Reviews For Breaking Through
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Reviewer: Richard C H Davies Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2024 10:10 PM Title: Rightfully

Great fantasy and adventure/ sci-fi writing here, hope you continue writing more stories. I like your inclusion of details to evoke the feelings and atmosphere of the scenes you are creating.

Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2024 2:18 PM Title: Rightfully

Off to an exciting start!

Sandy's attack on the town was great, showcasing the power imbalance between giants and humans with some great interactions, but that fight scene was incredible! It was really well choreographed, the actions all flowing smoothly into one another. It felt as vivid as watching a movie. I enjoy a good revenge-obsessed hero, so I'm excited to see how Mary develops. The environmental descriptions and bits of world building are intriguing.

Great stuff! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Reviewer: rave777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2024 11:23 AM Title: Rightfully

oh man, I love this beginning already. Always a fan of fantasy story like this, I want to see more!

...and I see 'destruction' tag there too, nice...

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