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Reviewer: Lightning Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2024 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

Amazing story, I literally made an account so I could post a review. This is my favorite story on this site. 

I mostly read this because giga and tera girls were mentioned but I wasn't actually expecting a great plot as well, im invested.

The part that most surprised me was when Ryan separated from mimi, I honestly thought that was someone else's pov at the start of the chapter before it was revealed that it was Ryan who escaped. Though with the one year time skip it now seems he missed mimis entire pregnancy and the birth of his daughter, Ryan is my favorite character in this so I feel pretty bad for him. I hope he gets some cool moments in the next part and a happy reunion. Maybe Ryan saving mimi somehow like how she saved him from the prison, although it was mimis fault he ended up there in the first place lol.

Also about mimi, yeah I kind of saw the red flags even back when she was human and trapped on Lucy with all those people, when they were beating Ryan up, she was going to kill them all if Lucy didn't save him first. But I still didn't expect her to destroy a whole city over Amara being beat up and well her being upset about her defeat as well. Still if that's what she does in that situation, I wonder what she would do if Ryan was hurt. 

Though speaking of Ryan and mimi, I noticed that mimi has never seen Ryan when she is at full size. Like the first time Ryan saw her, mimi couldn't see humans yet and then the next time Ryan escaped before she could see him. I'm guessing when she finally sees him and sees how small he is compared to her, she will probably get very excited to put it mildly. I'm looking forward to more scenes with Ryan and mimi.

I did think things were going to go much smoother when mimi got the domain of origin, but then she gets one win and then just keeps losing after that. It was hilarious that all her following opponents had the perfect counter.

One prediction I had is that, there is more to genesis death.  It seems too suspicious, like she was bombarded for a week straight and no goddess noticed or tried to help her. And Genesis just giving up, sure she didn't want to hurt the humans attacking her but she probably had some idea of the revenge the goddesses would take on humanity after she died. My theory is that there were some goddesses who used the humans and worked with them to kill genesis. The sight of humans and goddesses finally working together as equals towards a shared goal, something that would have made her really happy but the goal was murdering her. That's probably what broke her and maybe she didn't want to ruin their efforts, of them finally coming together. Since it seems even before Genesis death, goddesses and humans probably didn't get along that well. I'm assuming those goddesses then took Genesis power for themselves and then killed the humans they worked with to make sure no else found out. Also another thing I wondered was why didn't the goddess of time just rewind time to before genesis died. 

Anyway once again, just wanted to say this is a fantastic story and now I'm going to read part 2, and I'm looking forward to more chapters. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it!

Giga/Tera is my favourite genre as well, so that's why I chose such a topic for my very first story. At first, I really wanted to keep the focus on the giantess interactions and character dynamics, but the plot ended up growing beyond what I originally intended. Hopefully I can find a good balance that makes the story an enjoyable read while still maintaining an interesting storyline in part 2.

Reviewer: UrsoPequeno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2024 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Epilogue (Ryan)

As someone who has followed this story since its release, I must say that it remains very good and interesting so far. I hope you keep up the good work in part 2, and I will be eager to read the continuation. ;)




Author's Response:

Thank you for your support since the start!


I will do my best to keep pumping out interesting chapters once part 2 comes out.

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2024 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

i didnt quite realise that 20 is where the first part ended, though for me now, i think im satisfied with most of it, here is my suggestion:

- on 20 its said that lucy is now out of earth to search for allies, i think after part 2 lucy should have her own work about that journey shes going, i think its going to be intresting, though most likely not much size related


On another note, as, like the 0.01% Genderswap fan whos also a gts fan im like sorta intrested in seeing ryan as a goddess since with how righteous he is i feel like i can definately see him going a sorta lucy route last cycle where his mind goes berserk.


Though that literally only caters to my thing. If this is literally how it goes i might collapse out of shock value alone. ( its not going to happen )


Anyways thats all i think i want to talk about, I might have been zig zaggy on topics but i just really like this work. Excited for part 2! i might even write a fanwork for this cause this is one of my favourite size work right now! 


Remember to always take breaks when your getting hit with writers block, and i'll be here patiently waiting for part 2!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind support.


I had initially planned on making the first part 30 chapters long, but by the time I was nearing 20 chapters, I realized that I had already managed to introduce most of the characters I planned. Since this first part is mainly just an introduction/set-up, I thought it would be right to end it here for now.

