Reviews For A Whole New World
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Gokuto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2024 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good. Will there be more chapters?



Author's Response:

Yes.  I'm just about to post chapter 2 and I'm currently working on chapter 5.

Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2024 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start. I'll admit that some of Kristi's behavior and actions felt forced to me, and I was willing to overlook that because her and Rory's interactions were very hot and well-written, but then the cliffhanger ending completely justifies her "porny" mannerisms. I did not expect where this chapter was going, and I'm curious to see where the story goes from here.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying my story.  My motivation for writing this was to justify the beginning by the end of the chapter.

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2024 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love this setup, excited to see where that cliffhanger leads to



Author's Response:

Thank you for your interest.  Chapter 2 is available now.

Reviewer: MintDisco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2024 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start, looking forward to seeing where it goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your interest.  Chapter 2 is available now.

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.