[Report This]Date: December 19 2025 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 24: Queen of Her World, Part 2
Wow, I just binged this whole story and I’m impressed. The way you are able to tell a story with so many characters involved is so cool.
Olivia is my favorite character by a mile. She has that gently, yet motherly touch that is different from the other giantesses there. However, the depth of her character to reach a point where she becomes this sexual horny giantess was quite a thrill to watch.
I would love to see Olivia use Allen similar to how she used Lindsey because that dominant side of Olivia was fun to watch since it was so rare and contrasted drastically to her usual gentle demeanor.
Lola is interesting in her own way, but her character gets quite predictable after some time. It is fun to see the dynamic of a gentle and more sadistic giantess so it works to have Lola and Olivia pass tinies to each other.
Now that Lola is in control of Allen, I’m curious to see what she will do to him since we know how powerful she can be. But there is a part of me that wants to see Lola do something really crazy. Imagine she wraps Allen with tape or something that covers Allen’s face and makes him helpless and mummified. Then Lola gifts him to Olivia and tells her that it’s some random guy to be punished but Olivia doesn’t know it’s Allen. Then Olivia uses Allen as some kind of sex toy while Lola is smirking as she leaves the room or something.
Either way, I expect Lola to be creative here so I’m excited to see what’s next.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
hey, thank you very much for your review!
I guess chalk one more up for Olivia, many readers started to lean on her after some chapters lol
let's just say... yeah, Allen is in deep shit, I guess we'll see
again, thank you for your support! it means a lot
[Report This]Date: December 18 2025 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 24: Queen of Her World, Part 2
Well, I certainly couldn't wait to see what a playful Olivia would be like, and I have to say I'm not disappointed at all; the scene was very funny.
Regarding future chapters, and I think there's a good chance I'm wrong, after this ending, the first thing that came to mind was that, after Sophia's tripping him up and what Lola does to him, Allen will eventually lose faith in the shelter's residents and leave.
Very eager to see more, good job.
Author's Response:
glad you enjoyed Olivia's playful side! and yeah, Allen is certainly playing with fire, more than one
thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: November 20 2025 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 23: Queen of Her World, Part 1
It looks like things are about to get even more difficult for Allen and his friends.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2025 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 22: Statement of Rebirth
WOW JUST SUCKING WOW! ALL THE PARTS CAME TO THIS! Maya's entry...that was a lot oh my...my dearest Olivia being dominant, i can't wait to see more!!
[Report This]Date: October 26 2025 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 22: Statement of Rebirth
WOW JUST SUCKING WOW! ALL THE PARTS CAME TO THIS! Maya's entry...that was a lot oh my...my dearest Olivia being dominant, i can't wait to see more!!
[Report This]Date: October 26 2025 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 21: Dominance
Good chapter! I really loved the punishment there, curious what this Claire will bring to the table...
[Report This]Date: October 26 2025 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 20: Hope
WOOOWW! WHAT A CHAPTER!
I loved everything! Lola getting her revenge yet remembering that she is not that cruel to them, specially to Allen. Poor Maya lmao
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 19: Submission Complete
This episode man...this fucking episode godddd.
From Russel's side plot with ruby.... Olivia's sexy scene to the wrath of lola, everything was just beyond amazing. Truly one of ny favorites.
The call out to chapter one was brutal..
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 18: Revolt
Eventful chapter, very nice and serious too, Olivia's offer tho...
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 17: Nobody Breaks You
What a long a very beautiful episode! All the lose knots were strengthen! Russel the gigachad! Oh definitely loved what Olivia did with the bad students
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wheels
LORD HAVE MERCY!! Olivia's glorious ass right at the start what a good freaking 'beach' episode!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 15: Second Chance
Beautiful, really loving the vibes Russ and Ruby have, i sense something in Ruby...as for Candy, damn that was cold. Can't wait to see what's in store for lily and shayna... lovely chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 14: Unintended
OH MY GAWD! WHAT A ROLLERCOASTER OF EMOTIONS!
From Sophia finally being honest with herself and what she feels about Lola.
To the hottest and most beautiful scene for Olivia and Allen to bond!! This was art!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 13: Always Summer
MY POOR OLIVIA! hope she gets better soon.
It's fun too see the other's day too, Lola's sleepover was... eventful DAMN and poor Russel haha he needs to adapt to ruby pronto
[Report This]Date: July 16 2025 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Peaceful Life
Glad to see you returning to the site!
