




Date: February 20 2025 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah Chloe is once again taking a backseat in this chapter. Even when she stuck the 8 inch man into her pussy there was no real description of the event, just the covering of him under the sheet.
I mean Ellie is interesting, but now there is going to be another doll, and I just want to see more Chloe! She is the one with all of the real power! Maybe you should do more of a Chloe focused segment before you get into the next Doll. Give the new Doll more time to gradually come to life
Otherwise it's just an all doll story, and I think it could be a lot more than that!
Cheers though! Enjoyable story overall.
Date: February 20 2025 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
There's a double paste in there somewhere, a lot of repeated text, I think right after:
Chloe felt some tears come to her eyes.
Date: December 28 2024 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think chapter 3 spoiled me with content length! Chapter 10 was a cute chapter. The joke at the end was a real dad joke! I am looking forward to see more of Chloe in the future. I can understand why you like writing Elle so much as she is like Elle in wonderland or A Connecticut Ellie in King Arth'ers Court. But I am missing the sheer power of Chloe and her ability to shrink men or grow herself. Is there ever a case where Chloe would have to grow? Or was that just a quick experiment for her when she first got the power?
Author's Response:
Keep in mind the every time Ellie changes a man's size, so far, that's Chloe doing that for her. At the moment Chloe is sorta taking a back seat while living out things through Ellie's perspective; much akin to how we did when we were kids using toys to give life to our imaginations. She's taking a break from cosplay and buying clothes for herself while expanding Ellie's wardrobe and finding/making clothes for Ellie, and even clothes which they can share while Chloe is at Ellie's size.
Chloe does do some growth again in both Chapters 7 and 8.
Also from chapter 8, "For a brief moment she considered growing herself to a larger size, just for the opportunity to use her powerful strength to peel apart the car."
Chloe isn't impulsive. She could have destroyed the car but then the people they rescued could not have then used it to escape.
Also from Chapter 8, "A breeze began to lift Chloe's hair. She truly enjoyed these rare moments of being a giantess. She had learned already that changing her size meant no more using hair bands or hair clips. They’d just fall out, and she didn’t want to risk losing them while on missions, inadvertently leaving behind samples of her DNA. Sometimes braids didn't work either, as the changes in hair thickness resulted in different tensions than at her normal size. Each strand of hair went from normal hair thickness, to like the thickness of thread, or string, or rope, or cable thicknesses, as she got larger. Right now her hair was behaving like a loose sail on a sailboat. It moved in waves with a slow-motion kind of effect, like a really huge flag. The strands of her hair ruffled in the wind with a low, bass tone."
Chloe is yearning to be big but knows that she would be doing so at the risk of losing public anonymity. She limits such times to the cover of darkness in remote areas. She is not yet ready to go full Tony Stark and say screw it, I'm Iron Man. At least, not yet.
Date: November 19 2024 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
So this was the first crimefighting mission and I still like "snack size" "doll size" and so on, much much better.
If I were a criminal and someone yelled "snack size" and suddenly I'm as tiny as a snack. I would be petrified after being grabbed and lifted to a dolls mouth!
Author's Response:
The women are not the villains in this Giantess/Size story. They're playful, not malicious. They're not interested in anyone being petrified of them. The criminals they capture, they expect them to submit, respect, and obey them; not live in fear of them.
Date: November 17 2024 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, Ellie is getting so sadistic and dommy!
Date: November 15 2024 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm enjoying the story so far. I look forward to seeing what happens next!
Date: November 01 2024 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story gets better and better with each chapter. Not sure if this is the route you’re planning to take, but the role reversal between Chloe and Ellie as “doll” and “owner” is super hot, especially as Ellie learns to become more and more dominant.
Author's Response:
Many thanks. This is probably my favorite review so far, with the "better and better with each chapter" part.
Due to my writing process, I sometimes go back to polish-up and expand upon parts of chapters after I post them, so if you read Chapter 7 again you might find it even better than the first time.
I hope.
Yes, Ellie will be growing in confidence and assertiveness. There will be more roleplay of Ellie being in charge while Chloe remains the one with the power.
For now.
I have ideas on how Ellie also gains powers but I have other world-building storylines which I still want to add, first.
The next chapter will reveal unintended side effects which are not specific to the parameters of Chloe's original three wishes, without necessarily being contrary to them.
Thanks again for reading.
Date: November 01 2024 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
One thing I am not getting is why Buck isn't orgasming with all of the play that he is being put through. Especially when his pubic hair was being rubbed on her clit. I think that means his cock would have been in her vagina at that point. Even if not, he is being run through her wet places so much, how is the inside of the doll not covered in cum at this point?
Author's Response:
Interesting question.
The way it is described in the story, Ellie would be holding him upside-down. She's trying lots of options and positions but holding him by his legs with her forefinger on his backside would place his cock most of the time above her clit.
Maybe he has been cuming but at his small size, it's just a few tiny drops of additional slipperiness.
Another possibility is that he's not at all aroused by his predicament. He might not be attracted to women at all, whether doll or human. It hasn't been relative to the story, yet.
As for Ellie's insides, it is part of her regular daily routine to shower. Maybe every two days. She takes in a bunch of water through her mouth and swishes it around inside of her hollow body. This was described at one point of the story. Bathing, eating & drinking, feeding the collection of shrunken men etc. these recurring tasks all continue even if they aren't stated specifically.
There might be updates when there is something new, related to the story and relationships between the characters.
Date: October 10 2024 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
I don't know if this is in the works or not, but I would love to see Ellie at full human size or even as a real giantess. It would be pretty exciting.
Author's Response:
I do have something along these lines percolating in my mind, a means which fits within the parameters of Chloe's superpowers. There is a hint about it in Chapter Three.
I don't know when, or if, that will be added to the story. In the upcoming chapters, Chloe will be having more dolls come to life. If Ellie also gains superpowers before those dolls are introduced into the storyline, Chloe would likely anticipate too much potential for conflict and decide against making any additional dolls.
Date: October 10 2024 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked the doll sized, bite sized, stuff better. It was cuter.
Thanks for cleaning up the text, it's a fun story!
Author's Response:
I prefer them, also. I hope the need for the change will make more sense in the upcoming chapters, when Ellie gets to join Chloe on her crimefighting missions.
Date: October 05 2024 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please fix the spacing in the latest chapter! It's umreadable.
Author's Response:
Fixed.
I had stated that in the "chapter notes" (now deleted) at the very top, that I would have to come back later to fix all of that mess.
Done.
Please give it another try. Thanks.
Date: September 26 2024 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Maybe Chloe could "shift" Ellie's body so she has nipples and a vagina at some point.
Author's Response:
That would be outside the parameters of Chloe's abilities, but in Chapter Six, or maybe later, there will be... developments. Thanks for reading so far.





Date: September 11 2024 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not bad, but please put breaks or enters between paragraphs. Putting one big wall of text makes it hard to read. Although I do likebthe boob stuff here.
Author's Response:
Oh, definitely! It's such a mess and so hard on the eyes. I plan to come back and fix it later.
I tried fixing the first chapter when I posted the 2nd one but I'm still unfamiliar with the tools here on the Giantess World website.
The two chapters so far were copy/paste from where I wrote it on my MacBook and on there it's properly divided into paragraphs, with indents and everything.
Date: September 08 2024 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story I hope you continue it
Author's Response:
Thanks. I decided to add a few more paragraphs to this first chapter. I hope it is an improvement. It made more sense to include them here, rather than at the start of the next chapter.