I love the level of detail in your writing, you took the time to build out scenes with sights, smells, sounds. I liked how lived in the setting felt, the characters were believable and their dynamic was cute! The actual smut portion was good, and I feel benefitted by the very domestic setup, showing us their day-to-day dynamic before shaking it up on them. 

I would definitely read more stories about these two, or in this vein of "domestic, cottage-core, spellcraft".