Author's Response:
yes! thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 11 2025 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 15: Second Chance
Excellent story
Author's Response:
thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 10 2025 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 15: Second Chance
Awesome !!!!! Ruby was perfect this chapter especially during the bath scene heheh
candy is doing gods work of being the V(ore) girl of the story lol
Kaitlyn has a choice to make it seems
Olivia and Lily trying to get Shayna back in school absolutely love that
overall get stuff
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Glad you're having fun!
Ruby is my ideal athletic giantess, want her to rough me up and every tinies too.
Candy just can't help it...
Kaitlyn def needs to find something to solve every obstacle she had in mind...
Lily's part was surprisingly challenging to write since there's a lot on the line between her and Shayna and I wanna get it right for them
once again, thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 10 2025 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 15: Second Chance
How dare you post a chapter right as I sit down to read!! xD
Jokes aside, this chapter was great. It's nice to see Lola and her tinies finally putting together that city for real. Allen and Sophia's banter about it was fun too lol.
Yesss more Candy! I love how she fits into the story, as one of the only unrepentantly cruel characters. It'll be interesting to see if she ever gets caught, and what Lola and friends would think of her. Plus where she might end up going with Fairy.
Speaking of cruel, do I sense a spark of jealousy in Kaitlyn? The way you described her feelings almost made it sound like she'll have to 'do something' about Lola's tinies >:)
I'll be interesting to see if she takes those two she found to Lola, or keeps them for herself. Eager to see where that goes.
Ruby and Russel continue to be fun. I'm a bit of a sucker for tinies that manage to overpower bigs - in some manner of speaking, anyway. And the cheater's punishment was a great touch. (Also, poor Jennifer. Girl can't catch a break xD)
Shayna's motivation proves interesting. And believable, too. I'd probably be upset too if I was in a similar circumstance, but was overlooked just cause I wasn't a tiny. And pure-hearted Lily was a treat, too.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey! My timing is perfect then! XD
The paradise must be done! Lola only wants what's best for her tinies!
Candy... addiction is such a slippery slope, isn't it?
Kaitlyn for sure needs to find a way, how would she do that presented by such circumstances?
Like in many things, strong muscle isn't enough; it's all about the strong heart that could conquer many things... and Jennifer's just too weak XD
writing Lily's stuff, despite her character being much lighter, proved to be surprisingly quite challenging for me because of her complicated mind inside and outside. I just hope I could do her character justice.
thank you very much! glad you're having fun reading this mess of a size! XD
[Report This]Date: March 02 2025 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 14: Unintended
This was a really sweet chapter. Love to get some more Lola action.
Sophia's going through an interesting time. Between being Lola's favourite tiny, and Allen and Olivia seeming like things might start to happen between them, it'll be interesting to see where Sophia ends up by the end.
Speaking of, it was fun to see Olivia indulge a little in playfulness. The apple doesn't fall very far from the tree, it seems haha. She was really sweet this chapter, and her feeling that the end that no matter how stressful things got, she'd always have a 'shelter' from it all, back home with the tinies, was a really great touch. Wonderfully done.
Can't wait to see where Candy and Fairy end up. Seems like Fairy might be a little more into it than Candy might expect. Really looking forward to more of that.
Great job, as always!
P.S. If you ever hypothetically do a dream sequence with shrunken Lola, I just had the thought that She might still be physically bigger than Lily, even at tiny size. Could be a target for Lola to lord her size over, even at shrunken size.
Just a thought >:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words once again!
Sophia and her complicated mind... and Olivia slowly regaining her confidence as a caretaker. Candy have her taste and Fairy have her experience!
AND YOU ALSO HAUNTING ME HERE WITH THAT?? T-T
thank you!
[Report This]Date: February 24 2025 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 14: Unintended
Lovely as usual! its great to see Olivia slowly coming out of her shell more and the other background plots slowly nearing to reach the surface.
I think with Lola it'd be fun to challenge her methodology at some point, one day she's going to run into a tiny she simply can't bully/overbear into submission and I really don't know how she'd handle that.
Like she loves her control and the fun that comes with it but she's going to at some point hurt people she deep down cares for given how she intentionally overlooks them at times.
Can't wait to see read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
The giant mom need her own fun too of course!
Actions have consequences, as they say... Lola is still young and there's still so much for her to learn.
Stay tuned, hope you enjoyed what's coming!