For Lucy's own work, I have no such plans as of now. As you have mentioned, there may not be much size-related content if we follow her journey outside of Earth due to the lack of humans in the universe.

I do fine Genderswap concept interesting, but I don't have the same level of knowledge and experience as I do with size work. So it would probably be a bad idea for me to dip my toes into that, at least for now.

Thanks for your advice on taking breaks, I'll be sure not to let burnout get to me so soon. I'm not struggling with writers' block just yet as I already have over 10-20 chapters of content planned out already, it's really just the fine-tuning and creating the images that takes up a bulk of my effort and time in releasing new chapters.

If you write a fan work for this I will definitely give it a read! Thanks once again for always showing so much support for my story.

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2024 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

kinda like what J vader said, but i think my suspicion comes more around the fact that mimi is actually a yandere of sorts, and i think as more and more of the human heart of mimi closes and she turns more of a proper goddess like lucy 1000 years ago, i feel like the only one she would really care for is our boy Ryan


I dont know really but this series is too much fun to NOT have a discussion about what the future holds for our two main characters ( though honestly i feel like mimi overshadows ryan right now )



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!


So, in Mimi's case, I really wanted to push her as a character by having her struggle with both internal and external challenges. I really love how she has turned out so far, but you may be right that I ended up neglecting Ryan's character development in the process. Emotionally and mentally, he hasn't significantly changed that much since the start of the series, besides finding out he was in love with Mimi and discovering his kinks.


Good news is you will be seeing more of him in Part 2, so hopefully I will be able to flesh out his development more. Maybe by giving him more agency instead of just having him fulfill the passenger/spectator role.

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2024 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Defeat (Mimi)

Oh damn lots of in depth analysis of Mimi and how she is conflicted about what she is doing and what she is now. Loved how she reconciled with her dad and Amara. And damn the goddesses have really barely used their powers because damn. 

Also the Iggy and Lyrie relationship caught me off guard a bit I saw it coming but damn they really like that lol

this light goddess is giving major frieze vibes on how she sees the humans as vermin. Plus damn very powerful.

then with Mimi and that city  oh boy is ryan going to not trust her if he ever finds out about what she did regardless of how she felt in that moment.

so now their in hiding and trying to grow stronger huh major dbz vibes their with the time chamber basically but cool

overall great chapter and character building honestly and I can’t wait to see more.

predictions

hmmmmm I’ll still keep my early predictions from last time there but for now new predictions

1) Ryan makes a need goddess ally but starts developing similar feelings towards like Mimi futher proving his size fetish 

2) Jacob goes rogue to research how to use similar power like origin to shrink the goddess and eliminate them one by one 

3) Ryan faces near death again liking being consumed by a goddess but unlocks his true potential escaping from the stomach and emerging like a wild beast like Erin from AOT lol I’m sorry he still gives me MC with super power vibes still 



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your thoughts!



I just uploaded the epilogue to Part 1, which means you will have to wait for Part 2 before seeing if any of your predictions come true. Hope you continue sticking with the story even then!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2024 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Desires (Ryan)

Hmmmmmmmm very interesting development here and damn the goddess destroyed worlds too damn.  Can only imagine how much chaos would come from a goddess civil war with each other very scary thought.

Ryan finally admits that Mimi is the one even though she done some messed up things but Lucy is still a love interest still.

Jacob seems to be fine and nothing to crazy about it…..yet I still got my eyes on him still.

i still think a greater threat to humanity and goddesses alike will rise in the story I just feel like that could happen in any new and never seen before scenario later in the series.

overall great chapter.

predication 

1) Jacob goes on his own and will seek Mimi to start a war with other goddess and seek their total extinction.

2) Ryan will unlock some hidden potential within him and have a power never seen before from humanity (sorry he just scream MC that grains a power that saves humanity vibes lol)




Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.


I think your predictions are really interesting, please keep them coming as I like to know what my readers think.

