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Reviewer: greenpeon Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

At least try to make your characters, their interactions and their motivations a little bit believable.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it was a comission for 1k words. Trying to fit all the comissioner asked + fleshing out the characters, in that short duration, is still a little bit hard for me.

I appreciate the comment! Will try to do better on the next :)

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