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Reviewer: fleant86 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2024 12:42 PM Title: The Remnant and the Professor

Jannine indirectly saved another lilly life!



Author's Response:

Indeed!

Reviewer: fleant86 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2024 9:40 AM Title: The Remnant and the Professor

Very good story, as usual!



Author's Response:

Thanks, fleant!

Reviewer: VALOR Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2024 7:50 AM Title: The Remnant and the Professor

I loved this alternate story to the original, it's wonderful, please don't let it die, continue it. I hope the teacher and the character become friends. As a suggestion, maybe he should leave her a written thank you when she's not there yet, with the threat of what he's going to do to her if she finds him. They communicate through written messages, like a game of chess. He writes to her and looks at her from somewhere and she answers him. It would be epic. I love the world you built, it's beautiful.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Sadly, it's just a one-shot. I did it as a commission for a friend and do not have any intention of continuing it. That said, I hope to write more stories in the world of MG! I hope you'll enjoy them as much as this one

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