[Report This]Date: October 01 2024 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the story, really enjoyed the fantasy setting in this one. The description of Alyss after Jacquemin got shrunk down was very intense, it's a pity he never had the chance to explore any of those curves before being swallowed.
Purely personal taste but I would've liked a tiny bit more detail on Jacquemin being 'expelled' out of Alyss, but the implication is good too.
Always excited to see more stuff from you!
[Report This]Date: September 06 2024 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story as always, concise and yet doesn't skimp on the details.
Love the twist on old archetypes, makes the story familiar and timeless but doesn't exactly spell out everything.
I especially love the digestion scene. Most authors kind of cop out and leave it to the reader's imagination (including me) but you go the extra mile and spend a bit more time with it.
Keep up the good work, your catalog is great!
Author's Response: Thank you for the high praise, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!