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Reviewer: klinza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2024 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 chatting with the crying bride

it would be interesting to see how far it all goes, i also think its interesting one of your characters was based on a real crime. that it actually repeating itself. 

you have a good mix of dark crime and gaintess, the huge mermaid ride was a big thrill like a water park, but things keep taking a turn, it is annoying we keep having to stop for idiots. 

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