[Report This]Date: November 17 2024 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please continue!
[Report This]Date: October 19 2024 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please continue!
Author's Response:
This was written as a one-off but I'll consider it!
[Report This]Date: October 04 2024 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was amusing. A little short snippet about the concept of "marshmallow hell" taken to ridiculous extremes in a rather comical fashion. Makes me wonder when - or even if - she eventually spots the little sales rep whom she inadvertently ends up kidnapping and what kind of conversation they would have upon the moment of discovery. The mind boggles at the possibilities...
Anyways, this was a fun enough read to peruse.
Author's Response:
Really appreciate the review
[Report This]Date: October 02 2024 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was a nice, focused story. The woman leaning on the counter and squishing the MC beneath her chest made for a fun visual, and the knife twist at the end there was pretty funny.
Author's Response:
Enjoy your stuff a lot so thanks for the high praise!
Author's Response:
Enjoy your stuff a lot so thanks for the high praise!
Author's Response:
Enjoy your stuff a lot so thanks for the high praise!
Author's Response:
Enjoy your stuff a lot so thanks for the high praise!
Author's Response:
Enjoy your stuff a lot so thanks for the high praise!
Author's Response:
Enjoy your stuff a lot so thanks for the high praise!
Author's Response:
Enjoy your stuff a lot so thanks for the high praise!
Author's Response:
Enjoy your stuff a lot so thanks for the high praise!
Date: October 01 2024 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story, only part I didnt like is that it ended!
Author's Response:
Much appreciated, I enjoy your work as well
Date: October 01 2024 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I couldn't resist leaving this a review. This was magnificent, detailed, and immersive. You are one of the few authors who genuinely grasps such small sizes in their writing. The crazy-big scale of the woman is felt, and it has a profound effect on the reading experience. I'll be following your work from now on, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Spot on, love painting the picture of scale. Appreciate the review
[Report This]Date: October 01 2024 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
A great story! Definitely enjoyed that the tiny employee thought she was done dealing with the customer but ended up stuck in her boobs. Makes me wonder if other really tiny employees end up in similar situations with unaware customers
Author's Response:
Appreciate the rating!
[Report This]Date: October 01 2024 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was a short and sweet one-shot, the kind that wants me to see more on what would happen afterwards, if the MC would eventually get the entitled woman's attention or if they'd keep being stuck to her as she went about her day. Great read!
Author's Response:
Thanks!