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Reviewer: McProky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2024 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting perspective!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Gunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2024 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love that style of unintentional vore you did at the end, picking through food only to accidentally eat someone you didn't want to is nice.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Was just another way to describe their carelessness around him - and provide an ending to the story.

Reviewer: FrequentlyImprobable Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2024 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is SUCH a fun narrative concept for a story like this. I know the story ended but it would be amazing to see another chapter where she rediscovers him and just toys with him, or just more stories in this format



Author's Response:

Thanks! Noted

Reviewer: DragonSnu Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2024 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this story! good stuff!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

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