Oh my god, oh my god. LILLY and LOLA!

This is the coupling I've always wanted, but didn't know I wanted! Lola was so fucking hot here. Spotting Lilly and then snatching her just like that! That was so awesome! I can't tell you how adorably that played in my head. Poor Lilly, but she's in safe hands, I know it. Man! This ended too soon. I want to see more of Lilly and Lola!

Such amazing work with each coming chapters, Olivia is so lovely and hot, i love her, can't wait to see what comes next!

I like the way this chapter was structured. A lot of tough love and even a little bit of cruelty here and there in the middle, bookended by really sweet moments.

I really liked a lot of the meanness from Lola here, not necessarily because of I enjoyed her being mean (although I did, honestly) but rather because there was a purpose behind most of what she did. Her deciding to punish Sophia and taunting Allen about not being able to help the poor tiny girl was more than an instance of her casually enjoying her power over the tinies (although she did, too). It was about protecting them from themselves.

Sophia felt strongly enough about keeping Allen from being tormented that she stood up to Lola, which was really brave and admirable of her. It was also irrelevant, which was what Lola was trying to show. The giantess just picked up Sophia and decided to punish her, and there was nothing Sophia could do about it. And Allen learned that there was nothing he could do about it, either, no matter how much he wanted to help his fellow tiny.

Now, Lola is a good-natured person who would never (intentionally) seriously harm a tiny, but how would someone like, say, Ruby react to a bold tiny defying her like that. It would probably be a lot worse, and I could see Ruby even killing said tiny in the heat of the moment (and feeling a little guilty about doing that to Lola later on). Lola respects Allen's strength as a person and was happy to see him able to stand up for Sophia like that, but she also knew that Allen needed to be reminded that tinies simply can't do anything about stuff like this and that trying could even have consequences.

We saw a lot more gentle example of this same lesson last chapter, when Olivia picked up Lily without permission to demonstrate how easily a normal could just snatch her off the street if she went home on her own. Same concept here.

Of course, the nature of Sophia's punishment was all about Lola's mischievous side and touched on cruelty just a little bit, although it was less about tormenting Sophia and more about pleasuring herself for Lola, I think.

We saw a different kind of tough love when Lola dealt with the abandoned tiny shelter with Olivia later on. The college girl was harsh with her words, seemingly heartless if the words were taken by themselves. It would be easy to say that she simply showed no sympathy for the tiny who had been stepped on before or that she was simply mocking the tinies for being too weak to survive even if they were to escape to the outside world. But again, she was trying to bring them to reality and help them realize that the normals aren't the enemy. It really was that tiny's fault for wandering out of the safety zone, and it was ridiculous for the tinies to assume that the normals are going to keep their feet glued to the ground every second. And if they were to run away and escape outside, they likely wouldn't last very long. She convinced them, in a way they couldn't deny, that they needed normals to look after them and that Olivia and her were those normals.

Even when Lola destroyed their settlement in front of them, I don't think she even noticed how devastating it was for the tinies. She didn't hear or see their reactions. All she knew was that they were all getting much better ones at her place and that she had a chance to fulfill a desire of hers that she rarely got to embrace. It was a win-win for her. So I don't even think I could label this as cruel, even though all the tinies not named Maya would probably disagree with me.

I can really appreciate Olivia's dilemma here. She really cares about the tinies and hates seeing Lola mess with them, especially in the way that Lola decides to do so, but she did the same type of stuff when she was younger, so she can't really make Lola stop. I'm sure she also understands how these things make Lola feel and doesn't want to take them away from her daughter as well. She has to be torn between letting her daughter have a good time and trying to protect the tinies. Not only that, but I think part of her frustration is not wanting to see Lola make the same mistakes that she did when she was younger.

And I'm more convinced after reading this chapter that there were mistakes in Olivia's younger days. When Lola pointed out that Olivia used to put tinies in her panties the way Lola was doing with Sophia, that pretty much settled it for me. I'm still not sure if Olivia took things too far or what happened to change her ways. Maybe she finally realized what her actions were doing to the tinies, which would make sense, since it's been pointed out a couple times now that Lola isn't fully aware of just how rough she's actually getting from the tinies' point of view. Could Lola have one of those moments and make the same change that Olivia did at some point in this story? Granted, maybe Olivia just grew out of it, but I'm seeing the elements of a major plot development brewing, I think.

