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Reviewer: SomeRandomGoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2024 5:21 PM Title: Gothic Invasion

Idea:They're unconnected, but you think this and the other "shrinking virus" stories could be in an anthology?

Not a series, but still fits given the common theme. Plus having the genre complied together helps anyone who likes that niche. 

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2024 10:22 PM Title: Summer Break

I am glad you are updating this story!  A little disappointed that you are not adding insertion especially for the car ride, but I get it if you or the client does not want that you don't add it.  I hope you keep updating this story and maybe make more in this universe.  Very rare to find a tiny haram story!

Reviewer: Ijod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2024 9:20 PM Title: Summer Break

Good stuff, good stuff. Neat that this got a second chapter. Now I just wonder what happened to their fathers?



Author's Response:

I don't think the commissioner really specified, could be anything from one night stand to the two dads were just on a business trip to get away from their insatiable wives.

Reviewer: Gokuto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2024 6:08 AM Title: Gothic Invasion

Holy cow this was really good! I daresay that this is one of your best ones yet. I would love to see more!



Author's Response:

Ask and you shall receive!

Reviewer: Marquez Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2024 5:17 PM Title: Gothic Invasion

This is a really great story. I feel like more could be added about him living with the goth girls. 



Author's Response:

Don't worry, there's a second part!

Reviewer: Omanahan88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2024 11:58 PM Title: Gothic Invasion

Wonderful little short story! Love it!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2024 9:41 PM Title: Gothic Invasion

The only thing better than goth girls are giant goth girls, and the only thing better than giant goth girls are sweaty giant goth girls. This was a really comfy story, skipping around to a bunch of fun moments between Keith and the girls. The deodorant stick costume got a laugh out of me, as well as envisioning a three inch tall Michael Myers chasing hapless women around. 



Author's Response:

Indeed, this one is just a comfy little short without a lot of drama to it. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Chuckles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2024 2:01 PM Title: Gothic Invasion

Well done. I think this may turn out as your best story yet. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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