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Reviewer: Giganto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2024 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7: Alice's City

Excellent story. Looking forward to reading more!



Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you keep enjoying it :)


Reviewer: Tinyscopic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2024 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: It Can't Get Worse

This is an amazing story about people trying their best to help others in a cruel world. I can't wait to see how the story continues. One question for the author, why didn't include Microputians in the story?

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the story so far. I didn't include the smaller races like Microputians and Nanoputians because I wanted to focus on and explore the four main races throughout the story, but I haven't ruled out the idea of addressing them in the future.


Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2024 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 5: Big Mom

Wanted to drop in to say I'm still reading this story and greatly looking forward to where you take it. The detail is pretty solid and I hope to see much more of it as things go on! X)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately I don't have much time, but I write whenever I can :)

Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2024 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: It Can't Get Worse

I'm a sucker for a good Swiftverse story and you have a pretty interesting setup so far. You've piqued my curiosity and I am intrigued to see where this story goes from here.

Good job with what you have so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks, bro. I really enjoyed writing every paragraph of this story, and I'm glad you liked it :)

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