Ruby was an interesting character. I haven't gotten around to reading GT - Silverlake yet, but I'm guessing she's from that story?

What intrigued me about Ruby was her harshness and cruelty mixed with how she views the tinies in general. She enjoys tormenting them, especially with her body, but she has also taken the time to learn all of their names, which struck me because these tinies don't even live with her. She only sees them a couple times per month at most, yet she's on a first name basis with at least some of them.

Not only that, but there's the way that Russel was able to get under her skin or how she was particularly cruel to Dakota because she's the type of naturally pretty girl Ruby will never be. It was the same case with Allen, as she felt like Lola saying he was stronger than her was some sort of challenge. Ruby calls the tinies bugs, but she sure acts like they're people, even if she does love sadistically torturing them. I kind of get the vibe from her that it's less about torturing little people and more about being able to get away with torturing some people just because they're tiny that drives her behavior, if that makes any sense. In other words, I think she would treat a lot of her fellow normals the same way if she could get away with it without consequence.

I loved that show of faith from Allen there near the end of the chapter. He accepted that there was nothing he could do to stop Ruby from doing whatever she wanted to him, so he relied on his caretaker instead. This actually seemed to take Lola by surprise, and I'm not sure if it was more that or her getting a little more teasing in on Allen that led her to tease Allen by pretending that she was going to let Ruby do what she wanted with him. But when it counted, Lola stepped in and saved him. She taught him that there was nothing he could do against the normals earlier in the chapter and then she did what she said she would do, be a caretaker who would protect them, here at the end.

The last segment showed how much this affected her as well, I think. Asking Allen what his hobbies are, showing him some affection, and happily threatening him to never be sad again all seemed to show how happy she was to have fully earned Allen's trust. She'll still fuck with him like everybody else, no doubt, but him displaying that faith in her was special for Lola.

Lastly, I'll end with the beginning! From how careful Olivia was moving Allen to that pillow to the warm smile she flashed him when she came out of the bathroom, this segment was so sweet. Seeing Allen remember the feeling his own parents filled him with and feeling something similar for Olivia was quite heartwarming. And later on, seeing Olivia become so motivated by Allen as to seek out tinies in need, even going to abandoned houses to do so, was kind of powerful. He moved her to try to be a better person, which is hard because she's already such a good person to start with!

Anyway, this was another fantastic chapter!

I really love the way you started this story. Not just because it was cruelly fun (which it absolutely was, by the way) but because of the way it set up everything else so far. I can honestly say that this is the first story that blindsided me with gentle content!

That first chapter showed us just how cruel and dark this world can be for tinies. Being left to fend for themselves after their caretaker died and thriving anyway, only for a group of bratty college girls to massacre them just for fun was such a hopeless scenario for Allen and his first community. We saw his whole life ripped away from him in the sexiest way possible.

Oh, sorry, you tapped two different parts of my brain with that destruction scene. It was both tragic and hot at the same time! I both loved it and hated those girls at the same time.

But it wasn't just that they destroyed the community and killed everybody but Allen; it was the way they did it. They clearly didn't see the tinies as people but pests instead. What's worse, the fact that they were sentient pests meant that they were more fun to fuck with, so they were more diligent and taunting in wiping them out. They also didn't seem to think too much of Allen, as they actually seemed to expect him to hang around and be their pet, like they didn't think he knew how to leave or something.

I really, really like the way all of that contrasts with Olivia, Lola, and the new shelter. That dark start made all the gentle content that followed it, which would have been great enough on its own, so much sweeter.

And the way you're handling Allen's trauma is very well done! He's so relatable despite going through something unimaginable. He even struggles to integrate with other people his own size, let alone dealing with his new giant caretakers (although he does become fond of Olivia to an extent pretty instantly). He lost everything and is struggling to see the point of going on. And now, in the more recent chapters, he's slowly starting to learn to lean on those around him. I'm pulling for him pretty hard!

