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Reviewer: Feeover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2024 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

Amazing story, you could even mage a game out of this, i loved the plot and how its very well known that we stand no chance but yet through the story the characters struggle to at least try something. The AI imaged also give a very well picture of the characters and the situation. 10/10



Author's Response:

Thank you for the support!

I'm glad that you are enjoying the plot so far. I try to incorporate a sense of mystery/suspense in the worldbuilding and plot delivery, and my biggest worry is always that the reader ends up feeling lost if I do a poor job. I hope that the story hasn't been too difficult to follow so far.

Regarding making a game out of this story, that would take a miracle since I lack any of the skills to make one, but one can always dream of what it would look like: a giga giantess goddess waifu collector/gacha sounds like a game that would instantly drain all my savings.

In the meantime, I'll just do what I can and focus on making this story as good as possible.

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2024 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

Firstly, something needs to be said on how you made me log in into my account again to write this review, as i dont usually log in on my account anymore on this site, so the fact that this is even here is surprising 


but to be honest, im a big sucker for these kinds of stories, where we have immensely overpowered apponents our main character has no hope of beating, insane scales on sizes, and maybe even some corruption/saviour plot going on with the female lead mimi, its just great.


THOUGH, as i said all of that, id rate this a 8/10, i think the story is great, but i just feel like theres something missing, i dont know what that missing thing is but i do know that what it is can really bump this to a 9 for me, Really impressive stuff for your first work here on the site!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the genuine review!

I'm happy to see that you are enjoying the story so far, I'll do my best to keep improving. There are a lot of concepts and character dynamics I'm still looking to explore, so I hope that I still have something up my sleeves that will impress you. I'm still new to writing stories so any feedback is greatly appreciated!

Reviewer: Sephkirbynerd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2024 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

An amazing story so far! Such a breath of fresh air to the Giga/ Tera Genere. Great character writing, very discriptive in all the right ways.

The pictures make a great addition to the story to help visualize the sicale of each goddess. 

I wait with baited breath for each new chapter as the story unfolds! 100/10*



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support!


I'm glad you are enjoying the character writing. I always try to put focus on the character dynamics, I'll keep doing my best to keep it interesting.

Reviewer: HornyHolo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2024 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

giga

Reviewer: UrsoPequeno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2024 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

An excellent story involving Giga/Tera :D


Looking forward to the next chapters ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support!

This is my first story and it will probably be quite long, so please bear with me.

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