[Report This]Date: November 08 2024 3:33 PM Title: A Meeting of Minds
Hey GOAT,
All of your stories are legendary, especially "Money matters" and "Opening up" but why did you stop ? They have a huge potential if you continue. You could even sell them as novels or ebooks ...
Any ways, great story as always, I'd love to see that Oli developps a foot kink and swims in his gf's doughy sweaty stinky feet. You can even add other similar characters like big redheads or black women to the party. Like they kidnapp him or smth.
Thx.
If you need an online community to discuss gts ; The great author MXP20 has a discord server. You can also inspire from "Downsizing", one of his stories.
Best wishes.
Author's Response:
No, you're the goat!
Thank you my friend, I'm aware there's a lot of hype for those older stories and I really had a lot of fun with them at the time, but I feel they were more important in teaching me how to write better and so if I ever returned to them you'd see a total overhaul of the plot and characters as I'm not satisfied with where I left them. Unfortunately a lot of my stories work like this and they were more a draft or exploration of an idea with no clue where to go, I think this is why you see a lot of stories on this site fade into nonexistence, because people start with the idea without thinking of how it would translate into a story, that and simply losing motivation.
There are a few stories I'd love to return to, Money Matters and Office Bitch being two of those as they work as sort of brother-sister stories in my head and they're supposed to intertwine at some point. Opening Up is really the blueprint for a story like Quintessential which I enjoy much more, tall athlete gentle femdom type shit ya heard (though I appreciate the step-sibling angle may not be to the taste of some). The Himalaya Project and Splendour in the Mud are two others I love the concept of and hope to flesh out more. And I also have a ton of unfinished short stories lying around. These days, I take my writing a lot more seriously and want to return to some of these old stories to revamp them and polish them off as complete novels that I can sell online.
So that's why I stopped! But I'd like to say I'm much more in the swing of things nowadays.
As to your comments on the story, I'm sworn to secrecy but I think your wishes will come true. The focus for Picked Clean is on Emilia and Oliver and so we won't see many more characters come into the mix.
I'll think about joining some discord communities as I've never really engaged with them before but maybe!
All the best!
[Report This]Date: November 08 2024 3:58 AM Title: A Meeting of Minds
Absolutely loving the story so far. I can't wait to see how small Oliver gets. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks! He will get quite small, but I'll leave you with the suspense.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2024 8:35 PM Title: A Meeting of Minds
Emilia is the perfect woman lol. But besides that my god is this story good. You know how to write with pure amazement and your ability to build a chapter up with added suspense and tension is pure talent. Your ability to describe characters and surrounding environments give your stories depth and ground compared to others. You are very much underestimated and I always look forward to see you post a new chapter or story and everytime you do it always delivers great. Keep up the great work, you are defiantly one of the best writers out there.
Author's Response:
Goku, it is a great honor. Thank you.
Seriously though, that praise means a lot! I try to make my writing as immersive as possible with a lot of focus on build up so that the actual smut feels much more 'real'. I appreciate those kind words man.
Hope you enjoy where we go with this one, and we'll see how perfect Emilia really is...
[Report This]Date: October 24 2024 2:45 AM Title: A Meeting of Minds
Loving this so far. Very very eager to see Ollie trapped inside of those stuffy boots.
Author's Response:
Thanks Omanahan!! We’ll get there eventually, though the commissioner is more interested in her slippers…
(PS I’ve really been enjoying the New Normal from you)
[Report This]Date: October 10 2024 4:03 PM Title: A Meeting of Minds
Great characters! I realize this is a commission that’s primarily foot-focused, but I’m keeping my fingers crossed for some eventual human dildo fun lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah this is a foot-focused commission, but there will be some other tropes to cover as we progress :)