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Reviewer: Nobodyknows Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2024 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was insanely good!

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 02 2024 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good. I like the idea of the ladies only restaurant with shrinkies and the mom's friend eating the guy unaware. I see you've listed the story as 'not complete'. Does that mean we'll get future chapters? Hope so.  btw - a couple typos (fourties, two  -  forties, too).



Author's Response:

It's listed as completed?

The typos should be fixed now! ^^

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