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Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2024 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

Good chapter. Let see how's the new Dynamics work for them.

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2024 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

Very good



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Thanks so much, eve!

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2024 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good stuff so far. Keep it up 

Reviewer: LenioTG Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2024 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great start, thank you for sharing! I hope she won't get too tall to unrealistic heights, it's looking good so far!

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2024 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

I like it so far ☺️ 

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2024 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

I like it so far ☺️ 

Reviewer: Ten11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2024 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, you didn’t mince words here. This was a great start. Good introductions, several seeds planted, and even a little bit of action. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: repaidon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2024 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really like the premise and how insecure Asher is and how assertive Eloise is (and she is only gonna get more dominant). I think this dynamic will be exacerbated as time goes on. I'd also love to see them compare muscle and Eloise beating Asher at physical tasks with ease, much to Asher's dismay.


Good start so far. Looking forward to it!

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