Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2024 10:43 PM Title: From Sweet to Sinister!

It's really good love this kind of interaction can be fantastic to have some unaware (aware) actions with Millie mother 

Reviewer: ProbablyIX Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2024 1:02 PM Title: Some Fun with The Geek!

This is a really great start!

There're a few rough edges here and there, but they're super easy to look past, and the readability is great!

I do feel like some of the side characters could use a little more physical description (like Lisa or Tia), especially if they're gonna show up later. Though that's hardly the end of the world when the reader is filling in the gaps with their imagination anyway. 

Beyond that, I really like how you've written the characters. They each stand out from one another in unique ways, and are fun to read! The interactions between them and dialogue are really good too. They're consistent between characters, and read realistically. Your descriptive word choice is great too! Evocative enough to appreciate, while not distracting.

Super excited to see this continued!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate your honesty as it helps me out a lot, anyway this is my first story so I’m practically learning as I’m writing on. 

Now with Lisa, I should’ve described her better during the first chapter so perhaps I’ll go back and add in some details however I do have plans for chapter 4 where I was going to add her features in then. I wanted to shift the focus on Miss ivory and Millie instead of going into detail about 3 different girls at once.

As for Tia, I just straight up struggled with her. I ended up getting stuck when describing Sophie, Carla and Tia all at once, I didn’t want to make it boring and describe them as all basically being similar looking, I find it’s better to point out a characters features separately but doing it all at once, with three girls, is kind of hard.

I was worried my wording was beginning to sound repetitive but it means a lot you like it! Your review means so much to me and I hope you’ll enjoy the next chapter upon its completion! 

Have an amazing day!!

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2024 4:26 AM Title: Some Fun with The Geek!

Really great chapter and story so far. I really like the in shoe stuff and foot related content. Particularly how the smell and contact with her feet is slowly starting to make him attracted to her. Hoping to see some more foot interactions between them.

I also can't help but feel sorry for Millie, so it's nice to see her have some reprieve with James, and hopefully as they spend time together, it helps boost her confidence. I'm interested to see how their relationship will develop. Great story so far!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! I’m happy you enjoyed the in-shoe parts, I can confirm that they'll be a lot more :) and yeah her lack of friends and constant streak of being tormented is horrible but I don’t think she’ll be experiencing much bullying anymore ;) 

Reviewer: JstARdr Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 10:40 PM Title: Let the Shrinking Begin!

This story looks promising, looking forward to seeing it. Hope we can see some good unaware content, and hopefully some good unaware vore content.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I’ve got plans for some vore content eventually ;)

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 8:46 AM Title: Let the Shrinking Begin!

Not sure why you think it’s boring , I thought it was really good ^_^, him getting sat on was kind of abrupt, like not very descriptive , but aside from that I think it’s really good

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your feedback! I’m glad you enjoyed the story so far. I see what you mean about the scene where he gets sat on, it could definitely use a little more detail so I’ll get to work fixing that. Really appreciate your review!