Date: October 05 2024 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please fix the spacing in the latest chapter! It's umreadable.
Author's Response:
Fixed.
I had stated that in the "chapter notes" (now deleted) at the very top, that I would have to come back later to fix all of that mess.
Done.
Please give it another try. Thanks.
Date: September 26 2024 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Maybe Chloe could "shift" Ellie's body so she has nipples and a vagina at some point.
Author's Response:
That would be outside the parameters of Chloe's abilities, but in Chapter Six, or maybe later, there will be... developments. Thanks for reading so far.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2024 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not bad, but please put breaks or enters between paragraphs. Putting one big wall of text makes it hard to read. Although I do likebthe boob stuff here.
Author's Response:
Oh, definitely! It's such a mess and so hard on the eyes. I plan to come back and fix it later.
I tried fixing the first chapter when I posted the 2nd one but I'm still unfamiliar with the tools here on the Giantess World website.
The two chapters so far were copy/paste from where I wrote it on my MacBook and on there it's properly divided into paragraphs, with indents and everything.
Date: September 08 2024 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story I hope you continue it
Author's Response:
Thanks. I decided to add a few more paragraphs to this first chapter. I hope it is an improvement. It made more sense to include them here, rather than at the start of the next chapter.