[Report This]Date: November 11 2024 7:02 PM Title: Attrition
Another great chapter, quite surprised how fast Lily's progress is going and skipping ahead a few days (only because you have a really good knack of expressing the environmental scale on a detail level that's so good) after the 4" shrinking.
Saying she's likely stopped at 4" just makes me believe she's destined for 2" all the more now, it'd be the only annoyance in Deb's whole game plan really for her ideal pet - not that Lily would be able to enjoy that victory.
Deborah's moment of telling her not to get too comfortable you could feel the undercurrent, Lily is quite naive in certain regards - I wonder how much she knows she's destined to be far more intimate with her owner then just sitting at her foot all day, unless it was offscreen she's not really been properly confronted by a nude giant yet after all.
Again, eagerly looking forward to the next chapter! see you next time.
Date: October 28 2024 5:15 PM Title: Obsession
This story is really good. Will u continue the story because I want to know what happens to the girl?
[Report This]Date: October 08 2024 6:48 PM Title: Submission
First time commenter but this really drove me to finally join and just say how much I've adored this story.
Your expert handle on the size difference experience is just perfect, Lily feeling the heartbeat and micro details of Deb's face.
And Deborah! what a character you've crafted this on the surface average woman with her normal home and family and just utterly makes her into this creature of pure sexy gleeful power, not even sure she see's herself as mean either just as a happy owner to her new little doll who she needs to train like any pet.
The build up was fantastic to the 4", I sure hope this is not nearing the end as that just felt like the first act Lily's got her whole new life ahead of her at Deborah's whims after all - I love those little flash forward thoughts she has to seeing herself decades later its the sort of questions not go into in size fiction but it really added to her hopelessness, like what happens in 30 years? or she gets injured? would Deb simply put down her adorable pet with a stomp? its those types questions rattling through her head that makes it so engaging.
I wonder if she might end up possibly in contrast to Tanya's stoic toy, instead of the emotionless robot Lily might eventually find herself enjoying her owner (in the long run of course!) but Deb will first have to lay down the law first, and well, poor little Lily I imagine hasn't quite fully shrunk yet, her perspective when she reaches her final height of likely 2" will be spectacular, I doubt her family would even recognise her then just a simple bug to show off to Linda seeing her adjust to her new life as property.
Again, all the best and keep up the good work! Lily is such a lucky little lady.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm happy to see that you picked up on those small (no pun intended) details. Without saying too much, I've got some plans for where the story's headed, and I think you'll enjoy it. Thanks again for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2024 3:59 AM Title: Obsession
The description of Deborah as a force of nature once Lily shrank even more is great- loved the bit at the end. Maybe Deborah and Martin will use Lily for some fun? Great chapter
Date: September 14 2024 1:18 AM Title: Decision
I hope this continues :3 Checking daily for any update.
Author's Response:
Got super busy this month, the next chapter is definitely in the works!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2024 2:03 PM Title: Decision
Wow, this is amazing so far! Please do continue, this is my favorite story on the site atm!
Date: August 30 2024 10:05 AM Title: Decision
Oh, come on. The slow and steady corruption was awesome, why rush it all in the end and make it blatant?
Date: August 30 2024 8:28 AM Title: Decision
I usually don't take the time to do any reviews, but I wanted to say this is really good so far. I look forward to updates and I hope they come soon since I can't stop looking forward to more ^_^
That said, I do hope there will be some steamy stuff with Deborah. Also hoping she gets to fully enjoy owning the mini ^_^ The anticipation is being built very well and I hope you will write more stories in the future.
I noticed you do not have any patreon or other sites. I hope you will continue to write more things, because the quality is very good. If you do end up making a patreon or anythihng to share new stories "early" to subscribers, I would go for it. I have paid for other such content and I can say for sure, the quality of your story so far is at a very high level in terms of enjoyment, the atmosphere and direction, the characters and shceming, the domination and entrapment of the victim. Your hiting alot of details perfectly so far. So no pressure to you, but I certainly hope you will not only make more chapters in this story, but hopefully create more stories that are similar ^_^
It looks like you post roughly every 6-7 days, which is great. I look forward to seeing the next chapters, eagerly. And I will be anticipating any other posts you make. Thank you for your time and enjoy the weekend. I hope you feel encouraged to continue writing and sharing your size stories.
Date: August 30 2024 7:15 AM Title: Decision
So good. I been frequently watching this one for updates lol. one of those stories i wouldn’t care about a paywall with. Thanks for putting this masterpiece together for us to enjoy
[Report This]Date: August 25 2024 10:46 PM Title: Obsession
Wonder how Deborah will react now the gig is up. Loving the slow burn and gradual domination, feel like it’s going to pay off very soon
Date: August 25 2024 8:11 PM Title: Precision
Not sure what took me so long to finally start reading this one! I’m loving the build up so much!! Really really hoping Deb is able to secure her new pet before her plan starts to crumble, especially with how this chapter ended. I’m SO looking forward to Deb completely dominating and drilling Lily into submission once she’s only a few inches tall and in complete control of her in the comfort of her house. The fact that Deb is a housewife so that poor Lily will not have any break away from her once she’s her pet is so very exciting!
[Report This]Date: August 20 2024 6:08 PM Title: Possession
Deborah is such an unsettling creep, I feel unnerved by here already. Poor Lily, I don't think things will go well for her this story. Looking forward to the rest, I'm already hooked!
Author's Response:
Lily has her work cut out for her, that's for sure. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: August 20 2024 1:34 AM Title: Obsession
Can't wait to see more of Tanya and her little lady.
Author's Response:
You're in for a treat! Thanks for your review.
Date: August 19 2024 4:15 AM Title: Possession
I love Debbie's go-getter attitude. Her enthusiasm and tenacity is engaging.
Author's Response:
Haha I agree. I love a determined giantess.
[Report This]Date: August 19 2024 3:01 AM Title: Obsession
Damn I love where this is going. hope theres frequent updates.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Definitely working on it
[Report This]Date: August 14 2024 4:25 AM Title: Obsession
Woah, that dream at the end was INTENSE! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2024 6:39 AM Title: Obsession
Really strong start! Love Deborah’s personality and the nightmare Lily had was super hot, can’t wait to see where this goes, maybe couples action once Lily shrinks more? Can’t wait to see Deborah gradually dominate her
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. There's plenty of action yet to come ;)