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Reviewer: flumsyarts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2026 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 :The girlfriend's arrival


Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic.


Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level!


Feel free to reach out to me via Discord aeroo_draws Hope to hear from you soon

Reviewer: Ryebread9600 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2024 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 :The girlfriend's arrival

Please continue!

Reviewer: greenpeon Signed star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2024 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 :The girlfriend's arrival

The concept is good but the delivery leaves a lot to be desired. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'll try to improve in the next chapters. 

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