[Report This]Date: November 12 2024 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story. Very exciting
[Report This]Date: November 05 2024 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
You always leave me wanting MOAR!
Not gonna lie, Madison would've duped me every time with that potion. Just when I thought things were gonna turn around, and the brother would grow, BOOM! He shrinks again. Madison is loving her teasing and really falling into her new role as master. I love how the tiny couple snap and bend to her will, with the promise of returning to normal. Though now, with all these tricks and games, I wonder if she has any intent on returning them to normal.
I've never read a story like this before. I get excited each time there's an update. And again, these tags should repulse me, but the plot and mystery surrounding it keeps me coming back and reading it with a smile. Great job! Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have to echo MXP20's remarks. I used to skip over incest plot stories (especially mother related ones), but a good story is a good story.
I'm curious, do you feel that if the sister was a step-sister, that the story just wouldn't be the same (not knowing what is ahead)?
Author's Response:
That's a really good question.
For me, the core idea of this story is, "I'm going to write the story that most specifically speaks to all my kinks at the moment. I'm not going to hold back or compromise, even if there are things a lot of people won't enjoy."
The humiliation / shame / taboo aspects of them being actual siblings really increases the voltage for me, personally. So yes, I'd say it wouldn't be the same for me.
[Report This]Date: October 28 2024 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
The tags in this story should've repelled me ... but that story summary, plus the extensive warning at the start, only made me want to read this bad boy even more. And man, am I glad I did. Wow.
First off, let me say that your prose and storytelling style is smooth as silk. The narrative flowed effortlessly between scenes and had me engaged at every twist and turn. The story even had a horror element to it, when Will was peeking around the basement and hearing noises coming from her bedroom. I was like, shit, am I reading erotica or horror? Haha. The horror/mystery plus telling the story from WIll's perspective made sense. He didn't know what was going on, and neither does the reader. I got really sucked into the story from this aspect alone, and I think you should be commended for it. Again, awesome storytelling here.
The smut and humiliation are especially good here. I love how we got to see Will hooking up with his girlfriend before everything broke down with his sister. His sister's humiliation of him is my favorite part of this story. You pulled it off here with her and his actions towards one another. Will's immediate subjugation to his sister was hot. And Madison taking a commanding lead on the situation couldn't be better.
The ending of this chapter was super hot, and I can't wait to read more. This again coming from someone that didn't care for the tags initially, lol.
Author's Response:
I appreciate this review so much. I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I think for a story like this, the best compliment I can get is, "These aren't my kinks, but I still like this story."
And thanks for picking up on the horror movie vibes. Someone once described to me the tension of being in a house you think is empty... when you suddenly realize it's not.
Author's Response:
I appreciate this review so much. I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I think for a story like this, the best compliment I can get is, "These aren't my kinks, but I still like this story."
And thanks for picking up on the horror movie vibes. Someone once described to me the tension of being in a house you think is empty... when you suddenly realize it's not.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2024 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome story!
[Report This]Date: October 18 2024 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Really good so far!
[Report This]Date: October 15 2024 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm enjoying the story so far, thanks for sharing!