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Reviewer: Kaylee Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 18 2024 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Heya, I liked it, I know this is a commission piece, so there probably wasn't much room for setup, dialogue or exposition, it get's straight to the point ;)

Also, Kelly is the name of my girlfriend, so I find that really funny 

With love 

~~Kaylee

Reviewer: Raso719 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 14 2024 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start! I can't wait to see where this goes. Kelly is so playful. I can't wait to see how she has her fun in the next installments!

Reviewer: pseudoclever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2024 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Quite a fun read. I really like the way you handled the initial come-on, her icebreaker moment 

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2024 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh this is going to be good

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