Hi there :)

Thanks for noticing the pop culture references. The universe that this story takes place in is basically identical to the readers/ ours which is why put references to Joker and AFL that line up with the appropriate time period. Mentioning Mckenna Grace, one of my favourite celebrities was fun to do as well and I do have a cameo appearance with her later on in the story. 

The dream sequence was actually supposed to be one chapter but it became too long which why I split in into 4 parts which is why there is the Act 1, Act 2, Act 3, Act 4 to avoid the issue with the 120,0000 word chapter of Antopia where people told me they kept losing where they were reading off from. All acts have been already written and I will be releasing slowly over the next several weeks. 

There are actually 2 other nightmare sequences and one cute cuddly dream sequence with his first crush Charlotte that will be released that I have already written  and will become relevant later on in the real life pub sequence of story which Anura will be drawing from from his dreams as you will see which is why it will become somewhat recurring. The dream sequences will be just as exciting as the pub sequence. I have actually planned this story out from start to finish and have a range of pub interactions as well.   

Character development for Anura will be detailed to be honest since this character is basically me. I inserted myself in my story lol. 

Divya will be making an appearance later on in the story as well    

If you want early access to the next chapters weeks or months in advance you can buy me a coffee for just $5 AUD on Kofi. I would really appreciate it. :) 

Hi there 

Yes Anura is Divya's older cousin and the main focus on the story will be on him though Divya will have some minor appearances in flashbacks which links this story with Antopia. Divya's red haired friend is obviously Lucy, lol 

Real estate in Australia works state by state so since Mildura is still in Victoria, like Melbourne so Robert could organise rental places in regional areas from the central Melbourne office that covers the entire Victorian state sometimes. 

It's just a bug is set in the same universe as Antopia as well which explains why there was a talking ant in that story.

The Harry Potter fanfiction is not related to this story at all since it takes place in the fantasy world of J K Rowling. However in this universe it is important to remember that is identical to ours which is why I put a lot of pop culture references including the Joker trailer and the release date lining up with September 2019 just like real life.

There will more Easter eggs throughout the story which relate back to Antopia where I have scattered so be on the look out for future ones to hunt in future chapters :) 

Yes Anura is basically the fictional version of me in terms of his entire character. A lot of his memories are based on some of my real life experiences as well  

I have written and completed around 185,000 words which is basically half the story now which I will releasing in 6 parts over the next coming months. The first part will up by the end of May publicly once I proofread it so prepare for a steady big release or if you want early access you could buy me a coffee on Kofi for $5 AUD. :)

Hi there

Yeah, I will say that kind of spoiled the ending bit with Max in Antopia by revealing he lives through his ordeal. However, the things that happen to him throughout his ordeal will remain a mystery so you can imagine all the crazy shenanigans that happen to him.

As for the book Max wrote about his ordeal (1001 pages) you are right in the sense that he changed his name and the names of his family and friends. However, all the events that he depicts in the book are based on real events. It is important to remember that the world and wider community believe it’s a completely fictional story that he imagined and doesn’t know that these events really happened. In this sense, he doesn’t censure the strong ‘graphic’ details since fictional depiction lets the author write as disturbing as possible and results in his book being classified as an adult novel (18+).

As for the Police, I will have to spoil it a bit, yes, the police do get involved after Max’s parents call them after realising their parents realise, he is missing. Obviously, they look in the wrong place far and wide and the police don’t find him but I guess we will have to see who discovers Max in his shrunken state…….

Yeah, at first it is believed by the police and the wider community that Max went in hiding in the countryside or joined a street gang however they start to become suspicious of this assertion especially when his book is published and start noticing the strange accuracies to real-world events and wonder where his ideas have come from

Orange ladybugs are not carnivorous at all, they feed on sap so in this sense they wouldn’t be considered a predator to the aphids at all. Also, they haven’t tamed the ladybug, they have just hitchhiked on its back, similar to how birds ride on the back of elephants and rhinos.

I feel like the human instinct is to lash out using violence. Emma was in a moment of rage and resorted to punching her sister several times in the face rather than picking up her shrink ray and firing it at her. Had she been a bit more collected she probably wouldn’t done that however, she didn’t have time to shrink her after this since the police came shortly after this.

Vore comes later on in the story.

Apparently, Joker 2 is trash but I am curious now to see just how bad it is. 

Thanks for your review 

Yeah, I think setting a concrete storyline is a lot better than those messy action one-shots with no coherent storyline or development which are essentially porn while I prefer to write erotica. 

Chapter 2 will be out in a few weeks hopefully and I am 50% through it. I only have time to write on the weekends these days due to full-time work. 

Also, I think you accidentally posted your review twice.