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Reviewer: argoniaordesia Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2024 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

I loved this chapter! Matt's submission is a real pleasure to read.


I can't wait for the next chapter, especially the scene with Sarah. She's typically the kind of character I like.

Good luck with the writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you like it. The illustrated version is even better! You can get it on my DA :)

And yes, Sarah will be in the next chapter!

Reviewer: blazeScribe32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2024 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice one, Epic!

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