’m looking forward to this continuing, do you have an update schedule, is the plot all planned out or not yet?

The dynamic between the two is going to be really interesting to explore, (really hope Josie doesn’t go from loving Jerry like a son to not seeing him as a person but as a sex toy/slave that needs to serve her whims regardless of his feelings just because he shrunk).

It was a great idea to give Josie a mischievous personality as it really allows for her to tease and prank/use him in a playful manner when Jerry shrinks, ‘while accidentally going too far’ and not change the dynamics that much. If you add a drinking habit drunken shenanigans and bad choices would also be an option.

What do you think of adding mistaken identity to the tags as well? I.e Josie could know what Jerry is (shrunken human) but not whom he is, and uses him as such.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your thoughts! I don't have a strict schedule, but I do aim for weekly, or at least bi monthly updates, life permitting. I can promise you right now, Josie won't ever see her son as a slave! Their relationship will remain solid, not counting some other "changes" wink wink.

She does enjoy her booze, and there for sure will be some tipsy shenanigans coming up! As for mistaken identity.. I can honestly say, its not an idea that's ever occurred to me! It's interesting though, and I'll certainly be giving it some thought.