I love the way you capture Marina’s descent into her new reality with a mix of wonder and dread. That moment when she first notices her newfound size in the bathroom is electric—her disbelief transitioning into shock as she shatters the glass, immediately hinting at the chaos her transformation will unleash. There's something so deeply emotional about that shift in power; it’s as if her body, which once catered to her vanity, is now completely beyond her control.

I also felt a pang of empathy for her when her mansion is destroyed. She’s always been in control, manipulating those around her, but now she’s faced with a world that no longer fits her. That juxtaposition—between her overwhelming growth and her helplessness—strikes a powerful chord. It’s that push and pull between the pleasure of transformation and the fear of what’s been lost that makes the story so compelling.

You’ve created a character whose emotional journey feels like a reflection of our own fears about change and power. Really, it’s a brilliant take on what it means to have everything and suddenly, unexpectedly, lose it.