[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
This story is pretty fun so far! Very breast-focused. I love that this is all Billie’s choice to show up each day. It would be fun to see her bump into a coworker outside of work - I wonder how they’d react to her? Especially the ones that have violated her.
Date: January 26 2025 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Nice that there's a new chap.
As a small gripe, I don't like
the picture that was added to the first chapter. Partly, because Billie
read a bit smaller in my imagination, and not as mature, but also,
because in my personal opinion, it doesn't fit quite the tone of the
story. The store feels more like a well-lighted place, with a bit of a
surreal bright atmosphere. The picture is more like a dungeon shot, as
dark as it is. I think an anime style would fit much better to the size
play. It would also make it seem a little less dark and tragic and more
like crazy hentai plot. Also, the collar seems wrong, as the one you
described sounded like something futuristic, and not plain chains.
Now
that that's out, back to the positive. I like how she was rinsed
afterward. More like you'd wash a toy, rather than a person. Just good he didn't go to flush her insides.
As always, you can be absolutely free to take up any of my ideas. Thinking them up is wholly different from reading what happens to them. So I'm more than excited about what you'd make with them.
Yeah, I think clothes add to the experience. Especially with objectification, keeping the factors for the illusion up is part of the fun. Clothes are also a form of interaction, as is changing and taking them off. Without them, there's not as much room for interaction aside from the carnal desire, which may get a bit dull if it's the same thing on repeat. If this story would just be about Billie getting groped for the Xth-time it might end up boring. It's the possibilities that are opened up that make this so exciting.
Regarding ideas, I'd have this:
Gracy interaction: Still about being placed on the glue pole. Yet because Gracy wants the full immersion she goes further. She'd place clothes on her, the kind that can just be pulled on from above, like dresses or skirts, of course in anime style. Then maybe add typical items, like a microphone or a magical girl wand, gluing them to her hands. Then she'd glue her feet to the ground and place a wireframe around her body, where the wires would keep her head and limbs in place, but so that big people can still adjust the form. After making her take various poses, she'd find that her shouting still disturbs the illusion and therefore places an anime face mask with a gag on her. Eyes with lenses or open, so no blind play. Then she'd place her between her other figurines so nobody can tell her apart. Maybe add a wig to make the illusion perfect.
Would be fun if someone searches for her, but can't see through the setup. Of course, eventually, she'd be saved.
This
one could also be used as a prize game, where people will have to
figure out the mini out of the figurines (maybe having to buy the wrong
guess), and most fail miserably because Billie is so damn convincing
(maybe until someone notices the wetness below her pole). After all,
tech shops sometimes also deal in this stuff. Maybe this one will even
use a specially produced "Billie" figurine for this game.
Also,
regarding the pencil idea: How about that one uses a slight drain
function where it "connects" to Billie and uses the liquid via a
chemical reaction to create color? This way, she'd truly become an
integral part of the writing instrument and it would be essential to
stimulate her properly to keep it writing.
Though, maybe giving it a squeeze or shaking it would suffice. ;)
Those ideas would also work with a Billie in uniform. I mean, they can still reveal everything, but being uniformed adds to the "employed" experience.
For the arcade idea, you may like to read "Sex Machine" by QueenNyanlathotepon deviantart (https://www.deviantart.com/queennyanlathotep/art/Sex-Machine-Shrinking-878519631). That one covers it very well, but I think the idea could've been fleshed out by "playing" more with it. Like alternating strokes, using the vibration function with impeccable timing at the perfect spot, you know, all the highscore hunting stuff.
Also, maybe one could use her directly as a mouse? I
guess one would have to place conductors to her nipples for left- and
right-click and to her back a laser sheet for movement. She'd probably
quickly complain about the disproportional attention to lefty. Aside
from the flowing electricity of course. Not sure if you got more
modifications in mind for a functional mouse. Some setup to keep her
straight, of course.
Hope none of these ideas go too far.