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2024 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Power (Mimi)

Uh oh, looks like Mimi let her size and power go to her head.  It's pretty clear her desire to protect humanity is actually just to protect Ryan first and humanity second.  Even then she was pretty authoritative when she thought he was still in the school.  If and when Ryan comes back and talks to the people in the school he's not going to be happy.  She may have snapped out of it for now but the damage is done.  It'll be interesting to what happens with her group and Ryan's group moving forward.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

The first part of the story will be reaching its end pretty soon, but part two will be coming soon after so not to worry. I hope you continue supporting the series, I love to read all of your thoughts.

Reviewer: Braden697 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2024 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Divide (Ryan)

Did you get my story request?



Author's Response:

Yes I saw it, but I don't think I will be able to write a story like that. I'll probably keep focusing on my own series for now. Hope you understand.

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2024 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Divide (Ryan)

Damn this chapter was shocking for lack of a better word. Ryan separates from Mimi due to his concern for his now goddess friend and how she is changing and shows signs of not caring for all of humanity just a select few who she know and how she is starting to express joy of her absolute power. 


Major trust issues between the two now and when they see each other again oh boy is it going to be a long conversation lol

jacob is already my number one pick to be the next big bad because his rage towards the goddess is both understandable but can be dangerous for Ryan’s mission to coexist with the goddess instead of more war and bloodshed. But I find Jacob’s character very interesting 

the goddess of nature was cool to see did not expect her to be a dog girl and finally some vore action lol 

also glad to see the goddess of balance and law again she seems like a morally gray woman where she doesn’t want or like hurting and killing humans in the 1,000 years cycle but also see how it keeps the balance in a way. Now we meet the leader of the goddess’s wow that was fast but she seems to be interested in peace talk possibly.


overall great chapter and great story progression so far. I guess vore can be check off my list of wants now all that’s left is nose, and anal action but I’ll let you do your thing because this story has been fire.

also I have two predictions 

1 - Ryan gains some kind of powers and becomes a knight of humanity and peace or something like that 

2 - Jacob finds a dark and powerful power giving him the chance to seek vengeance on all the goddesses but corrupt his mind and becomes a monster like threat to not only goddess but humanity too giving reason for the two sides to unite 

but that’s just my personal prediction nice job can’t wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving another review!

Ithyrminah is actually one of the characters I've been most excited to introduce. Unfortunately, due to the progression of the story, it is unlikely that we will be seeing much of her in the first part of The Origin. She will likely make a return in the next installment of the series though.

Some interesting predictions you have, I already have the rest of part one written out more or less but I will let you see for yourself once new chapters release whether any of your predictions are close.

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2024 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Homecoming (Mimi)

Wow caught with the chapters and story and absolutely love everything so far !! Ryan is my favorite character so far like his will to survive and save humanity despite the odds is amazing 

Lucy and Mimi are great two and the art has been fantastic to really helps with understanding the scale of these goddess 

this chapter was great with Mimi showing her leader ship is amazing and her relationship with Percy and Father are pretty good.

i kinda wanna see more of her and her father interactions a bit really show how their relationship got bad and toxic and possibly a redemption arc for her dad but your story either way 

also wow Percy being rejected by Mimi previously was hard to read I hope we  see my boy get a win with someone lol 

overall great chapter and character growth by Mimi and her ever growing control over her power but growth of her darker desires !!!

ps - if I have one request in terms of what to see more of then I’ll definitely say vore and maybe odor or something like that maybe there’s a goddess of laziness lol but that my personal opinion but again you do you!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, I'm glad that you like it so far!

Characters wise I will do my best to expand on everybody, but the cast of characters is rapidly growing and I still have quite a few more of them who have yet to be introduced. You will probably see more of Mimi's father for sure, but for the other characters who may end up neglected I do plan on having some side stories after the conclusion of the first installment of this series.

Reviewer: Braden697 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2024 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

Okay, you should receive the story request, it's under the gmail "aceschoolbb@gmail.com"

Reviewer: Braden697 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2024 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

Where do you want me to contact you?



Author's Response:

You can try this email: gtswrath@gmail.com

Reviewer: Braden697 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2024 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

Hey, I got a request for a story.



Author's Response:

Hi, if you contact me I can take a look. But for now, I'll most likely be focusing on my own stories.

Reviewer: 1337noob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2024 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Confrontation (Mimi)

An excellent chapter showcasing the dynamics between Mimi and Iggy, although based on Iggy's demeanor here I'm curious if she'll eventually find a human she likes to keep around and play with; she seems like she could do it if she tried (and learnt more about kindness from Mimi).

