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Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2024 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter. I hope you'll spend some time discussing the POV of a tiny Chase on the pizza as she eats it. Maybe contrasting one who gets chewed up with one who gets swallowed whole.


Now that Delaney knows he is suffering, she should get Alexis in on it. Alexis could be unaware that Delaney has dropped a tiny Chase in her food or her shoe, or Alexis could be convinced to try out tiny Chase insoles and find that they're amazing. Either way, he will have trouble looking his wife in the eye once she has unknowingly crushed him a few times.


Still would be great to see her sit on one of these guys too, maybe as some cushioning on her desk chair.

Reviewer: Gru66ySto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2024 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

Really great, as always. Thrilled to see what D cooks up now that she knows he’ll eventually experience it all in a way. I can envision him opting to become her slave, under the condition that she stops using and killing the clones. 

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2024 9:35 PM Title: Time for a Jog

Amazing story so far. I'd like to see religious elements woven in like real Chase starting to see Delaney as his God as he knows she wields unimaginable power over him.

Would also like to see her put him to task on her ass!

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2024 7:35 PM Title: Intro

Glad you continued the Delaney series. Let me know if you like any of these ideas:


- Delaney makes a bunch of tiny clones of him, and either uses them as pizza toppings or sprinkles on ice cream.

- Delaney could make two approximately foot sized clones, strap one to each foot, and walk around using them as human flip flops.

- Delaney could have a flip flop break, with the piece between her toes snapping, and use a tiny Chase to fix it.

- Olivia could complain that her running shoe insoles are worn out, and Delaney helpfully offers a pair of clones as replacements. Olivia is a little reluctant but once she tries it totally comes around, and now Chase is terrified for Olivia's insoles to die and give him nightmares of his wife's feet.

- Delaney sticking a tiny clone to her deodorant, applying it to her underarm, and then he is stuck there as she hits the gym.

- Delaney could coat some tiny Chase in chocolate and freeze it, giving her a chocolate covered bunny type treat except Chase is inside having his limbs bit off.

- Delaney bakes cookies where some of the chocolate chips are tiny clones.

- Delaney decides tiny Chases make a great protein supplement when she has a protein shake.

- Delaney adorns her toenails with tiny Chases, painting one onto each toenail with nail polish as little designs.

- Delaney mixes really small Chases into her lip gloss, leaving them stuck on her lips until her tongue unknowingly scoops them up throughout the day.

- Maybe a horny Delaney has her vibrator battery die on her, and decides to use a Chase clone as a replacement, causing him to wake up in the middle of the night to a nightmare of him being crushed between her legs

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