[Report This]Date: January 27 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 44
Thank you for a most worthwhile novel, Mr_G. As fictional autobiographies go, I would call this the "Jane Pittman of GTS stories." Bravo! :-)
[Report This]Date: January 23 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 43
The best chapter, yet! If only because of that most unexpected plot-twist. Namely; the Doomsday Society succeeding with Stephen Miller's homeworld (however briefly)!!
If you expand on that particular story idea (with regard to prelude and aftermath), I would definitely read it, in its entirety. But, for the moment, I am still more-than-satisfied with the updates to this one. So, you don't have to side-track yourself on my account. :-)
Author's Response:
Actually it was the human haters not the Doomsday Society that wiped out humanity on Stephen Miller's world.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 42
Let's hope the peace lasts far longer than anything in our Earth's history. Because, on our world, wars are like crosstown buses. Another one always seems to come along sooner than we think.
[Report This]Date: January 07 2013 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 41
"Marcy's mercy." Good one! X-D
[Report This]Date: January 04 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 40
I did read that story.* In fact, it was one of the many inspirations for THE I.D.E.E.A. MEN two-parter!
*And, believe me; it's almost impossible to keep up with your prolificity. ;-)
[Report This]Date: December 22 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 39
Hmmmmm! I wonder if she could have been poisoned with weaponized spell-breaker gas? On second thought: nahhhhhhhhhh! That's strictly part of the I.D.E.E.A. Men's cross-time continuum.*
*This has been a shameless self-plug. ;-D
[Report This]Date: December 22 2012 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 38
So, this other Sara can now teleport cross-time on her own? Interesting!
I might incorporate that element into my next Ray Venn adventure. Assuming, of course, that I can cook up a workable plot premise, in general!
P.S.---Happy Holidays to you and yours.
:-)
[Report This]Date: December 15 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 37
Good for Sara! :-)
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 36
Hopefully, we'll hear whether or not Sara enjoyed New Year's Eve at the Wishbone. Just one nitpick, however.
I think you meant to say "popcorn," "refrain," and "providing." ;-)
Author's Response:
There is no popcorn in this chapter. I really meant pop can. Pop is also known as soda. Thank you for catching the other two spelling errors.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 35
Not bad! Although, my imaginary lawyer (Izzy Serious) is more partial to Nicole Suresbigger and the Big Cat Dolls. ;-)
[Report This]Date: November 19 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 34
You confused "hallowing" (making holy) with "howling." But, otherwise, this was a refreshingly gentle chapter. And, I especially enjoyed the weather pun!*
*The Snows of Maine? Classic! X-D
[Report This]Date: November 13 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 33
You misspelled "except" more than once. But, aside from that, these last two chapters were pretty good additions. Although, it still strikes me as incongruous (always wanted to use that word!), and purely psychological, for Stanley to be afraid to be stepped on.
[Report This]Date: November 12 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 32
I had no "I.D.E.E.A." that you already had your own version of that agency. ;-)
I guess great minds do think alike!
[Report This]Date: November 06 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 31
You continue to post one enthralling chapter after another. And 20,075 lurkers obviously agree with me.
;-)
[Report This]Date: October 22 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 30
Interesting! Her fate sounds a lot like those "Sleeping King" myths (Arthur, Charlemagne, etc.) that are so popular around Europe.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'll get to those side-chapters as soon as I can. In the meantime? This bonus chapter was suitably dramatic. Nicely balancing the light-hearted ones.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 28
So, that's where the Johnsons of Sizeloa originally came from! Well, at least there was one happy ending to that Gender War.
Author's Response:
Actually your wrong. The Johnsons of Sizeloa are a different familly from the Johnsons of Gender War. All they share is the same last name.
Date: October 13 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
You should have him talk about and remember Sally and her wish she made.
In truth i think she got too big to really do anything, Am amaze she hasen't started to get suck into a black hole yet.
Author's Response:
Stanley will talk about Sally in the very next chapter.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
Re: Katie's profile? Will do! :-)
As for this chapter? Concise, but well-done (as per usual)!
[Report This]Date: September 24 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
As stated elsewhere, I completely forgot that I had reviewed "The New Owner," elsewhen. As for this chapter? Nice prequel to "Regrets." It certainly explains a lot!