Also, it'll be interesting to see Mimi's reaction when she finds out Ryan already knows she's now a goddess.


Finally, methinks Mimi has a more...lewd side that she doesn't want to admit to. Perhaps she'll be the one to solve Amara's quandary of creating a child between a goddess and human...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.


I'm glad that you are finding the characters interesting so far. Mimi, Iggy and Amara are all characters that I intend to expand more on, so you can look forward to their development in the future.

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2024 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

I have decided to revive back from the dead again because im going to bump my rating to this to a TEN out of ten, it still has what i liked and i was just mostly concerned with how you will write mimi's parts.


If i had to say something about it, its that you wrote it almost exactly as i would, it feels like after chapter 10 i had a clear vision of what you were doing and i can see how the future chapters would work out!


With how mimi is being written theres always excitement on the next release on the work as we eagerly wait for what will happen to her, And especially how Ryan will factor in to this as he doesnt know that he is pretty much the most important human at this moment.


You got me hooked and you got me hooked really good now, i have never been this interested in a size work as much as yours before, keep it going!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!


I hope that I can continue to keep the story engaging and do the characters justice.

Reviewer: Bork69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2024 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Revelation (Mimi)

I rarely write reviews but this is easily one of my favorite stories in this website. It’d be awesome if you had a sort of spin-off chapter from the POVs of the humans and cities. I think it will really show the sheer power and destruction of the Goddesses even more. Can’t wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

I am actually planning to have some spin-off chapters after finishing the first installment of this series, mostly to flesh out some of the other goddesses. There are other human characters being introduced in future chapters, so I might also include some spin-off chapters from their POV as well.

Glad you are enjoying the series so far!

Reviewer: Notoriousfat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2024 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Revelation (Mimi)

Very cool lore! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the support!

Reviewer: Master_Builder Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2024 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Decision (Mimi)

Amara wants to produce a child between a goddess and a human? Wonder if there's a special reason for that.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment!

Amara seems like a very whimsical goddess so I guess we will have to wait and see.

In the meantime, hope you will keep reading on!

Reviewer: 1337noob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2024 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Decision (Mimi)

I think the Mimi/Iggy relationship has the potential to be a really wholesome one, and it'll be interesting to see if they can maintain that with the size difference.

Also, since there quite a few references to breast milk in this chapter, will we be seeing lactation/breastfeeding stuff later on?

Looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your response!

I'm definitely looking to expand further on the Mimi/Iggy dynamic so stay tuned for further chapters.

For the breastmilk point... I guess there will be a bit more in the coming chapters, but we may not delve very much into lactation/breastfeeding yet in the near future. Giga sized breastfeeding will look very different from your typical breastfeeding after all, but I may experiment with this concept in the future(I've been planning a side story starring Amara but probably won't be out so soon)

Reviewer: lightwing Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 27 2024 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Encounter (Mimi)

Hey there. Just wanted to say I'm greatly enjoying the story so far.  Giga giantesses strike a sweet spot for me since one of the things I love most is the scale and power difference of the giantess.  Now make them goddesses and give them special abilities and it's even better!  The utter hopelessness of the humans' chances for winning, the godslayer mecha being so weak it wasn't even noticed, the casual playfulness of the goddesses contrasting with how devestating their actions are to the tiny humans, all good stuff.

I've also enjoyed the bits of worldbuilding and the hints that, while the goddesses enjoy the destruction they cause, a few of them seem to have mixed feelings about it.  Ignis feeling bad about revealing her true self to Mimi and wanting her to join them as a goddess makes me wonder about the whole "why do the goddesses destroy humans every 1000 years" part. Then there's the offer of turning Mimi into a goddess.  It was similar with Ryan in that a goddess scorns humans but wants to keep a certain one safe.

I look forward to seeing where this story goes!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Giga giantesses are also my favorite so I hope I am doing the genre justice with my writing so far. The worldbuilding, plot and development of characters are all aspects that I have been thinking deeply about, which is why I am hesitant to post chapters even after finishing them(I always find a better way to convey something or deliver a scene for previous chapters while I am writing later chapters). Nevertheless, I am glad that you are also enjoying the plot/worldbuilding elements in addition to the giantess content.

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