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Reviewer: lightwing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2024 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

One of the things I enjoy most about this fetish is the sense of scale and your descriptions portray that very well.  Plus, the scale you write your characters being makes the story exciting in so many ways.  The unwareness of the giant woman, the sense of urgency and desperation by the tiny man, the casual everything about the woman translating to these titanic, world shaking, life threatening things for the man she is supposed to care for but doesn't realize is in harms way.  I also like the fact that despite Marcy sleeping with Mike, she does care about David's well being given that she didn't want to risk him getting squished by involving him in their sex or sex with Beth.  Can't really blame her for cheating either because David and Beth have been fooling around too and keeping it secret.  It would have been interesting to see some multi size scenes too, like David riding in Beth's cleavage and Beth riding in Marcy's cleavage and things like that.  Anyway, another fantastic story!

Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2024 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Whoa. I didn’t expect to get a response ^.^ Thank you so much for clearing those concerns of mine. Your explanation confirms my suspicion that Marcy: A) had to give her husband her full attention to communicate with him and B) had to focus completely on him to recognize him.

I’ll admit, I was having so much fun with the story, that when it ended, I so grieved out, I didn’t know what to do. Not necessarily for because of a character’s death, but for the end of the story. Maybe that’s why I was sad David died the way he did, because I wouldn’t mind seeing him confront his wife, or try to get along with a new reality.

Regardless, this story has all the elements I love: micro, breastmilk, husband/wife dynamics, cucking, cheating, multiple sizes, etc. There’s a reason you're my top favorite authors. It’s like you’re writing these stories for me, lol. Thank you so much for writing and providing these awesome stories to the community!

Also, I blushed when you mentioned Galactic SNAFU. I had no idea you read that! Now I feel guilty for deleting it! I might have to dust off that old story!

Reviewer: MXP20 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2024 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey! Long time reader and fan. It's always fun reading micro stuff from you. Some of the scenes you painted were wonderfully executed. Like comparing the wife's pussy to a canyon. The size of her nipples being hundreds of feet tall. And finally, all the breastmilk! My god, I loved all that. "Lactation" seriously needs to be a tag here. Describing the lake forming on the dresser was so cool. I can't imagine trying to survive a tsunami of breastmilk like that.

I was wondering if you explain some stuff that left me confused ...?

  • Early in the story, we see scenes of the MC and wife talking and communicating with each other. Were they using anything to assist with talking? Like a phone or radio? Just wondering how the wife could hear him in the beginning of the story, but not the end.
  • The wife was able to see and pick up her husband in the beginning of the story as well. How come she didn't recognize her husband in the end? I don't mind that she killed him accidentally, I just thought it was odd she didn't recognize him after taking care of him for so long.

Anyway, great story. Always a pleasure to read your stories.



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and commenting. They have no radios or tech assistance in this universe. It was a recent accident and there hasn’t been the time or the economic incentive to create it. That said, to my mind, at this scale communication is possible only with great effort on the part of Marcy and David. She must be in a quiet space, and he must yell at the top of his lungs. This means they must be in sync and even still its yes or no questions only. On one of my read throughs, I was worried about this and added a paragraph discussing the limitations explicitly.

 

On the misrecognition by Marcy at the end, to me, it’s all about context. She is not expecting to see him where he is. Her mind immediately classifies him as the most likely object and then she acts accordingly and quickly. The speed is key here. Its pretty much a reflexive action on her part and all too easy to “resolve” appropriately. Unfortunately, for David this means he is dead and despite fighting for his life there’s nothing he can do at his size. Once her mind decided what was going to happen that was it. It was a one-way decision like the one-way communication that occurred earlier. She spoke and he obeyed, until he decided not to which ultimately led to his demise. Basically, she had one off day while caring for him.

 

Btw, Galactic SNAFU, outstanding scale and power interactions. The shadow on the planet with the anchorwoman was brilliant. I was inspired by that and thus the eclipse created by Maria in Micronauts, Chapter 17, Goddess Syndrome. Its all just a feedback loop in the end. Isn't it? :) 

Reviewer: rave777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2024 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Imma sucker for any stories involving giantess caretaker, this is such a fun read! Love all the boobs action

Reviewer: Lumberpanda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2024 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing! Only thing that would have made it better would have been him being drawn into the breast pump! 

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