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Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2010 3:33 AM Title: CLASSIC SEQUELS#7: WILLY SHRINKER & THE CHOCOLATE FACTORY

 Well, timescribe (Peter) my "ideas" are on site if you care to look, but I feel I have done enough, otherwise my yarns may become rather repetitive and less exciting.

Thank you for your reply and wishes.



Author's Response: Best not to use my real name (or part of) on site. Timescribe

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 4:51 PM Title: CLASSIC SEQUELS#7: WILLY SHRINKER & THE CHOCOLATE FACTORY

Well my friend, you really need to get one of these ideas of yours up on site.
You've made many suggestions, and you're the best one to put them to prose.
Get your fans reading a new Banfield yarn.
Best wishes.

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 5:41 AM Title: CLASSIC SEQUELS#7: WILLY SHRINKER & THE CHOCOLATE FACTORY

 A very "sweet" little yarn, but as is my usual manner, I would have the girl eat her little pet as she would a chocolate and not simply swallow the fellow. Rather like one would with a chocolate liqueur. But as I say, it's your story.

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