Might partly be a bit much, but I also prefer it if things remain within
certain limits (though, as I said, remaining uninjured and being able
to go free afterward suffice for my shallow boundaries). I'm not a fan
of pure torture and don't get the excitement of pain solely to cause
pain. So I think your story still manages quite well in this regard
(though maybe allow Billie to have her breaks once in a while).
Author's Response:
Hey, thank you for the detailed reviews and ideas on this story. I really appreciate it.
Sorry the updates are so far apart, but I do them between my job, family life, etc.
Also, thanks for the critique on my story pic. I agreed and took it down. I may post another one in the near future.
Btw,
if you're interested, I'd love to have you beta read my chapters before
I post them. I also plan to use your mouse pad and doll display ideas
in coming chapters. Really like those! Message me at the email listed on the latest chapter if you want to discuss this further. Have a great day!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2024 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2024 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Another great chapter.
Don't worry, I don't think it's particularly dark yet. What I consider dark is if the character is completely hopeless and has lost any agenda. If there's absolutely no chance for them ever getting out of the torture, which you find quite often on this site, with mini's living in a world where they can only wait for a gruesome death or are kept against their will, with no hope to ever get a better lot in life.
Billie is in no way like this. She's still in on all this on her own terms. Also, I don't mind temporary situations. Predicaments keep things interesting and are basically the staple point of size play stories. I think you can still go quite a bit further (to be honest, my ideas went a lot further). As long as she can at the end of the day walk out of this all with all her limbs intact and her mind not forever in shambles I wouldn't consider it particularly dark (or week, or month if it's a big predicament).
Also, I'd still consider things pretty tame. Until now, things stayed at fondling, so there are still a lot of other bases to claim.
Personally, I hope we'll soon go back to her wearing clothes. If she's naked right at the start, there's little way to go from there. Also, they make a lot of the charm. Outfits are a part of doll play after all. The uniform added a lot to her role as a sexualized toy. You know, instead of real clothes, they could now have her wear real cheap plastic doll clothes instead, to save costs. The kind that gets mass-produced for dolls. It adds to the figurine play, as you seldom keep dolls naked. (Yet they may have small cutouts at certain spots.)
I'd say, I'd like to see Billie in bigger predicaments revolving around her size. I'm sure we'll soon see more intense things than fondling. I'm here for Billie's predicaments and this story does a great job at promising some that aren't quite common and will hopefully be intense.
I'm all in with seeing the different approaches of her co-workers. Especially Gracie. Sam seems pretty straightforward, so I guess things will stay at quick direct bodily interactions with her. Gracie gives me the impression as if she'd love to collect her for real. Lucy could be interesting too. She doesn't seem to have much agenda yet, but I'm sure one could find her doing a lot to Billie, if it means promoting sales while at the same time doing stuff to Billie. She seems like the kind to invent "exciting" marketing initiatives. Such as a living sex machine arcade. Bind Billie to an arcade machine that stimulates her and see which customer breaks the highscore based on her climax. Would be fun to get some highscore hunters, who'll try to "break her" with the perfect game method.
I'm also waiting for Heather's return, who may add a lot more, once she awakens her darker fantasies regarding having a living doll. I dare say she has a lot of equipment at home that can be repurposed. (Though, she's currently out. So I'm curious how she's going to get reintroduced.)
To be honest, I'm pretty curious if there's anything other than the stuff that already happened one could do regarding size play, based on the fact that Billie has big boobs. Couldn't quite figure out anything that would repurpose them. (Maybe using them as a mousepad? Might work for an IT store, but I think she's not the right size for that.)
So let's see what's going to happen next!
The next chapter can't come soon enough!
Author's Response:
I suppose the interaction has been pretty tame overall. The latest chapter goes a bit more graphic, but still no violence or torture. That's not my thing.
Yes, I'm planning to focus more on the different approaches of her coworkers in this second half of the story. There will be lots of interactions with both male and female giants.
I know you like Billie with clothes, but, going forward, I don't think her coworkers will let her keep them on for very long once she shrinks!
You've given me some more ideas I might steal. The sex arcade machine is brilliant, and I love the idea of using her mini jugs as a mousepad!
