Reviewer: Intheliar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2024 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Phase 1

  I really enjoyed this. I'll consider this a standard of full tour and microscale done well. Multiple storylines, each with a story to tell on their own. Emily was just plain unlucky, but considering her circumstances, it was a short, but bright life. She did more than most micros with God mode turned off could do. She ran a full tour of her own, there. Fuck Mitch. And as for Sophie, she gets as good of an ending as anyone in her situation could get. Maybe it's not my first choice of what I'd consider a good life, but I feel like she has some wiggle room. Maybe awhile afterwards, Kayla would start being nicer to her spontaneously... maybe. Although if she goes through those trips a few more times, her psyche will be digested. And Kayla's just living the high life at the top of the food chain, victory already claimed back at the careless signatures of her food. I mean, friends.

Reviewer: Raso719 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2024 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Phase 1

I especially LOVED the super nano scale you did! How absolutely tiny the girl got, how the slightest breeze was enough to send her hurting through the air and the way the person who shrank her just sort of wrote her off.... I'd love to see more micro and nano girls lost and forgotten like that!

Author's Response:

I'll certainly keep that in mind. I really love playing with nanoscale stuff, so I hope you are hungry for more

Reviewer: SWlover Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2024 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Phase 1

Pretty good story! I do enjoy internal size content, I especially enjoyed the parts with Emily being in Kayla's nose and briefly in her vagina

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I'm looking forward to potentially diving into some more exploratory nasal stuff.