Date: February 07 2026 11:13 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
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[Report This]Date: May 03 2025 7:49 AM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
I didn't actually realise that you had returned to your original content. Great to see the old classics back!!
[Report This]Date: September 06 2024 1:41 AM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Excited this classic is back, and with Maggie and friends.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2024 8:08 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Glad to see this story back! Love reading the parts where Maggie uses Scott as a slipper. Kinda hope she falls asleep with him like that
Author's Response:
Anything's possible, especially with all the bad influences around Maggie
[Report This]Date: August 26 2024 2:45 AM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
I’m loving this newest turn in the series, I hope this experience only strengthens the brothers relationship. Can’t wait to see what you have in store for them next!
Author's Response:
The sibling interplay will be a big part of these upcoming scenes. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: August 25 2024 4:12 AM Title: Time-Out 6: Power Play
Hello! Long time enjoyer of this website here, but I rarely log in to leave a review. However, I felt it was necessary in this case. This story is amazing, I come onto this page for smut, but stumbled on a literary masterpiece. Just wanted to say I appreciate the time and effort you have put into this piece and intend to read the next addition to this series with bated breath.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2024 9:33 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
I hope that Judy will appear in the story soon.
Author's Response:
She definitely does (hypothetically) have much more of a part to play in this story in the future, though for the time being it'll be the Maggie & Friends show
Date: August 24 2024 4:45 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
I'm so happy with this revival! I hope you'll consider making Size Matters Vol 2
Author's Response:
I admit that one's probably less likely, but I'll never say never to anything
[Report This]Date: August 24 2024 1:42 AM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
*rubs his eyes*
There's hope for Carly yet!
Always nice to see more of the classics.
Date: August 23 2024 10:03 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Yes! A return to this story! I was reading it recently and wishing there was more. Thank the commissioner for me! This chapter was a great ease back into the world. One of my favorite shrinking scenarios ever. I really like how the dynamic between all the siblings has developed across all the stories but especially in this entry. Cant wait for more. Hope bailey doesn’t go too hard on him but Im at least glad maggie is protecting kyle relatively, given his inexperience down at that size lol. Super excited to see more of this story!
Author's Response:
Yep, back at long last. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: August 23 2024 3:21 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Wow, might've been my favorite series on this site, I never thought I'd see on the top of the Most Recent ever again... I'm just as eager for this as Bailey
Author's Response:
Probably a fair assumption to make, after the amount of time since the last update
[Report This]Date: July 19 2023 1:46 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Re-Reading this story (and series) for the....I can't recall how many times. And I feel I need to leave a comment specifically here.
And I have to say I do hope you come back to it/finish this saga one day in the future.
It's just so freaking good.
I love the gradual but powerful development of the characters and the situation Scott is in just keeps devolving for him.
I have to say, loving the scenarios where he's with the middle aged women (especially their wine addled adventures XD)
But Sylvia has me intrigued, another older woman. But one who's use of Scott isn't as bad, or the very least, she's not actively making it as bad as some of the others.
She's one of the few ' lighter' characters in terms of their treatment of Scott.
But this chapter I keep coming back to as it has me hooked, what is Syliva's plans, what can she do to Judy, what can Scott do if he decides to spill the beans.
I know Judy seems to be on a power trip and is dreaming high.
But could Sylvia be a way out for him...a way out from the torment, of the seemingly never ending (kinky XD) but forced subjegation at the hands of Nancy, or his mother's seemingly aloof nature. (and her own subjegation of him, albeit less erotic in intent)
Sylvia has me intrigued, and I love it. And I enjoy reading her character and her interaction with Scott.
Your writing is always a treat, and a gift, your description, your characters, your erotically charged segments, intercut with the worldbuilding, all make for a wonderful read.
And I do hope you come back to this series in future. I feel it needs a nice cap off. (and Justice for Scott XD I may not get it, but I can dream)....and for some reason, I keep picturing Judy and Nancy under Sylvia's feet.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the kind words about this story & series. There's definitely meant to be more to Sylvia than has been revealed yet, though unfortunately she and certain other plot threads just ended up being casualties of my needing to pause this story for so long. Still, I'll never say never either, as there will be at least a brief continuation now, so anything's possible in the future.
Date: August 26 2022 12:16 AM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
What is Sylvia's age? Or hight, or foot size.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2022 11:33 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Hope this gets continued eventually.
Date: February 25 2021 10:02 PM Title: Time-Out 3: Son of the Year
Time out 3 chapter 4 - i love it
Date: April 28 2020 6:09 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Do you think you'll ever continue this series?
Date: November 22 2019 11:57 AM Title: Time-Out 6: Power Play
Wow, did Maggie enjoy abusing his member like this? Does she intend to go further that way in?
Date: November 03 2019 7:49 AM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Ok so Judy enjoys abusing Scott in a sexual way? Why doesn't she ever talk about it? Or even Scott? Would be nice to see more of tis stuff between the two
Author's Response:
The series is largely told in Scott's perspective, so some of those questions are intentionally meant to be left ambiguous. Thanks for reading
Date: June 19 2019 1:42 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Not a chance to see this ended? Maybe with little twist in Scott mind as he slowly discovers he secretly like his sister domain (and of course her feet)
Author's Response:
Yeah, this story has been sort of an unfortunate casualty as my focus in the macro-writing community has shifted the last couple years. I wouldn't call it dead, as I still have it mapped out, but I can't promise any definite plans to continue.
Date: October 20 2018 12:08 PM Title: Time-Out 4: Boot Camp
ps. Upon seeing your note in the last chapter end note, I now rescind my earlier statements about people telling what stories to work on lol
Author's Response:
I forgot that was there, too, since this story is one of my older ones.