[Report This]Date: September 29 2024 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great Job. THe formatting and and writing style is clean and easy to read.
Everything flowed together nicely. It was a fun quick read. I was hoping the actual sewing into the sock would be depicted as I thought that was a interesting twist.
Author's Response:
I’ve considered writing a second part, expanding on the rest of the tiny's existence, as I think there’s a lot of untapped potential there that usually isn't explored on this site. If I do, it will definitely include the actual sewing.
I ended the story where I did because I felt a bit intimidated trying to write the experience of actually being inside her shoe, and I will be skipping over that if I expand on the story.
I appreciate the kind words from everyone who left a review!
Author's Response:
I’ve considered writing a second part, expanding on the rest of the tiny's existence, as I think there’s a lot of untapped potential there that usually isn't explored on this site. If I do, it will definitely include the actual sewing.
I ended the story where I did because I felt a bit intimidated trying to write the experience of actually being inside her shoe, and I will be skipping over that if I expand on the story.
I appreciate the kind words from everyone who left a review!
[Report This]Date: September 28 2024 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was a nice quick read. You've got a great grasp on proper formatting, which is great for readability. Your word choice is descriptive too, you paint a good mental picture. Overall, good job!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2024 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Incredible, can never go wrong with a powerful skater girl/tomboy story.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2024 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved everything about it, excellent work