Thanks again for leaving a review. Hope you enjoy the latest chapter.
[Report This]Date: December 12 2024 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
I was genuinely happy to find that a new chapter was uploaded.
Seems like things are now getting real and beyond the former somewhat reined-in behavior.
Arguably, one could say that Sam is among the more favorable characters (very arguably). While she says demeaning things, she uses them to justify her actions. In some way, she thus treats Billie as a consenting person (which from an ethical and legal point wouldn't stand, but we already could say that about her working contract, so I doubt Billie is gonna fight that in court). This treatment is far better than for a mere toy because you wouldn't talk to a toy you're using. I have a feeling that some of the other characters won't do that anymore if they're into it. Something I'd really like to see. After all, it's part of the objectification if she isn't treated as a (horny) person.
I need to say, that the dressing actually had a bigger impact on me than the stripping. Some of the very first acts of doll play.
I hope that
Billie will at least maintain a partly reluctant attitude to the more
crazy things that are going to be "in store for her" (I'll see me out).
If you'd implement any of my ideas that would be even more of a reason for me to anticipate the next chapter. By all means, go for it.
Personally, I imagined the dollstand idea so that Gracy would first lower her on it. Once the tip enters, Billie would tiptoe on top of it, to not sink further. For this reason, Gracy (or any other handler) would press her lower with the whole hand, saying "No tiptoeing, as she should stand comfortably on her feet there". Then hold her in place for a moment, so that the glue sets (of course, there's a solvent, or it's temporary), and after this leave her there, pedaling her legs, which makes the sensation worse, while being unable to get off by herself.
For the horse riding experience idea, one could tie her feet below the underbelly, so she cannot lift herself off the attachment pole on the saddle anymore.
As I said, I would be honored to find you using any ideas of mine, but you do you.
This story is for me a far notch above most of the others on this side, which are less about exploration of the possibilities and more about dominance (you don't dominate a toy), death, and misery. As this story is different in this regard, I have a far lighter mood reading it.
PS: Billie should have asked for more than one dollar raise. I think at least two would've been in.
PPS: Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I hope it comes soon.Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying the story! Hopefully things aren't getting too dark for you with the latest chapter.
Those are fun, sexy ideas you've described. I have fun plans for how Billie is treated by her coworkers, so stay tuned!
And yes, a dollar raise is nowhere near enough to put up with this stuff, but that's corporate retail, right, lol?
Date: December 03 2024 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is there any way Heather returns as a rescuer/kidnapper but believing it’s for Billie’s own good? It can lead up to the escape hatch in the back that leads to heathers purse, to be taken to her home, get a sign statement that trader moes is completely abusing its mini employees? An sometime in the night they cheers over wine or gives over to letting her drink with her, and leads to heather passed out to billie summoning courage to explore Heather, but slipping under her clothes to feel her fit sculpt abs, thighs, breast, nipples, to eventually crawl on heathers crotch to play with. This will entice the slumbering giantess to indirectly without knowingly use Billie as a sex toy.
Author's Response:
That is a fun idea. Don't worry, I still have plans for Heather
[Report This]Date: December 02 2024 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
Please continue!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2024 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Waited long for this one (had to create a new account, because my password is lost and the site doesn't send a new one).
The idea with the tape was nice. Size-specified bondage is one of the kinds of shenanigans that actually make the size relevant.
I have a good feeling about the next chapters, especially as the characters slowly start to become more unhinged. Until now, it has been rather tame, with only fondling.
Now it feels like there might be more to come and each character might have its own thing in store.
Heather, for example, might be closeted, but that could end up worse if she has tiny doll toys or even a tiny male doll to play roughly with Billie.
Or maybe those doll equipment, like a horse that has "inserts" so the doll won't come off.
Though, if the pen idea is still a thing, she might finally get to write that long report she's been stalling. As long as she doesn't have nervous pen habits. ;)
On another note, our MC really should have a lawyer take a look at that contract because I'm pretty sure it's not completely legal.
