[Report This]Date: November 07 2024 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Waited long for this one (had to create a new account, because my password is lost and the site doesn't send a new one).
The idea with the tape was nice. Size-specified bondage is one of the kinds of shenanigans that actually make the size relevant.
I have a good feeling about the next chapters, especially as the characters slowly start to become more unhinged. Until now, it has been rather tame, with only fondling.
Now it feels like there might be more to come and each character might have its own thing in store.
Heather, for example, might be closeted, but that could end up worse if she has tiny doll toys or even a tiny male doll to play roughly with Billie.
Or maybe those doll equipment, like a horse that has "inserts" so the doll won't come off.
Though, if the pen idea is still a thing, she might finally get to write that long report she's been stalling. As long as she doesn't have nervous pen habits. ;)
On another note, our MC really should have a lawyer take a look at that contract because I'm pretty sure it's not completely legal.
By the way, is there any form of schedule, or at least a rough estimate to tell if it would make sense to look for updates during the next weeks?
[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
So where is this store located? :)
Good story, keep it up!
[Report This]Date: November 01 2024 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Fun and captivating read.
Date: November 01 2024 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
Like it, looking forward to more :3
I also hope that in the future you will continue to post stories here. It's always sad when someone makes about 1 great story then disappears forever. Wish we could lock up all the good size writers in a luxury dungeon somwhere so that they have to write forever ^_^
That aside, loving it so far. I don't know how long you plan to go with it, and I don't know if you have a general idea for how you want things to conclude. Many possibilities and options, will she come in and have shinanagens for a long time? Or maybe she finds herself with an owner. Lots of possibilites, whatever you go with I am sure it will be fun. You could write 2 more chapters or 20, the possibilites are part of the fun.
Will check often to see any updates. Happy Halloween and hope life is going well.
[Report This]Date: October 30 2024 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Excellent story
[Report This]Date: September 30 2024 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
I literally just made an account after lurking here almost a decade, purely to review this story. Love where it's going, love the idea of it, am curious exactly how busty Billie is though, bra wise. And I'm hoping we get to see her being normal sized doing breastplay to a new hire tiny guy/gal...or tiny version of that one gal who kept feeling her up, sam I think?
Author's Response:
Thank you for creating a profile just to give my story a review! Billie's coworkers are getting too attached to playing with her big tits to let her skip a shrinking session, but we'll see!
Date: September 21 2024 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is great so far, I hope Sam gets to dominate and play with her Booby Doll later ^_^ an ending where she doesn't get restored and someone takes her home for good would be great, but that's just my preference.
Author's Response:
Oh, don't worry, Sam will get to play with that Booby Doll very soon. Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2024 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really like that story. It's something else from the usual stuff, I don't find as enticing, on this site that seems to be all about Crushing, Eating, Domineering, and... Feet.
Here we rather got a form of dehumanization. A switch of role to a toy that feels more interesting than getting off on having tiny slaves (which usually goes weird about any possible given tasks).
Also, I like that I don't have to feel too bad reading this. Billie still has rights. After her shift she's completely free and isn't without rights. Rather she's on this fetish trip on a more or less voluntary basis. Feels better than the usual misery p*** that is rather common.
Last, I find the toy premise great. Especially how the characters convey it. Gracies "so detailed" was my favorite till now, as it was almost innocent. The story plays with the possible size shenanigans and allows for interesting, kinky, and creative ideas to happen. Until now, it was mostly handplay, but maybe there'll be more creative plays later.
Just as an idea, she could get bound in a doll box. I could also imagine Gracie to "impale her" on a doll hip height collection figurine stand whose tip is prepped with glue so she won't leave her position. Later it is revealed that the pole is in truth a pencil (embedded in the stand) to entice people to sign for the credit card offer by using her as the writing tool. Might be a bit much, but in general, this idea of being playful and creative of the possibilities of sizeplay is far more interesting to me than the usual vore and foot fetish.
I really feel like this story has enormous potential and wish all the writing spirit and creativity to the author.
Author's Response:
Thank you for this detailed review.
Yes, as much as I like scenarios where the shrunken person has no rights, I wanted to do something slightly different with this story. Billie has the option to just walk away after every day, but she keeps putting herself back into a situation where she's being dehumanized, which I think is more fun and intriguing. And hot, haha.
I like your idea about the doll stand and pencil. I might have to steal it. :)
[Report This]Date: September 10 2024 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love all the handplay.. really good stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 10 2024 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love F/f, love dub con, love seeing both together. I have enjoyed both chapters of this story, am looking forward to seeing more, hopefully more with Heather and potentially Billie's mother if she is ever sent home small. Either way, thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you!