Date: August 08 2024 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 3- Part 6
I knew this story from a long time ago and comparing it with your own work it is as close as it can get. Probably perfect fit to your taste.
Special thanks for preserving it, my copy got lost on a old hard drive years ago.
You stop here where for my undestanding there is the most interesting part. The two ladies mass trampeling the crowd for the viewing pleasure of Yon.
We had similar scenes in other stories but then, we get a glimse into Danyas head when she seems to sacrifise her promised man, the one she claims she is so eager to consume, to her sister.
Bur Leyanne refuses and so there we are, Yon giving himself willingly to his Goddess.
I dont want to spoil it, Moonie did an awsome job building in more than one layer of social constraints. But you have to soak in the whole world to get them.
Concerning Yon, as "unsadisfying" following events seem to be, these constraints and Danyas feelings should be the reason for it.
BTW, hailing satan like hell for the next chapter of "A new life" ;)
Author's Response:
You can find the original, or at least the copy that I edited here, on the "Wayback machine" searching for "netrunnerpage.net". Unfortunately, due to either the original author or like.. a website error, there were a ton of weird problems, like every word that started with a "G" having 2 g's instead, so I spent a lot of time combing through and trying to fix it. As far as Yon's ending, I have an outline for a follow-up story that some people might like, but frankly at the speed I work, it wont be done for a long time.
As for "A New Life", the next chapter is just.. significantly longer than I had planned, but it's almost done. You won't have to hail satan for too much longer, lol.
Date: August 03 2024 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1- Part 1 & 2
Interesting story. Thank you for preserving it.
Author's Response:
It has literally been my pleasure. I hope you enjoy revisiting the story once it's finished!