[Report This]Date: October 02 2024 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Kbella's Birthright.
Kbellas giantess story pulled me in right from the start. The descriptions were vivid, and the character(s) felt real, making it easy to get lost in the world she created. The pacing was perfect, with just the right mix of action and quieter moments. Cant wait to see where this will go, and what Kbella will do at a bigger size.
Author's Response:
I can tell you, she can't wait either ;)
- Kaylee
[Report This]Date: September 27 2024 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Kbella's Birthright.
Forgot to rate this story, time to fix that.
Other things I liked about this was how almost desperate you made Kbella for the growth, licking the vial, comparing it to a small cock, all that. I do think the story could've flowed a litle bit better, and I do thinkl it did start to drag on a little bit near the end, but overall I think it was quite fun and lie I said before, I liked the background you gave her. I felt it gave good context to why she wanted to grow so badly.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I totally agree, I probably could have ripped a page off near the end and skip to the growth, but I really wanted to build up to it, in my mind the entire construct thing was boring as well and my least favourite part of it, but I think... At least as it was presented in the original porn video, that I had to flesh it out and give it something more. In doing so I made it a biiiiiit to long, when I reaaaaaaaally just wanted to skip to the growth, but it just didn't seem right in my head.
~ Kaylee
Date: September 25 2024 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Kbella's Birthright.
As an intro it was pretty good, I liked learning that Kbella lives in what almost sounds like a slum in contrast to what one might think. As well as having, well, mixed feelings about her fans on Onlyfans. Gave some justification and context to her desire to grow and be free of all that. I also liked the touch that she'd walked past her destination and had to turn back to get to it, I don't know why but it just made it seem a little more real, a mistake anyone would make, Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I really tried to imbue her with personality, which is difficult since it's a real actress, but I hope it went well.
~ Kaylee
Author's Response:
Yeah, I really tried to imbue her with personality, which is difficult since it's a real actress, but I hope it went well.
~ Kaylee
Author's Response:
Yeah, I really tried to imbue her with personality, which is difficult since it's a real actress, but I hope it went well.
~ Kaylee