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Reviewer: Doberri123 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2024 6:30 AM Title: A Year of Shrinking

Great idea and story but way too short: he goes from normal height to doll size too quickly. Maybe some flash-back would help to fill the gaps

Reviewer: JD1910 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2024 2:21 PM Title: A Year of Shrinking

Great story and world building so far. Hopeful his increase in size and the girls attitude toward his usefulness will lad to some more interesting interactions between all of them. Looking forward to more chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. But this was meant as a one-shot - Probably there won't be another chapter.

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