[Report This]Date: February 07 2026 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Peaceful Life
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
[Report This]Date: January 18 2026 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 25: Queen of Her World, Part 3
Amazing chapter! Loved all the little side plots going on as well! Really cool to see the movie night scene here too! Even the seating placements were fitting here.
But my favorite scene was Lola’s punishment for Allen. Damn! That was hot! I’m not sure if that was based off my suggestion or not, but I was impressed! Being trapped inside a MILF’s panties with no way to escape is sexy! I do wish it was a little longer though, but still, I reread that part multiple times!
And the way that he was muffled too was great! Part of me wished Olivia didn’t notice anything in her panties so she could wear him for the rest of the day, lol! Imagine everyone is asking where is Allen during the movie night, but he is actually with them, just under Olivia! Haha!
The conversation about relationships was pretty good too. Loved how Lola and Olivia had that moment so they could bond and have an understanding. Kinda hot how during this time, Allen was still trapped in Olivia’s panties and simply just listening to them talk.
Anyway, another great chapter! Happy new year and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
eyyyy thank you so much!
well, entrapment is always hot, and never enough for this story definitely!
[Report This]Date: January 16 2026 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 24: Queen of Her World, Part 2
GOOD LORD WHAT A WONDERFUL CHAPTER THIS WAS! GAH DAMN!.
The sneak peak of Olivia's past too?! I need more of her. As for Allen, man he is both the luckiest and unluckiest motherfucker (pun intended). I really loved how it was foreplay towards the tinies than just inserting them wherever they coul fit. Amazing work, brother!
[Report This]Date: January 16 2026 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 24: Queen of Her World, Part 2
GOOD LORD WHAT A WONDERFUL CHAPTER THIS WAS! GAH DAMN!.
The sneak peak of Olivia's past too?! I need more of her. As for Allen, man he is both the luckiest and unluckiest motherfucker (pun intended). I really loved how it was foreplay towards the tinies than just inserting them wherever they coul fit. Amazing work, brother!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2025 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 24: Queen of Her World, Part 2
Wow, I just binged this whole story and I’m impressed. The way you are able to tell a story with so many characters involved is so cool.
Olivia is my favorite character by a mile. She has that gently, yet motherly touch that is different from the other giantesses there. However, the depth of her character to reach a point where she becomes this sexual horny giantess was quite a thrill to watch.
I would love to see Olivia use Allen similar to how she used Lindsey because that dominant side of Olivia was fun to watch since it was so rare and contrasted drastically to her usual gentle demeanor.
Lola is interesting in her own way, but her character gets quite predictable after some time. It is fun to see the dynamic of a gentle and more sadistic giantess so it works to have Lola and Olivia pass tinies to each other.
Now that Lola is in control of Allen, I’m curious to see what she will do to him since we know how powerful she can be. But there is a part of me that wants to see Lola do something really crazy. Imagine she wraps Allen with tape or something that covers Allen’s face and makes him helpless and mummified. Then Lola gifts him to Olivia and tells her that it’s some random guy to be punished but Olivia doesn’t know it’s Allen. Then Olivia uses Allen as some kind of sex toy while Lola is smirking as she leaves the room or something.
Either way, I expect Lola to be creative here so I’m excited to see what’s next.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
hey, thank you very much for your review!
I guess chalk one more up for Olivia, many readers started to lean on her after some chapters lol
let's just say... yeah, Allen is in deep shit, I guess we'll see
again, thank you for your support! it means a lot
[Report This]Date: December 18 2025 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 24: Queen of Her World, Part 2
Well, I certainly couldn't wait to see what a playful Olivia would be like, and I have to say I'm not disappointed at all; the scene was very funny.
Regarding future chapters, and I think there's a good chance I'm wrong, after this ending, the first thing that came to mind was that, after Sophia's tripping him up and what Lola does to him, Allen will eventually lose faith in the shelter's residents and leave.
Very eager to see more, good job.
Author's Response:
glad you enjoyed Olivia's playful side! and yeah, Allen is certainly playing with fire, more than one
thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: November 20 2025 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 23: Queen of Her World, Part 1
It looks like things are about to get even more difficult for Allen and his friends.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2025 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 22: Statement of Rebirth
WOW JUST SUCKING WOW! ALL THE PARTS CAME TO THIS! Maya's entry...that was a lot oh my...my dearest Olivia being dominant, i can't wait to see more!!
[Report This]Date: October 26 2025 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 22: Statement of Rebirth
WOW JUST SUCKING WOW! ALL THE PARTS CAME TO THIS! Maya's entry...that was a lot oh my...my dearest Olivia being dominant, i can't wait to see more!!
[Report This]Date: October 26 2025 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 21: Dominance
Good chapter! I really loved the punishment there, curious what this Claire will bring to the table...
[Report This]Date: October 26 2025 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 20: Hope
WOOOWW! WHAT A CHAPTER!
I loved everything! Lola getting her revenge yet remembering that she is not that cruel to them, specially to Allen. Poor Maya lmao
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 19: Submission Complete
This episode man...this fucking episode godddd.
From Russel's side plot with ruby.... Olivia's sexy scene to the wrath of lola, everything was just beyond amazing. Truly one of ny favorites.
The call out to chapter one was brutal..
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 18: Revolt
Eventful chapter, very nice and serious too, Olivia's offer tho...
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 17: Nobody Breaks You
What a long a very beautiful episode! All the lose knots were strengthen! Russel the gigachad! Oh definitely loved what Olivia did with the bad students
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wheels
LORD HAVE MERCY!! Olivia's glorious ass right at the start what a good freaking 'beach' episode!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 15: Second Chance
Beautiful, really loving the vibes Russ and Ruby have, i sense something in Ruby...as for Candy, damn that was cold. Can't wait to see what's in store for lily and shayna... lovely chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 14: Unintended
OH MY GAWD! WHAT A ROLLERCOASTER OF EMOTIONS!
From Sophia finally being honest with herself and what she feels about Lola.
To the hottest and most beautiful scene for Olivia and Allen to bond!! This was art!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 13: Always Summer
MY POOR OLIVIA! hope she gets better soon.
It's fun too see the other's day too, Lola's sleepover was... eventful DAMN and poor Russel haha he needs to adapt to ruby pronto
[Report This]Date: July 16 2025 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Peaceful Life
Glad to see you returning to the site!
Author's Response:
yes! thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 11 2025 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 15: Second Chance
Excellent story
Author's Response:
thank you!