Date: March 03 2025 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Rebirth
Forgot to mention in my last review but it was great to find out she actually did care for Billy
Date: March 01 2025 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Rebirth
This chapter was a blast! Some great character writing and interesting new characters in Vanguard and the Maw (even if the Maw didn't do anything). Seems this chapter was the end of Gina Baker, and has me hotly anticipating what comes next now that Magnara is supercharged. Also, I'm super happy for Dr. Heinz getting his size back. Good for him! XD





Date: March 01 2025 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Rebirth
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh this chapter was fire !!!! And the new villain team sounds awesome!!!!
can’t wait to see the next chapter and the amount of destruction she’ll cause - definitely hope it involves vore, feet and other stuff but overall great plot development chapter





Date: March 01 2025 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Rebirth
Once again, you fail to disappoint! I'm excited to see where the story is heading. Though the path seems straightforward, you have surprised me before! With that said, predictable plots can still be very satisfying (often even more satisfying than those that subvert my expectations, actually). I'm looking forward to future installments.
I must particularly commend you for your dialogue. You do a great job of weaving the spoken words with the action in the story and I never once failed to follow who was speaking. You did a great job of avoiding the "he said... she said..." drivel and it really helped with the pacing of the scene. Each conversation was succinct and deliberate. Every character's unique personality came through very well. too. Even though there was relatively little action and size content in this chapter, it was extremely enjoyable regardless. I really appreciate an author that takes his time setting up scenes and stakes, rather than gratuitously flying from action scene to action scene. Great work!
Date: February 07 2025 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Confrontation
What a fun battle! I won't lie, I found myself switching sides for who I wanted to win pretty consistently. Interesting the instigator of this whole story is now dead (And that in her own way Magnara actually cared for him). And now they have her face and presumably her identity soon too. It seems the groundwork for a Magnara with nothing left to lose is underway and I'm excited to see it play out.
I'm also interested by this new trio...





Date: January 24 2025 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Confrontation
It's back! And it's great!
Good action, good dialogue, great addition.
I'll be honest... you subverted my expectations with this chapter. Twice.
With the constant talk of her "energy" being low and Zapper charging up his attack, I thought for sure that he was going to "recharge her" unintentionally with a massive attack to allow her to grow enormous and escape, but you didn't take the low-hanging fruit and I commend you for that. Great buildup of suspense while also leaving the reader surprised.
Additionally, I started to think the superheroes were actually going to capture her and she'd have to fight her way out or something, but it seems that her dear old friend did save her in the end. She's still useful to him, after all.
It will be interesting to see how Billy's death impacts her.
Overall, this is chapter is a great addition and I'm glad to see this story continuing. You had me worried for a while.
For the sake of constructive feedback, I do have one minor nitpick. Some of your adjective use could be a bit more varied. In addition to reusing some adjectives like "gargantuan" in relatively close proximity, I noticed a theme of adjectives and adverbs that aren't the best at conveying scale, like "impossibly" and "indescribable." Super minor nitpick, but they are a little out of place when you have a third person narrator. Mere mortals may be taken aback by something incredible and use these words, but an omniscient narrator can use more precise language. Super minor nitpick, but it's something to consider.
Author's Response:
Thank you for that detailed feedback! Glad you enjoyed it. I am trying to keep things interesting.
And thank you for the advice on grammar, I'll try to imporve it next time.





Date: January 24 2025 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Confrontation
Wow, I really enjoyed the superhero and supervillain feel you were able to invoke with this chapter.
I am so rooting for Magnara, of course, and the way you portray her is more of a person than a true villain.
I realize that her rescue by the other villains will give Professor Heinz more time to perfect his improvement for her superpowers.
I am super excited to see how the battle will go after she gets that!
Great job on getting me invested in the story, and I hope to see the next chapter sooner rather than later!
Cheers!
Breastclimber
Author's Response:
Thank you for such positive review! More to come.





Date: January 24 2025 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Confrontation
Holy crap this chapter was awesome absolutely love the action and chaos of it all it honestly felt like a anime, superhero movie or tv show that would have been so fun.
fantastic work dude keep it up
Author's Response:
Thank you man!





Date: December 06 2024 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Loose End
Loving this story. I hope it will continue.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I plan to continue and finish this story eventually





Date: November 17 2024 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Loose End
Let’s goooooo!!!!!! So glad this is back !!!!
Loved the characters and the superhero group
Gina unleashing hell was great.
overall great
I hope we seen some if not all the members trying to save people while facing Gina really show that there hero that we should be rooting for in the story but are also the antagonist
Gina deciding to either spare or save Billy thinking about if she loves this speck or has he run out of his use.
Billy begging and screaming for Gina to take him as her pet showing his loyalty and love for his giant goddess !
now in terms of smut I already said it but some butt action would be great, some more vore, and maybe some sweat and odor will go a is fighting the superhero’s and creating a musky environment lol
10/10 chapters!!
Date: November 03 2024 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Old Friends
I hope this isn't the end of this story! This is probably my most looked forward to story coming out right now! The descriptions you had for last chapter were amazing and the background and lore this chapter provided were fantastic! The premise too, of a retired supervillainess trying to lay low is a pretty inspired use of the superhero trope. I really hope to see this series continue and to how Gina gets out of this mess!
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you're enjoying it :)





Date: September 20 2024 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Old Friends
This story has been amazing so far really excited to see what happens next and Gina is a great character so far and also some vore action is greatly appreciated lol
maybe some butt crush next time either way great job
Author's Response:
Haha, thank you man! Glad to know you're enjoying it as much as I do! And taking note of your suggestion ;)
Date: July 24 2024 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Carnal Request
Hey, eagerly waiting for the next chapter
Author's Response:
New chapter is done. Check it out!
Date: July 09 2024 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Carnal Request
An amazing story that I hope you will continue. Want to see Gina grow that big once more
Author's Response:
Thank you! Bigger is better :D
Date: July 09 2024 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 - A Huge Mess
Very interested to see where this goes from here!
What is Gina's upper limit (if she has one)? Does her size only go in one direction?
Did her outfit grow with her because it was specially made or because she choose to grow it and if so can she take others along for the ride if she grows (or the other direction if she shrinks back to normal size with them)?
Really hope to see this continue! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for your positive feedback !
I'm planning on elaborating on the technical aspects of her powers in the next chapter :D
But long story short, she can only grow and her upper limit is not known - not even to Gina. But it's directly dependent on the amount of energy available for her to convert into growth hormones.
As for the suit, they're a little lore behind it that will also be better explained in the next chapter.





Date: July 04 2024 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Carnal Request
This is a REALLY great premise. Such a fun idea!
Author's Response:
Thanks ! New chapter is up too !