[Report This]Date: November 16 2024 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I tried contacting you a while back using the site’s Contact Author feature because I was still inspired by just how awesome the story is here! But I found out recently that it didn’t go through and the content of that email was lost (sad)
To me, this universe you made, the one you’re writing stories in rn, and Ashley’s story in particular, is the best, hottest thing in the giantess genre rn, and I want it to be big!
So if you have another means of contacting you, I’d love to have some fun talking things out and getting some ideas to you! For initial contact, if it’s easier, I’m on X as @mbs_216. You can DM me! I’m also on this site’s Discord as Mbs216, but I’m new to discord and still figuring it out
Hope to talk with you soon!
Author's Response: Sorry for the late reply, I don't get notifications on reviews! I've sent you a message on Discord
All the best.
Date: October 22 2024 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
我非常喜欢这个故事，期待下一章，还有更多关于脚的内容，加油！from Chinese
Author's Response:
Date: October 14 2024 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really did like this story and I want to see more of it. I would prefer if she did get back with Jenny, but she is now a pet and so will be loved by Jenny, but Jenny does move on to another partner and she becomes a pet to both.
I am a little tired of the Shrinky to taken from her love interest and winding up in another’s caretrope, at least at the beginning of te story.
So but what u got here is good, interested to see where u go.
Author's Response:
Thank you kindly! sorry for the long time it took to reply.
Jenny becoming a pet would be quite fun, never considered that! a win win for everyone.
Yeah I imagine it can be an overused trope but I do love the whole aspect of throwing someone into an entirely new world so to speak.
Date: October 12 2024 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
that was the one of the best giantess stories I`ve reed. I love the fact that there was no mean evil giantess in this story cuz that has become so boring and repeated over and over. the fact that Ashly was just unlucky and Lydia was just trying to be kind in a lovely maternal way was the best part. I`d also like to say that the regrate Ashly had of dreaming of expiriancing the tiny life was a good touch added to the story.
I just like to give some of my thoughts after reeding this story.
I kinda hoped that at the end instead of putting Ashly in Lydia`s panties, she put her in a small glass cage on her desk and then when her red head friend come over she wouldnt recognize her or coudnt see her
It would be so interesting if Ahly`s boss have a teenage girl daughter and she would just give Ashly to her as a gift for her birthday or something. the real horror is being controlled by an immature sweet princes who on a normal day would be so respecting and admired of a person like Ashly as an older lady, and imagen also she`d live in a cage in her room for the rest of her life . for Ashly to cry and scream to be recognized but all she get in return is cooed talk from some teen in front of her boss and maybe her husband too at their home got to be fun to see. maybe also seeing Jenny finds new lover can be interesting too.
great story though. I already love your writing style
Author's Response: Thank you kindly! I totally get you on the 'fully evil' giantess trend, I do feel it can limit what you can do with the giants and does take away any possible realistic grounding, it can still be enjoyable but I was really excited to try and make something that feels believable of a person (well, as much as you can with any size fiction!) so its essentially unintentional cruelty as they simply strip the agency from the tinies.
Love the glass cage idea keeping her as a desk trinket! I think Jenny might've been a bit more suspicious then Lydia there though, so far the other reviewers seem quite keen for a Ash/Jen reunion so its neat to hear the opposite who want to see her forced adapt to her new life as Zoe, I've no concrete plan at the moment but I do think the crux will be what Lydia does when she eventually finds out who her new pet was.
At one point I did consider giving her a daughter character but I did worry if that was a bit already done, its nice to have a counter balance to the typical younger owners we see in stories and well Lydia clearly likes to play with her pets too, Ash is probably terrified because of that as she knows Lydia has previously had and 'lost' personal tinies.
Jenny moving on is an interesting thought, there'd have to be a time jump as they've been in a long term relationship for half a decade so it can't feel too sudden, it'd devastate Ash though which is good meaty idea - we shall see! I literally have no idea which branch to take.
Thank you again for the ideas, always happy to hear more.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2024 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a new classic!! Adding to my favorites right now! You’re a visionary :D
Without being able to list them all out, this story hits everything I love about the GTS genre
IF you continue this amazing stand-alone, I’d be super excited (captivated really) to see how realistic it continues to be, and a slow burn for Ashley reuniting with Jenny in the not-so-near future…
Fantastic work! And thank you
Author's Response: You are too kind! my favourite part of size fiction is that mundanity of the ordinary world and trying to keep it grounded in the detail/setting.
There's certainly a possibility of Jenny and Ashley properly reuniting in a part 2, it'd mainly be just trying to figure how out to make it work naturally and authentic to the world, I mean she can't even get out from her new home of red silk fabric currently, Lydia certainly doesn't want to let her new pet out, Zoe still needs to be trained properly after all.
Again, always happy to hear people's thoughts and ideas!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2024 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great start so far for your first story, I'm a huge fan of unaware themes where people don't recognize their friend/colleague/lover and I try to put that in all of my own stuff too. Can't wait to read more and see if Ashley will get to reunite with Jenny, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! the unaware quality just feels so natural for the cultural element of the world, these people especially say older people like Lydia see once your a tiny, you are just a Tiny.
They no longer see you as this normal person trapped at small size they see a cute little creature they can make their pet and that disconnect is what makes a person never just go, well what if that tiny was.. Ashley? never registers once to her its just a tiny likely just misplaced from the kennel by mistake.
I am mulling over ideas for a sequel with Ash/Jenny but I do worry it could end up not feeling true to this world, Ash idealised the world of being a tiny, she thinks she could get what she fantasied about being Jenny's pet but the reality is she doesn't have any say once she's a tiny - she's Lydia's registered pet, all signed and approved.
Perhaps that is maybe too cruel a fate, these giants aren't exactly evil/cruel imo (plenty of other stories that can focus on crush/death/vore, this is more fears of that on the fringes) they are just people so maybe Ashley may get a chance, or simply be Zoe for the rest of her life - I honestly don't know yet! curious what others think there.