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Reviewer: kickflipper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2024 8:51 PM Title: Story 2: SODA SUCKER

Awesome chapter, loved how it had a little bit of everything. You do a great job with descriptions and making people feel immense. Here’s to hoping for an ass chapter next!

Reviewer: dump dan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2024 7:36 PM Title: Story 2: SODA SUCKER

dani had to repeat her own name all day, like that show we all mostly grew out of, all day every day until she gave people ptsd. dani was so loud, she distracted everyone from the real problem, dani was in denial, dani never got changed dani and dani had to say dan danny dan dana dan dan da da da danna dan dany dan dana dan dan every day as a mantra for her exs disgusting smelly hoodie tied around her face. also... trevor was easy to manipulate.. he coudnt keep up. danis role was a noise maker a racketeer a sleep wrecker, dani was the russian sleep experiment, in the mean time vanny or vanessa who appeared to be a real semi missing or dead person locked in with a virus had full access to murder anyone she wanted in her ill state. dani was so self centered she didn't care that the threat effected her family. that in the world in future they will all be at risk. so long as she could continue her Russian sleep experiment she didn't care. she refused to think about what was going to happen... her name tag read dani incase it was too hard to remember the past year she had yelled it across the net.        



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Reviewer: aHomester Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2024 11:51 AM Title: Story 1: CONTACT INFO

Very nice starting chapter! Love the way you described Alice

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