[Report This]Date: October 15 2024 2:18 PM Title: ch. 1: Rightfully, p1
Off to an exciting start!
Sandy's attack on the town was great, showcasing the power imbalance between giants and humans with some great interactions, but that fight scene was incredible! It was really well choreographed, the actions all flowing smoothly into one another. It felt as vivid as watching a movie. I enjoy a good revenge-obsessed hero, so I'm excited to see how Mary develops. The environmental descriptions and bits of world building are intriguing.
Great stuff! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review!!
I'm happy you enjoyed the fight scene. I wasn't super confident that it was something I could write well, so it's lovely to hear. I've been growing more and more attached to Mary as the story grows in my head, and I think she's gonna turn out great. I'm glad the worldbuilding was at interesting, I can't help myself but inject it into everything I make and sometimes worry it's boring/too much.
I'm having a lot of fun writing this so expect a new chapter soonish. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: October 15 2024 11:23 AM Title: ch. 1: Rightfully, p1
oh man, I love this beginning already. Always a fan of fantasy story like this, I want to see more!
...and I see 'destruction' tag there too, nice...
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm hoping to get the next chapter written as soon as I can. It's so much fun to write.