Reviews For Chance Shrinking
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Reviewer: ProteinMan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2024 7:04 PM Title: Part 1 - Characters and Intro

It’s been a while since you lasts posted. Super happy to see you post again. You are of the best unaware authors rn



Author's Response:

Thank you! This whole voting idea came about because I wanted to post more than once a year, haha. So far it's working as planned. 

Reviewer: Unknown893 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2024 5:14 AM Title: Part 1 - Characters and Intro

Nice! Great start and I love the buildup!

I have a suggestion, if you REALLY want this story to take off on a hot & horny note, you should have Ted crawl or climb into one (or more!) of the female characters pants. That’ll make for a really great chapter that’ll be sure to get a lot of views!

Excellent story so far and I look forward to what happens next! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm a lot more open with ideas for this story, but I still want to get there organically. I plan/expect it to be a longer one so who knows where we'll end up. 

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