Maybe after a little teasing and training from Pam and love from Mary, Paul may end up wanting to stay a shrinkie. I think Pam isn't a bad person. She's tougher, but after a bit of revenge, she can be a bit gentler. Then she could really train him to be their plaything, but in the right way. Pam and Mary could end up as a couple with the loving little shrinkie and a 3-way scene would be incredible. The roles of good cop, bad cop is interesting but with more love. 

Okay, so I'm going to start with my personal preference and then throw a bunch of scenarios at you in the hope that maybe one of them will get your imagination going.

But first, let me preface this by saying that I'm a happy endings guy, mostly. I'm actually really excited to see that there are some happier options for Paul still on the table, as I was convinced that this was going to go the route of Pam corrupting Mary and that the latter's act would become less and less of an act until Paul was a forever shrinkee.

I don't mind cruelty in these stories, but I like for it to build to something, and that scenario, at least in my view, would be cruelty for cruelty's sake. So I was starting to think that this story (which is very well written and fun so far, by the way) may not be for me. And if that's the way this goes, there are people who are into that, and they deserve to have stories that deliver that for them. But now that I know that's not set in stone, my excitement for this story is renewed, and you did ask for ideas, so here they are!

All that being said, I may be the only person reading this that wants Paul to get his size back eventually. I also like his chemistry with Mary (especially in this latest chapter), so I think those two elements put me in the "Paul is restored and lives his life with one or more of his roommates" category.

Personally, I'd like to see Pam get some comeuppance as well. Maybe it's as simple as full-sized Paul and Mary going exclusive and cutting ties with Pam. Or perhaps Paul and Pam switch size roles, whether that leads to some giant couple stuff (not sure how you feel about that) or Mary having her own personal toy who (at least at the moment) seems to actually deserve her fate.

But if Paul is destined to remain tiny, I definitely want him to be with someone who treats him kindly. I think it would be interesting if Mary catches on to Pam trying to manipulate her into keeping Paul as a shrinkee forever (if that's what she's actually doing; I could be wrong about that) and ends up leaving her to stay with shrinkee Paul, treating him like a real person now that she knows this isn't a game. Or maybe Paul and Pam both end up stuck as shrinkees, and Paul gets human treatment while Pam is stuck being the couple's pet, even though she's the same size as Paul.

Or maybe Paul and Pam both end up tiny, Paul and Pam make up, and the trio resume their initial relationship with Pam being the only big one.

I don't know, I really like that idea of Mary drifting deeper toward Pam's view on things, Pam thinking she has her lover right where she wants her, and Mary flipping hard the other way when she finds out that Pam isn't going to let Paul change back. I think Mary has a lot of potential both for gentler things and for getting into the role of owner (with the belief that this is temporary fueling her to do things she normally wouldn't do).

Honestly, I think the option for Paul to be treated like a shrinkee forever is the most boring of the options listed, but that could just be my happy-ending bias talking, so I guess take that into account?

Well, there's my two cents on where the story could go. But I just wanted to reiterate that I've really liked the story the story so far (even if I didn't like where I thought it was going to go) and that you've created three really engaging characters here that I have strong feelings about, which is never easy to do. I spent so much time with the options thing that I wanted to make sure I got that out there at least.

In any case, good luck! I hope inspiration strikes you soon!

I would prefer the ‘Paul remains a shrinkie but someone treats him kindly’ option. I think its the most conducive to new chapter ideas, and is overall the most preferable option in my opinion

I’m liking this story a lot, and  am really looking forward to some sexy but gentle moments in the future. However, I did have a few questions about Pam because she is kind of confusing to me. Given that she ‘lied’ to Paul, how do we know if she didn’t also lie to Mary. Does a cure actually exist? And furthermore, does Pam even like Paul? Because throughout these chapters, nothing really makes it seem like she actually likes him despite being in a throuple with him for this long. I just wished she was a bit more affectionate towards Paul, in spite of her annoyance at being teased. But regardless, I’m still looking forward to more great chapters though!

Great story keep up please

Great story so far, looking forward to what the next chapters hold. Hopefully Pam's desire for dominance will reveal some interesting interests, and hopefully she can get Mary to indulge herself as well.

Author's Response:

I didn't expect to get a response so quickly. Thanks. If I get a few more positive reviews, I'll work on some more chapters.

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