But the main attraction of the story has to Lola. She's such a unique character. She's so much fun, the perfect blend of playful, caring, and dominant. I think there are two things about her that make her actions come off less severe to both the reader and the tinies.

First, there's a certain innocence about her. Even when she actually hurts the tinies a little bit, they don't hold it against her too much because they know she doesn't mean to. And if she found out that she had hurt one, she would feel bad (we saw that when she thought she hurt Allen at the start of this last chapter). She just likes to feel powerful and in control, so she plays with them a little bit here and there, and the tinies have decided that's a price they're willing to pay for their safety and the various amenities that Lola makes for them.

Second, Lola truly sees the tinies as people. From knowing all of their names to feeling worried when she crushed that house on accident to even feeling satisfaction of putting Dakota "in her place" (calling her rich girl before sticking the tiny in her mouth), these all show that she sees them as real, individual people. Even in that last example with Dakota or the other cases in the story where she "abuses" a tiny or two, she only enjoys that control she has over them because they're people to her. She wouldn't enjoy it at all if she thought of them as bugs or even if she literally did this stuff with bugs. She enjoys expressing her power over little people, and on some level, that's more recognition as human beings than most of them have every gotten from a normal before (well, other than Olivia, but still!).

We saw all of this play out in her scene with Allen. She was worried about him and tried to inspire him when he needed it most, and even when she was making him do stuff (like exploring her body or feeding her popcorn, the lucky fuck!), he became more confident around her because he felt like a person around her and started to realize that she would never actually hurt him (on purpose).

And the way she giggled at him as he was terrified after being in her mouth showed that she didn't really understand what that was like for him; she just innocently laughed at something she thought was cute and funny. That obliviousness is kind of her saving grace.

But I said before that I'm more of an Olivia guy, and I meant that. Sweet, caring, and mature yet youthful in appearance is a winning combination for me! It can be hard writing a character like her in a compelling way, I think, but you nailed it here. She's not teasing at all, but she's willing to show a tiny that they need to accept help when they need it. I'm looking at you, Lily!

I'm really interested to see where Lily's story goes, by the way. Having a normal as a bully has to be a nightmare! That she's so willing to handle it herself is truly brave of her, and that's something I admire. I really hope things work out for her, but being a tiny pretty much living alone in a giant world that doesn't give a shit about you means things probably aren't looking so good for her. Maybe Olivia will keep having her back?

But yeah, back to Olivia. I think there's something more to her. That comment from Lola about knowing why Olivia cared so much about Allen even before hearing his story caught my attention. And the fact that she feels so strongly about Allen right from the start, before even getting to know him was interesting. Finding him passed out on the street like that triggered something in her.

Then there's her past with her friends. She says they never killed tinies, but they also weren't as "playful" as Lola. So what did she mean when she said they toyed with them? I feel like they may have been more cruel about it than Olivia let on. Maybe she did something she's ashamed of? Or perhaps she thought they were having harmless fun and became horrified when her friends took things too far? I feel like there's something there.

Kind of going along with that, I kind of suspect it's not a coincidence that she married somebody trying to help tinies with his engineering skills. I could see her being attracted to him wanting to help tinies after doing something she regrets. Or it could be that her husband helped show her that messing with tinies isn't cool and pulled her away from her friends who wanted to mess with them.

In any case, that motherly bond she's trying to establish with Allen is melting my fucking heart! And it's not just that she feels sorry for him, but she wants to be someone he can trust with his life! She wants to earn that from a tiny, despite most of this world not caring about them enough to not kill them for fun. That's a powerful thing.

So yeah, obviously I love this story! I look forward to reading the next chapter whenever you pick it back up!

Great story, hope you stick with it all the way. I like that isn't completely centered on the mc. The side characters all have their unique personalities (tinies&normals). Lola is my definitely my favorite, though it would be interesting to see some action from Olivia.

Only problem I have is with the verb tenses, which makes it slightly confusing at times.

Lola is the giantess we all need. I'd 100% put up with her, if it guaranteed safety from the big bad world. What's a little boob crush and feet rubbing, anyway? haha

really like the build up and sadistic nature of the giantess' - can definitely feel the hopelessness and shock in the tinies after the girls make their intentions known 

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of the story, basically anything could happen here.