By the way, is there any form of schedule, or at least a rough estimate to tell if it would make sense to look for updates during the next weeks?
Author's Response:
Those are all tantalizing ideas. I might steal some of them. :)
Sorry for the long wait between updates, but I think I've rearranged my
schedule so I can update more frequently.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
So where is this store located? :)
Good story, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Why? Do you want to be a customer or Mini employee? :)
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 01 2024 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Fun and captivating read.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: November 01 2024 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
Like it, looking forward to more :3
I also hope that in the future you will continue to post stories here. It's always sad when someone makes about 1 great story then disappears forever. Wish we could lock up all the good size writers in a luxury dungeon somwhere so that they have to write forever ^_^
That aside, loving it so far. I don't know how long you plan to go with it, and I don't know if you have a general idea for how you want things to conclude. Many possibilities and options, will she come in and have shinanagens for a long time? Or maybe she finds herself with an owner. Lots of possibilites, whatever you go with I am sure it will be fun. You could write 2 more chapters or 20, the possibilites are part of the fun.
Will check often to see any updates. Happy Halloween and hope life is going well.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying this story and all the shrunken shenanigans that Billie has and will endure!
[Report This]Date: October 30 2024 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Excellent story
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 30 2024 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
I literally just made an account after lurking here almost a decade, purely to review this story. Love where it's going, love the idea of it, am curious exactly how busty Billie is though, bra wise. And I'm hoping we get to see her being normal sized doing breastplay to a new hire tiny guy/gal...or tiny version of that one gal who kept feeling her up, sam I think?
Author's Response:
Thank you for creating a profile just to give my story a review! Billie's coworkers are getting too attached to playing with her big tits to let her skip a shrinking session, but we'll see!
Date: September 21 2024 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is great so far, I hope Sam gets to dominate and play with her Booby Doll later ^_^ an ending where she doesn't get restored and someone takes her home for good would be great, but that's just my preference.
Author's Response:
Oh, don't worry, Sam will get to play with that Booby Doll very soon. Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2024 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really like that story. It's something else from the usual stuff, I don't find as enticing, on this site that seems to be all about Crushing, Eating, Domineering, and... Feet.
Here we rather got a form of dehumanization. A switch of role to a toy that feels more interesting than getting off on having tiny slaves (which usually goes weird about any possible given tasks).
Also, I like that I don't have to feel too bad reading this. Billie still has rights. After her shift she's completely free and isn't without rights. Rather she's on this fetish trip on a more or less voluntary basis. Feels better than the usual misery p*** that is rather common.
Last, I find the toy premise great. Especially how the characters convey it. Gracies "so detailed" was my favorite till now, as it was almost innocent. The story plays with the possible size shenanigans and allows for interesting, kinky, and creative ideas to happen. Until now, it was mostly handplay, but maybe there'll be more creative plays later.
Just as an idea, she could get bound in a doll box. I could also imagine Gracie to "impale her" on a doll hip height collection figurine stand whose tip is prepped with glue so she won't leave her position. Later it is revealed that the pole is in truth a pencil (embedded in the stand) to entice people to sign for the credit card offer by using her as the writing tool. Might be a bit much, but in general, this idea of being playful and creative of the possibilities of sizeplay is far more interesting to me than the usual vore and foot fetish.
I really feel like this story has enormous potential and wish all the writing spirit and creativity to the author.
Author's Response:
Thank you for this detailed review.
Yes, as much as I like scenarios where the shrunken person has no rights, I wanted to do something slightly different with this story. Billie has the option to just walk away after every day, but she keeps putting herself back into a situation where she's being dehumanized, which I think is more fun and intriguing. And hot, haha.
I like your idea about the doll stand and pencil. I might have to steal it. :)
[Report This]Date: September 10 2024 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love all the handplay.. really good stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 10 2024 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love F/f, love dub con, love seeing both together. I have enjoyed both chapters of this story, am looking forward to seeing more, hopefully more with Heather and potentially Billie's mother if she is ever sent home small. Either way, thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you!