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Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2024 6:30 PM Title: Comforting each other, Loving each other

So I read all 8 chapters. And I really like the story. I really like the fact that Olive normal wasn't ginormous.

She was just tall. But could get taller for more fun if needed and go back to her more normal height. Keep up the good work. And thank you.

Reviewer: klinza Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2024 5:10 AM Title: Fighting Family

Jason is known for hating his father... That's where his scar is from. Olive is one word away form the man who hugged Mr salmon after the tape. That resulted in the deaths. Some people do strange things before they talk. And it is not your business to figure out why or diagnose the reason as it may break open a huge problem. Like all the people who died in  the grey house trying to get out. Derrick being a non verbal who convicted Anna not Hanna from the intro I have yet to see the full film. Derrick not noticing what things his demon of a brother is doing. Derrick bragging about a mansion. People screamed to get out of the grey house. If you didn't pick up on that much... You should not be treating such a complex introductory trauma with cider sex from a man in a fake suit. All the Jasons I know hate their father's. This is like opening the trauma all over again. I want Mr salmon felt with. He had the tape open your eyes. All dresses where not made equal some of them where complex to the individual. If there is a pause it's to check on the person. When you are spotted with another man obviously the thing is put on hold. The stories always depicted women in plural. To assume there where multiple people in action. When more that one puts a dress on and a fight starts it needs to be separated and sorted out. Having sex in a haze is a sure fire way to complicate everything. Then why would you need to fix an ex's house if she is having sex with fakeson? Jason's entire story makes no sense if he loves his dad. 

Who is olive this is why some people will stick to certain methods so there is no room for error. Who is Jason marrying.. confidentiality is one thing. This is totally shady... Without any checks for who may be following with the recent words 'dragged roughly into a car' bringing no alarm to the individuals of this story... 

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